#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 107

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Posted: 11 years ago

just read the updates!

i was surprised how you are getting

the exact ideas of twists😲 😲

well done...👏 👏 👏

though this update was not written

with an emotional touch..

it was really touching

the way astha as ashka stared at those pics

tears flowing through her chheks

is she your wife

"no my life"

wonderful...

this is the jeenia magic

eagerly waiting for moday...

i read teaser as well...

it was too much teasing..

hmm..thats not a new thing..

i know...😉

waiting..waiting..waiting...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
just read the updates!
i was surprised how you are getting
the exact ideas of twists😲 😲
well done...👏 👏 👏
though this update was not written
with an emotional touch..
it was really touching
the way astha as ashka stared at those pics
tears flowing through her chheks
is she your wife
"no my life"
wonderful...
this is the jeenia magic
eagerly waiting for moday...
i read teaser as well...

it was too much teasing..
hmm..thats not a new thing..
i know...😉
waiting..waiting..waiting...

Thanks a lot dear...yes that is one of my favorite lines...k...busy in doom ...can't reply long...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SaiS
Awesome Update

Thanks a lot dear

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shrenukifan
lovely update
loved it

Thanks a lot dear

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