#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

chapter 19
that was really nice.. i actually thought that they would have to spend the entire night in the lockup... but what i got was a shocking surprise... that road side dance was so sweet.. and their fights in the car was so adorable☺️

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

chapter 20
this was truly super se bhi uparrr 👏 i was thinking shlok is really enjoying him self in this situation... because he is getting to call astha his wife and she is willingly accepting it...😊 but god[here you jeenia] had another jackpot for him...he gets to spend if not entire night, but really long time with astha... that too both of them barely covering themselves☺️ and that kiss was spot on.. both of them are struggling hard to keep distance from each other😆 now really cant wait to read the next update... so post it as soon as possible😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Awesome...I had read a few chaps and then forgotten it coz was outta if..but read whole now...it was just awesome..Congo for new thread and thanx for pm waiting for new updates eagerly

Thanks a lot dear...actually I was reading my old ff is it love and I thought of inviting some old continous readers of that ff...if they want to read my new story...

So I pmed all of them...

Thanks a lot once again. ...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: pt311288
lovin it muah muah muah
nxt part soon???

Thanks a lot dear next update tomorrow. ..

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
hey jeenia congrats for the new thread dear👏 and it felt so nice to read my name at the beginning of the thread🤗 , i first thought of giving the comment for 19th chapter on the 1st thread... but i wanted to comment on your new thread so badly, so am posting it here...

Thanks a lot dear...I wrote your name because you helped me in improving myself. ...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
chapter 19
that was really nice.. i actually thought that they would have to spend the entire night in the lockup... but what i got was a shocking surprise... that road side dance was so sweet.. and their fights in the car was so adorable☺️

Thanks a lot dear actually I too thought of putting them in jail directly but that was no fun... d

So I think it was better than full night in jail

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lechu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

you know onething,iam tired of repeating

the same thing everytime,

your updates are always fabulous👏

ok...now coming to the update

again the jeenia touch👍🏼

i always respect you for raising the pure care

and love out of every awkward situations👏awsome!

the way again true love outraged lust!

"Only momentary attention of unfaithful, lustful eyes are won by a beautiful face. The kingdom of a loving heart are won and ruled only by true love, devotion and care."

beautiful dear😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
chapter 20
this was truly super se bhi uparrr 👏 i was thinking shlok is really enjoying him self in this situation... because he is getting to call astha his wife and she is willingly accepting it...😊 but god[here you jeenia] had another jackpot for him...he gets to spend if not entire night, but really long time with astha... that too both of them barely covering themselves☺️ and that kiss was spot on.. both of them are struggling hard to keep distance from each other😆 now really cant wait to read the next update... so post it as soon as possible😊

Thanks a lot dear. ...all I can say just wait for tomorrow. ..a surprise is waiting for you

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
you know onething,iam tired of repeating
the same thing everytime,
your updates are always fabulous👏
ok...now coming to the update
again the jeenia touch👍🏼
i always respect you for raising the pure care
and love out of every awkward situations👏awsome!
the way again true love outraged lust!
"Only momentary attention of unfaithful, lustful eyes are won by a beautiful face. The kingdom of a loving heart are won and ruled only by true love, devotion and care."

beautiful dear😊