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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awesome...loving it...the way the story is proceeding...seems interesting...update soon.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Now seriously i am loving your speed of updates 😉

chapter 3 is up 😃

superb chapter but i am really confused that why is kriya not able to tell about her profession ?

and my god sharon !!

baba rey !! the fire dragon i back 😲

and rey kriya ka BF !! 😳

future ki planning chalu 😆😉

lovely update i loved it so much

loving this FF as well ❤️

thanks for the PM

update soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

the chapter was amazing... sharon anger is simple agreeable because of
kria lost and does not look where she is had... and sharon thanked rey for bring
kriya safely home... and then rey told something to sharon about the dance
academy after which she got hyper and made a call urgent...
do continue soon and pm me

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Hainn???? yeh kya hua..??? 😲

maine jaisa jaisa is story ko leke socha tha..waisa kuch bhi nahi hua... 😆

but well intresting chappy... short yet amazing...

so Rey is here to visit academy... ahaa... it will be fun now..

looks like swayam is gonna enter now... 😃]

I loved Krisha... sooo cuteee... i've always loved them... 😃

looking forward for the upcoming chappys...

and yes.. Nile... plzzz

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Just read all the parts...

Honestly bolun toh start mein i thought kitni Saddy types story hai 😳 But third part parh k i feel this is going to be interesting 😃...

KR ki pehli meeting - Anokhi n ya do no ka fight karna toh must hai 😆...

But then Kriya Rey pe trust kar k uske sath bhi gai , which is really a good going 😉...

Alrite!! So kriya itni bhi lonely nai hai jitna mai ne socha tha...

I'm already loving Sharon's character ...

Shuru mein socha nai tha k dono inne close honge...

Last scene parh k it feels k inki mulaqt bohat jald hone wali hai 😉...

Really loving the story ❤️...

Thanks for the Pms 😊

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

nice chappy di

awesome part

loved it

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Kriya kitne din se apne ghar nhi gyi vaise??? 😛😆

Jo vapas aa ke itna sad n tensed ho rhi hai...😳

I know... old memories rushing up... she's not even in correct frame of mind... 😭

Awww... sharon... I love her too... such a sweet friend...🤗

Brownies!!! Choclate sauce!!! Meko bhi khani hai... 😆

Rofl... 1 week early?? .. itni punctuality bhi achhi nhi rey...🤣

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved the way Shar reacted seeing Kria

n den acknowldging Rey

Update Soon :)

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Ahhh

First of all a big sorry to read and reply so late.

This was a beautiful start. 👏 👏

Why Kria wanted to kill her? Thank god Rey reached their on time when she wanted to commit suicide. 😕 😕

Sharon was hell scared but she was revealed to see her here back and thanks to Rey. 😊 😊

She was shocked that Rey has reached to their college and now she is upset which is obvious no one informed her. 😛 😛

Update soon darls

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

loved d ff a lot.. just read al chaps together.. loved d way u showed kria's pain n loneliness n rey able to understand d pain... loved d way he saved kria n helped her home.. kria lost her granny n her dad left her n her mom ... feel bad for her... loved sharon.. d way she was yelling at kria for getting lost n love she has for kria.. kria stopped dancing wen her granny died... feeling bad so rey s here to direct a dance documentary n sharon s angry on d institute person for not informing abt rey's arrival to her before hand.. loved d ff.. now waiting for next chappy...