Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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If you wish to read more of this story, please refer to this NOTE (it's on Thread 30 in case the link does not work).

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Edited by Anony_mous - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally I get to comment first 👏...stalking really works...n that to what a chapter...mind blowing.
Firang Raizada really 🤣 Poor Raizada not even able to save himself from her cooking...how will he save himself 😉


Bade papa getting emotional we understand,thank heavens he didn't adopt her...so considerate of Karan's feeling may be that's why he got rewarded ...



Buaji🤗 Going bonkers...who will not seeing her children together ...but buaji dulha-dhulhan ko Acela zara chodo...😉

Tombstone message 🤣

Edited by Arilip - 11 years ago
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OK!
First of all Congo Shongo for the thread No 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




And now starting with the update...do i need to say how it was? as usual fantastic, fabulous, marvelous and we got to see the cute part here..😉
And thank God u have not written the rituals in detalis..i know CSG is going to kill me for this but i dont like to read a detailed description of each rituals...but CSG, you guys got the rituals in flasback, as someone has guessed...

And your firaang Raizada? man! just loved it.
He was really acting all out of place.
He has never attended any wedding?
Chalo khair manao ki kam se kam apni shaadi main to aaye Raizada Sahab.
Poor Khushi wedding bhi, birthday bhi and upar se ek firaang husband to look after...
waise i liked the name firaang husband..😆
i just loved the way u have covered so much in just few paras...u are truly amazing..👏


Oh! so rishabh missed the wedding? as i friend he was again wrong in running away from the situation but as a heartbroken lover, i can understand this runaway...how can he see his love marrying someone else!


oh! now they are married and i m so excited😃haiii...Khushi dressed up all like a newly wed bride and making something for her "new" family! i just loved it.


But usse pehle, Writer ji that was not fair of you to keep our hero heroine away from each other on their wedding night!
i was not waiting for some intimate moments but was definitely looking for some talk between the newly wed...but you doomed my all expectations...that was really not fair..😔


And Raizada is afraid to taste what Khushi is making...well Raizada now there is no way out you have to take it all...itna bhi bura nahi hoga, Buaji was guiding her...so dont take tension give it a try..😆

bas itna hi bolna tha...now going to read the comment of tanu di and shru...shru ne is bar mujhse pehle coment kar diya😆...well you see the pic above, in that, the yellow one is bindu and the blue one is shruti...they are our never giving up soldiers...😆

Ok so read tanu di's comment and again came back running to edit the post...actually i forgot to say that update soonish...cant wait for Raizada to taste Khushi's halwa..


PS: CSG group!, guys i will not ne able to participate in the discussion owing to my assgn submission , project submission, vivas, pracs and the list goes on...for two weeks that is last two weeks of October...so sorry...






Love!!!


Edited by sphobic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread
well written update A ji
Khushi's belief about sarees and jewellery related to her previous marraige is so sad.
arnav started to throw tantrums regarding his dress and rituals.poor boy got dehradrated in the mandap
ARSHI GOT MARRIED FINALLY.sumer ji is right now arnav will learn about love and marraige.
sumerji and khushi's convo is emotional.
arshi is staying under the same roof for an year and they should not sleep in same room after marraige.
khushi getting ready for first rasoi.
arnav is thinking to escape frm her cookin.cant he see how much she is trying to cook.
hope her halwa turns good
Edited by silvia1999 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆

They got married?
I love all the characters here, even Arnav 😆 .
So RR didn't come to the wedding? Of course I didn't expect anything else from him.
So Arnav is ready to eat the food made by his new wife 😛
Edited by opsyellow - 11 years ago
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Wow on the first page,A do you know how tough it is to get on the first page of your update? This only means I am getting good at stalking you😊
Coming to the update it was amazing as usual, OMG they got married. It was really funny in the end lol!!! I think I speak for everyone reading the chapter when i say please update soon!!!!
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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naya thread bana bhi liya...
huh bataya bhi nai...



huh anyways


CONGTATULATIONS.


ab jaldi se update do..

comment on chap29-
i was laughing reading whole update...ur updates are not generally so funny..buaji as usaual at her best,offcourse she wud have biggest wedding for her childrens..
dark mehndi color..hmm..wat if arnav didnt showed his felings,mehandi proved that.
poor raizada,paying price of firanginess.how u described his whole conditions was so funny.
seriusly i can imagine how sumer was feeling peaceful seeing khushi in raizada bahu attire.
karan is so right,firangi husband.wonder how he survives in delhi,indian roades ,traffic jams.etc etc..
Arnav needed her more then she needed him. But he knew Laddoo too was in safe hands now.
this shows how they both need each other,even sumer knows arnav needs khushi more but he couldnt deny arnav will be good partner for her daughter,they fit together like missing puzzle.khushi will definately bring out diamond from coal..

so risabh didnt came,i was expecting may be he could come for their friendship but its ok i guess,any human cANt bear the sight of his love marrying some one else..

Her hear fluttered for a moment without her permission as she gawked at him.

aww khushi...my heart also skipped a beat...
comeone khushi nothing is wrong in that..u have got a handsome,sexy,husky british accented ,with NY lungs fitted husband..!!!😆
u can drool over him..
he also drool over you,u didnt knew..!!


i wanted to know wat arnav felt seeing khushi in that attire ,,but offcourse he was suffering in his own misery,,,
sara maza kirkira kar diya...
sadu..

u raizada
didnt gave gift her bday gift ,seriusly i want to smack his head and order him to wear his wedding dress for whole day..
she didnt enjoyed her wedding fully as half of tym she was glaring at karAN and another half fanning you while she herself loaded with 100 kg of your khandan's jewellery and dress..and you didnt gave her a gift..
seriusly arnav need this ,buaji,sumer,karan anyone plz do this

the cake feeding scene btwm khushi -sumer was so so cute and affectionate,they were father -daughter earlier also ,but it is legal now..no one can deny that.no one can change destiny,

. And finally Khushi is his lawfully wedded wife. His wife.His lips curved up at the mere thought

Too tired and content to the bottom of his heart, he drifted into a peaceful slumber with a relieved smile on his face.
The very next morning however, he realized that the question was not how he will survive withouthis wife, it was that how will he survive with her. Literally.

finally after so much manupalations and so much dhamaka ,he got his life ,i also smiled little bit after reading this.
p,yeah right just by ,marrying her he got peaceful slumber by the days their marriage will progerss his whole life will become allpeaceful and happy.All worries,insecurities,turbulations of past willl melt away..
dark clouds are about to leave from his life,this is new beginning or may be a new birth for him.


though this marriage is really imp for khushi also but as sumer thought arnav needs her more.

morning rasoi was so amazing,
offcourse bitwaa u will get the priviledge,u didnt gave gift her na...ab bhugto
Specially a set of huge emerald OVER-excited ones, alongwith that damned smile. DARN! And so against his better judgment, he mutely nodded.

aww how sweet khushi,,go for it after all she sweated so much aur kitne pyar s specially apne pati k liye dish banayi hai usne.."special sugar free".
i think halwa will be gud ,even if it will be not then also he shud eat without uttering a word,and plz gift her something this time..sadu..!!

no your tombstone will say..-"

SADU ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
19 april 1983-18 oct 2013(as wedding was on 17 and he ate halwa next morning)😆

(i am assuming the date on which anonyji gave update)

guy who forget to give gift to her wife
on her birthday and their wedding day
and made face while eating
her first time made halwa
after sweating so much!!!!


P.S's-
1.you thrashed bindu di's nd suchi's hope of their first night..
dont do this on second night,which will be their technically first night😆.little bit romance toh chalta hai...😉

2.Does khushi here also sleeps in taekwondo poses in ff??,ooh then we will have chances of morning romances.
3.i loved the way you described their dressing especially her red and white bangles,"choora ".i love them.
4.why did you ended update their,now i m waiting for next update impatiently
bring next chapter soon.
5.i note u said you are using hindi words,where was that??
i was searching..
halwa,rasoi..bas these 2 words??



Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago
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Congooz Shongooz fr the new thread !! 😆
Dancey Dancey (For Kiddo😉😆) 😆

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Hi 😆
I should get jootas n chhapals fr late editing

But I have a class test tomorrow

So was preparing fr it

Poor Buaji she had to do soo many preparations in such a shrt time

n to top it all she also had to handle firangi nephew cum damaad's nakhras
I remember he also refused to eat anything in the Surajkund mela too

n here he is complaining about his sherwani n the havan fire

He is a bit stupidd sometimes 😆
Karan got a new bakra after La to make fun of n irritate Khushi

M a bit happy as well as sad too that Rishab didnt turn up at their wedding
Laddoo n Sumer's scene was emotional

Yayy Khushi won all the games

Buaji Y didnt u let both of them sleep together


All my n Tom Di's dreams

went down the drain

But Honeymoon is still leftt 😆

Waiting fr romance there


Khushi cooking halwa


Poor Arnav

He cant say much

n he cant run away either


Specially a set of huge emerald OVER-excited ones, alongwith that damned smile. DARN! And so against his better judgment, he mutely nodded.


But the highlight was ArShi's wedding finally took place

Nice Update Ana Ji

Now lets see what wil happen after he eats the halwa 😆


P.S. Many of might be thinking that I didnt use my monkeys today 😛
LOL I love these Racoon Emos too 😉 😆
Mood Swings 😆 😕 😆
But I m missing my Monkeys 😭 😆

Points to be discussed with CSG Team (Dunno weather I would b able to participate much or not cz of another class test on friday 😡 😭 🤢)

1. Arnav's firangi behaviour n Khushi will cope up with that 🤔
2. Rishab n his decision of not coming to the wdding ☢️🐷
3. Buaji's silly superstition n not letting Khushi sleep in Arnav's room 😡🤢
4. Halwa's reaction in Arnav's stomach after he eats it 😆😉



Edited by Barun_Addict - 11 years ago
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Unres by my Tom Di (thulasi_arshi) 😳❤️
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Shuchi chellam..u reserved for me

Aji..congrats for 16th threadwa




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Love you too Tom Di 😳
Edited by Barun_Addict - 11 years ago

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