#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Two long hours y? Update soon na... u know wat i hav become a die hard fan of ur ff... i have really started waiting eagerly for ur update than the show itself... i even wish y char in the serial b lik they r in ur ff... update soon yaat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenia123


Thanks a lot dear next update within two hours. ...With a bit twist. ...




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and with a twist... Waiting
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Originally posted by: dafla

Wow i lik the inspector nd his dialogues r jus awesum...congratulations on the new thread dear...plz plz let astha know the truth fast...



thnaks a lot dear
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Originally posted by: mmjjppss

Two long hours y? Update soon na... u know wat i hav become a die hard fan of ur ff... i have really started waiting eagerly for ur update than the show itself... i even wish y char in the serial b lik they r in ur ff... update soon yaat



So the wait is over...
Updating in a while...
thanks a lot dear...
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Part-21

Finally Astha relaxed herself into Shlok's arms knowing it was right place for her. Slowly Shlok left her hands and she moved her hands on shlok's back when he pulled her more closer...and she crushed herself completely into Shlok without speaking a word, without looking at him, as she didn't want to get her feelings overcome her. Same was with Shlok...slowly caressing her back, He placed his head over her closing his eyes... when soon sleep took over them...

In the morning, someone knocked the door...when Astha and Shlok both got up almost at the same time...Astha slowly tried to move and found herself completely caged into Shlok... Shlok moved a bit away from her and she turned her back from him.

Shlok got up and went outside giving her some space ...

After one hour, they were back to the car on the way to Mumbai but both had not shared a single word since morning...Shlok was busy in driving while Astha was looking outside continuously...

Finally Shlok decided to break the silence, he knew, they have to move ahead...either to give a new start from here or to finish this topic here...

Astha... He spoke softly...

Humm...she asked without looking at him.

Are you still angry with me, for what happened last night... I just wanted you to be fine...

I know...all she replied...

Then why? Shlok said...

What? Astha looked surprisingly at him...

Why are you not talking to me? Or there is something else bothering you?

Shlok, I don't want to talk... please leave this topic here only... a tear rolled over her face...

Seeing Shlok immediately stopped the car. He took his hand to wipe her tear...but Astha stopped her on the way and herself wiped her tear...

If there is nothing so, then why are you so sad remembering that moment?

Does it matter to you? Astha looked towards Shlok...

Astha please don't start again...either speak directly what is bothering you or stop crying...I had promised Gauri you will not cry again... Shlok was getting a bit frustrated...

That is the problem Shlok... Who gave you the right to do so last night? Neither are you my boyfriend nor my husband... How could you come so close to me?

Shlok was in too much anger, he immediately stopped the car, coming out, he pulled Atsha outside...

So I will need your permission to help you? Haan? From when? Shlok shouted in anger holding her...

I didn't say so... She whispered afraid of what he will do now...

Then what? You mean to say I was guilty...he shouted without listening... He looked at his hands. So my these hands are guilty because they touched your body... He shouted moving away... There was a cactus tree on backside...without thinking, he broke a string of that holding in his bare hands tightly...

Shlok...Astha shouted going to him. Till then all the thorns were stuck into his hands and blood was flowing from his hands...he pushed Astha away from him...

He was still shouting...my these eyes are guilty, those see you... He took the string near his eyes...

Astha ran to him held string from him and threw away... Shlok are you mad? Tumhe pta bhi hai tum kya kar rhe ho?

Aur tumhe pta hai tum kya chahti ho? He too shouted...

she held his hands in her hands bringing her near car and made him sit on passenger seat... slowly she removed all the thorns.

Shlok.. She tried to speak...but he raised his hand making her quiet...

She put bandages on his hands making him sit on passenger seat as his both hands were wounded and she started driving...

Astha tried a lot to speak with him to say sorry but he denied talking to her...

As they reached Mumbai... Astha stopped car in front of shlok's building...

He looked towards her questioningly...

Your shirt... She signaled him.. His shirt was full with blood spots...you need to change.

Without speaking anything he went to his flat followed by Astha... there he tried to open the door... but his both hands were bandaged...Astha opened the door and then opened his Almirah..She tried to take a shirt from that but he again signaled him in no... he took the shirt from almirah and tried to unbutton the shirt, he was wearing...nut due to bandages, he was not able to...Astha was looking at his trials continuously...

Finally she held shlok's hands and shrugged them away from his shirt...stop being jerk Shlok..., she started unbuttoning his shirt...and removed it...

What are you doing Astha?

Look at your stupidity. So much blood on your shirt as well as your vest...why do you get so much anger at times? She was shouting trying to remove his vest pulling from his jeans... As she held his vest to bring above his shoulder...Shlok immediately in anger pinned her to the wall nearby pushing himself to her...

Who allowed you to touch me? He shouted...

Shut up Shlok...I am helping you and I don't need your permission to touch you...got it? Astha too shouted struggling to get herself free from his arms...but he pulled her into his arms bringing her closer...why Astha? Why don't you need my permission to touch me? Am I your boyfriend or your husband? And he freed her from his arms moving away...

Shlok...she spoke surprisingly...

Why this double standard Astha? I did same last night, then I was wrong...but you are right now...first clear your mind Astha, what you want?

Saying Shlok moved out of flat saying... I am waiting in the car...

Astha got fresh as she didn't want others to know Shlok's anger and went to Shlok going to her place...

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Astha.. Gauri slapped her tightly with tears in her eyes... how dare you to leave us alone? Is Shlok everything for you and we are nothing? You know how we were dying for you here?

Astha just lowered her face...

You know, how much we missed you... Gauri was shouting...

I am sorry...Astha held her ears when Gauri moved ahead hugging her tight...never think to leave us Astha. We all are together, no matter what circumstances are...Then she moved to Varun and hugged him too... welcome back Astha and please if you want to make him suffer, don't punish us for no offense... He made a puppy face... To which Astha smiled a bit...

Welcome back Astha... Swati moved ahead to hug her... Astha too hugged her with a smile while Shlok was still angry...

By the way where were you last night? You know how much we were worried? Varun asked...

Astha looked towards Shlok but he was in no mood to speak so Astha gave them brief leaving their intimacy...

What? So you two had great adventurous night? Gauri shouted with joy looking at Shlok who was still non responsive...

Thanks God you are back. Varun smiled...by the way...he looked towards Gauri, now can I get something to eat? You know Astha... Gauri had kept us on fast, since yesterday you left...and if you don't come in next few moments, I was about to sink now...

To which Astha laughed a bit and tapped varun's face...don't worry Varun, I am back na...I will just bring something for you...saying she left for kitchen giving a look to Shlok...

Hey wait, I am coming...Gauri too ran after her...

Shlok what happened to your hands? Varun asked concerned on seeing bandages on his both hands...while Astha was in kitchen...

Shlok took a long breath and told them everything...

What? So much happened and still she thinks, you love Swati? Varun was surprised... Who will run for 200 KMs for a girl if he doesn't love her...I mean who will go so far just for a friend? Varun was surprised...

Shlok, I think, its high time, you need to tell her, how much you love her... I think our plan has failed...she is moving away from you thinking you love me... Swati too spoke...

There in the kitchen...

Astha, is everything fine? Gauri asked...

Ya, why so? Astha looked towards her...

No, Shlok is looking quite upset, since you came, is everything fine between you two? Gauri asked...

A tear rolled over Astha's eye...and she told everything to Gauri...

You are wrong Astha.. He loves you...suddenly Gauri said...

What? Astha was shocked...

No...she stammered a bit...I mean, if he doesn't love you why will he go so far with you? Saving you at everywhere, protecting you as husband everywhere. And such reaction on your opposition...

What can I do Gauri? All ways are closed for me.. Astha broke down...i am not able to control myself in his intimacy...his touch makes me move forward...I know I was wrong last night...it was not he, it was me who stepped ahead and he was to control the situation...I was frustrated on myself why could not I control my feelings and in anger, I spoke so much to him...

Astha, I think you should go and tell him at least once what you feel for him...Gauri caressed her shoulder...

No Gauri, what about Swati? Moreover, I will lose his friendship too...Astha nodded in no...

That you are already losing Astha... This frustration will take it from you... so better stand for yourself for once...just go ahead and leave everything on God... Gauri concluded...ok tea is ready... bring it...i am taking something to eat...saying Gauri left the kitchen...

Is she right? Astha thought...may be...I should tell him that I love him...

Yes, I will when I will get time in alone with him...thinking she picked the trey and went towards hall...

In hall

What are you talking about? Gauri asked Shlok...

About Astha...and happenings of yesterday... He spoke...

Ya, she told me...Shlok she thinks, you love Swati...and I tell you she will never confess in this way... It's all your mistake...you thought of making her jealous...you made her jealous but her goodness came in between... Now she is thinking if she confess you, she will break Swati's heart and lose your friendship...

Shlok, if you had told us beforehand, we could find a better way... Varun spoke...it's all your mistake...

Shlok held his head in his bandaged hands... I am sorry yaar...I could not think about it...but now no more plans...I will just go to Astha and tell her...I don't love Swati... I love her only and all this was a plan to make her confess...

When they all heard fall of a trey...

As they looked towards the voice, Astha was standing there with tears all over her face...

Astha.. Shlok was shocked to see her there...

She gave him a quite angry look and ran from there to her room ...

Shlok followed her hurriedly...

Astha... Astha, please listen to me yaar... He tried to hold her arm...

She shrugged his hand running to her room and banged the gate at his face but Shlok put his foot between the gate not letting it shut completely and entered the room...

Gauri was about to follow Shlok but Swati held his hand...not now Gauri... They need some privacy... Let's go from here...

But Astha is very upset...Gauri shouted...

Swati is right Gauri. Don't worry about Astha...now Shlok will handle everything... I think we should leave them alone...he winked at Gauri...to which Gauri too smiled and they all left from flat...

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Astha was crying badly standing in the room...

Astha please listen to me yaar... Shlok tried to talk to her...I am sorry...I made that silly plan... But I wanted to tell you at dance night. Did you listen?

Shut up Shlok... you know how much I had cried in last one month? How upset I was? And it was all your plan? And I am shocked they all helped you? Astha spoke crying...

No, Gauri and Varun didn't know, they knew just yesterday when you left... It was me and Swati only and that too due to you...because you kept saying on dance night that I love Swati, that's why I thought of this plan...now leave it and forgive me na? He held his ear moving closer to her...

Don't come to me... Astha shouted...This was just a plan? Then what was that on dance floor and in theatre? Moreover Swati is staying with you?

Nothing had happened on dance night, Swati tried to kiss me just to make me realize what I want...that was the moment when I realized Swati is nowhere in my heart...it's just you... in theater, that was just a plan to make you jealous and I swear, Swati was in hostel only...we were together only to show you ..She is just a friend who made me realize that I love you only...Shlok again tried to move ahead...

No...Astha shouted...

Enough Astha... Shlok shouted... Now no more arguments, no more explanations. I love you and that's it... I know you love me too... it's your wish you say it or not. But you are just mine... Saying he pulled Astha into his arms putting his lips on her...Astha tried to push him away but he held her strongly crushing his lips into her moving his hands on her back making her relaxed...

he slowly started sucking his lower lips making her feeling pleasure. She closed her eyes giving in wrapping her arms slowly around his neck herself moving closer converting the soft kiss into passionate one...She kissed him hard sending her tongue into his mouth, their tongues fighting a never ending battle for dominance. Every touch was like live electric wire for them when they both went restless and pulled away to get some air...

When suddenly Astha's phone beeped for message bringing them to senses...seeing her condition, she turned red ... A smile appeared on Shlok's face seeing blush on Astha's face...

Without looking into his eyes, she tried to move away but he held her waist pulling closer and placed a soft kiss on her cheek...Astha ... I love you...

She didn't reply and just placed her head on his broad chest...he wrapped his arms around back, both stood there long into each other's arms smiling ...

Shlok slowly moved his hand on her back in circles...

Astha...

Humm...she replied without picking her face from his chest...

I am waiting...he spoke softly ...

For What? She spoke innocently...

You know...he smiled knowing now it's her turn to tease him...

Astha juts smiled without replying...

Shlok moved closer to her ear and whispered huskily...you are stopping me from moving ahead...I will not... till you say...and he placed a soft kiss on her earlobe making her shiver...

She tried to move a bit away, but he pulled her again closer to him...again whispering... And I think, it was you last night who wanted this...

Astha looked into his eyes who was waiting for her reply...

But I think, all are waiting for us outside... Saying with a smile, she pushed him away going outside...



So all happy now? as i promised... Love story has started...do leave your feedback...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
so that's the twist you said😊
the start of the update is superb
didn't expect they both will argue and much to that shlok broke the string of cactus
then shlok flat scene was nice
loved the way he asked her what wrong he did?
then gauri slapped astha ... Of course she didn't take it wrong...
love their friendship
then they both telling what happened to their friends...
and astha thinking to tell her love
but didn't expect that she will get to know about shlok 's plan... So this is the twist😉
then their conversation is superb
shlok 's confession is awesome
I loved his dialogue the most

enough astha ... Shlok shouted... Now no more arguements,no more explanations.
I love you and that's it... I know you love me too... Its your wish you say it or not.
but you are just mine...

and now its astha 's turn to tease shlok
continue soon
thAnks for the pm

and can't wait to read next when the find that their friends left them alone and gone😉😆


Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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