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prinum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

woow u updated so soon...
awesome update as usual...
luv dis caring nature of sharon..
den angry sharon...
luved it...
continue and pm wen wen u update...

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

baabu me will again res...

sorry.. :/

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again i say...

just love the way you showed it...

he left her at her place...

then the way he said.. u aren't alone...

awww

adorable... and the thats giving hints nah... ;)

shar was so fun lovely.. bubbly.. lively..

that was amazing.. ^_^

aee el...

rey toh pehle hi tapak gaya...

ab kya karegi sharon?? *pradyumann style*

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

I never expected you would update this sooner.. but I kinda loved it..

Well the way you depict feelings and emotions.. is commendable..

even I love Sharon.. caring, concerned.. and angry young lady :D

Ab pata nahi kaun banega Sharon ka next target.. jo bhi ho bura fasaa..

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Pasto Girl you got the skill to keep readers intact...
Loved the way..
Do try professional writing sometime...
And this one Sharon is superb..
The way Kriya reacted seeing the spot was amazing...
Woah So he is on check with Sharon's dance studio...

Me waits

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

nice update...

nd haan sorry for not commenting on the previous chappies,,,,

when I read the first part I was shocked.,,.

all the whole I was thinking it is kriyaansh nd den wen I read the cs I was confused,,..

ki kahin kriyam nahi toh swaron na ho...

par then second part cleared the confusion...

it was kriyaansh...

but Rey likes photography... Fine...

par then the third part mein loved it!!!!

sharon ka care everyhting!!!!

and sharon itna pissed off kyun????

nd the main question is y cant kria tel DAT she is a dancer...

wat is the dark past nd jab krisha noe eachother then y is sharon not asking kria to dance...

nd where is swayam...

so many questions!!;;

update soon!!!

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

this is one of the best ffs i've read.. plss update soon. waiting eagerly

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

part 2- l think kriya lost her family and same with rey too...

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

part3- loved sharon in this part...a hyper one????

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

arrey yaar..
itna chota part???
plzzz update soon as a compnsation..😛

btw, the stry is going gr8.. luvd it..❤️

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Anjori

@anjoriii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

wow di!

third chapter bhi done :) :)

gud gud :D

awesome chapter ... haayyyeee ... sometimes i find KR just so cute, without them doing anything ^_^

I totally loved the chappy

Sharon's caring side ... awww *_*

Amazing ... !!!!

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