#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 12

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

nice update

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Finally confession ho gaya...lets see ab story kya hoti hai

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
so that's the twist you said😊
the start of the update is superb
didn't expect they both will argue and much to that shlok broke the string of cactus
then shlok flat scene was nice
loved the way he asked her what wrong he did?
then gauri slapped astha ... Of course she didn't take it wrong...
love their friendship
then they both telling what happened to their friends...
and astha thinking to tell her love
but didn't expect that she will get to know about shlok 's plan... So this is the twist😉
then their conversation is superb
shlok 's confession is awesome
I loved his dialogue the most

enough astha ... Shlok shouted... Now no more arguements,no more explanations.
I love you and that's it... I know you love me too... Its your wish you say it or not.
but you are just mine...

and now its astha 's turn to tease shlok
continue soon
thAnks for the pm

and can't wait to read next when the find that their friends left them alone and gone😉😆

Originally posted by: niki795

unres ed my comment

Originally posted by: lachii

❤️☺️

Originally posted by: jeenia123

This is known as proper reading of my hard work,...
Actually Astha was not shouting because she was angry at him, she was shouting as she was frustrated on herself for not controlling her emotions and she knew, it was shlok who handled her gracefully...
Gauri slapped her..not in anger but for showing her love for Astha...they are best of buddies for them...
I didn;t want to extend this confession, no confession part more as most of people here were demanding confession and i cannot make her crying like tons as she does in show..i want her to be happy and she is happy just when shlok is with her...
Read last part, he has cleared, he will not move ahead till she confess...so i think no hot parts soon.ya sweet romance will work...
Don't worry astha is not going t tease him more... but most important is, they all will be happy...no more tears, crying...
YA, their friends have left them, may be they are planning something else for them...
just wait for next update...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

unres ed my views too dear

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Cute Proposal.

Boy: Aren't Your Legs Paining?

Girl: No Why Are You Asking?
..
... .
Boy: Because You Have Been
Running In My Mind For A Long Time...

superb update jeenia...i like shlok who control his feeling and help aastha...and aastha she is upset with herself...but not she's fault she comfortable with shlok...she is not uderstand ye sab ek normal friendship me nahi hota hai...koi nahi karta hai...but i think ki wo samajna hi nahi chahti thi and shlok's violent behavior...just scare me...usse shahid kapoor ki style me kehna chahiye "silent ho ja verna me violent ho jaunga" all that 😆 but...but... i like last part there confession...but aastha still teasing him uss ne abhi tak i love you nahi kaha hai...😉

very nice update...
Do lafz ki hai
Baat ek hi hai
Kyun darmiyaan phir ruki ruki
Keh bhi naa paayein
Reh bhi na paayein
Kyun bewajah hai, ye bebasi
Tum mein hum hain
Hum mein tum ho
Tum se hum hain
Hum se tum ho
Kismaton se milte hain do dil yahaan

Har kisi ko nahi milta
Yahan pyar zindagi mein

Khush-naseeb hain hum
Jinko hai mili
Ye bahaar zindagi mein
Har kisi ko nahi milta
Yahaan pyar zindagi mein...😛