Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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Nimie207

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Sumer's monologue was that caught my mind...She was written in Arnav's destiny...waaah!!!! Indeed...

Cant believ dat dey r married..fastest Arshi shaadi in history of Arshi fictions..i mean the bug fat Indian wedding ones...loved it...n excited for nxt...Arnav eating Khushi's halwa..kya scene hoga...!!!!

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Like really? They r not supposed to be together the first night? Awww... U spoilt it honey... I wanted to read the awkwardness n cute dialogues they wd hv said to each other ... But the next morning was hilarious !!!!!! Poor Arnav... To taste khushi's halwa!!!!!! N u stopped it here? We r in such an interesting phase of their lives... Pls update sooner... Sabr nahi Hota hai babua !!!!!!!!!!!

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mbibi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Aha aww she's cooking poor Arnav! I don't think it will be that bad...her buaji is literally watching her and telling her exactly what to do...and if it is bad, Arnav will still eat it for khushis sake..aha he'll take it like a champ!

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Penny

@penny25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

a comment to late or to soon!

but one thing i know for a fct is u're mind blowing!

TOTALLY COMPLETLY!!!

nd dis FF continues to suprise me!

plz make it a lil more long!
as everythin bout it is just AMAZIN!!!!

i just m loss at wrds at how u manage all dis??????

waitin ever so desperatly for ladoo's cookin result!

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pallavi_92

@pallavi_92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

The way you are proceeding with the story is pridictable yet

Unpridictable, every chapter has some surprise element. Unlike the

Last chapter where I found some intensity missing, this chapter is

Just perfect.The emotions, the wedding, feeling all so flow out naturally

And reflect so beautifully out of the story.

Good track.

Awesome

Keeep writing

Update soon

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xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Congratulation for the new thread:-)

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Finally they are married!!!

Loved the morning after the wedding...

It's hilarious. (Arnav's thoughts)

I loved Samar's thoughts as well..

AND the Royal blue color too..

I'm very Exited to read next chapter.

Please update soon...

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Superb chapter👏👏👏

Loved it

God I'm so happy finally arnav and khushi are married now no one can separate them

Khushi making halwa was hilarious😆 I so want to read more

It was quite sweet of arnav to select the mangalsutra and the engagement ring for khushi that to so extravagant

Everyone was so excited and happy

Poor arnav was badly sweating during the pheras that was so hilarious🤣

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jazz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Poor anav lol

Khushi bhi hamari category main ati hai to lol

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Anji

@anjidesena6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

thankyou,thankyou...so much that u updated ...
Coming to update...arnav being husband..woh...and khushi ,uski mehandi ka rang gada tha...means arnav deeply loves her.
U r such a wonderful writer.i cont stop myself frm commenting on your evry update.
Looking forward to nxt update...