Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Awe they r married n khushi cooked
Arnav scared hw this has turned out.
I am sure he will love it. Fabulous update

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mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

unres

So finally after all the drama, they are married... the Prince and Princess of the Raizada Mansion...Mrs Ladoo Singh Raizada and Mr Sadoo Singh Raizada...

The wedding was beautiful. and hilarious. I could picture Arnav all uncomfortable and Karan laughing at his expense.

The last Halwa making scene was hilarious. can't wait for the continuation...Almost want to see Arnav's face as he is made to taste the Halwa. But why do I feel that he will be pleasantly surprised.. After all , Khushi ne banaaya hai, toh Arnav ko ahccha lagega... haina!!!

But here what I really like about the story... it is so realistic.

Arnav wasn't all of a sudden dying to be with her. He was OK with spending the night away from her.

And Khushi's first thoughts at each point are about how she is now a permanent part of the house, the Raizada family, of her Bade Papa's life... Arnav comes next. Which is only natural. She is not in love with him. So it would be unreal to expect a sudden change the second they got married...

Now I will be eagerly waiting to see their feelings for each other grow and turn into love.

The highlight of this chapter;

Sitting idly on the dining table sipping his coffee, he mused what his tombstone would say. He tried, but finally had to eat the halwa cooked by his bride?

I laughed out loud... and those lines actually rhyme!

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

unres!

😃
it was the best update i have read so far. so hilarious, i was having a hard time controlling my giggles and laughter all the while reading it. it was lovely Anon... loved it some more than usual.

Buaji and her antics!!!
she is a drama queen. no doubt, her Titaliya is also one. seriously she is the super excited soul here and a bundle of hyper nerves. through her eyes we can seriously imagine the discomfort level of Arnav bitwa. u have made me doubled up with laughter a certain places A... every part of the update was to cherish for.❤️ She is so naughty and childlike at some places--- she grinned secretly when she saw the mehendi color to be darkened, and the way she described Arnav's facial expression when he was asked to apply mehendi on his palms and also haldi!!! every description was so funny but i loved her emotions behind that. She is a genuine lady who loves her Titaliya and Arnav bitwa to supreme heights.

then Sumer.-- he is a mature character and he understands things far more clear than anyone. i loved his character since the beginning. how very easily he sorted out so many problems at one go. his sister in her super excited state was least bothered about the comfort level for her loveable kids. and he has every reason to feel funny about the scene unfolding in front of his eyes...😆
the description about Arnav's, Khushi and Karan's condition is sooo funny.😆 hahahaha... enjoyed the description thoroughly...⭐️

i loved the 3rd para of Sumer's musings. it was so apt for a father to feel the emotions that u have so beautifully described here.!!!❤️

then comes khushi's musings. well, she deserved to be happy. and why not??? she has every reason to be so. it is indeed a big day of her life. but like Khushi i too was disappointed a bit when Rishabh didn't turned up for the wedding, but of course he was least expected to... he was suffering from heartbreak and no one is expected to recover in such a short duration.
then the revelation of Arnav attending the lone big fat indian wedding that too only his was indeed some shock to Khushi...😲 and the last one that he was came to India to attend was Khushi's only which never happened. khushi is so lovely, i simply adore her. her innocence is her main attraction. 😊

and oh--- so we have a b'day celebration too... a Birthday Cake!!! uffo, and here i was waiting for some action!!! and also a bit of pre-wedding romance... haye, sahi hai-- sapno ki duniya me rehna hi accha hota hai...!!!! koi nahi, kavi to kiss *AHEM* karega Arnav, tab sapna pura ho jayega!!! i would just wait for that... am waiting Anon...

and the convo of Sumer and Khushi---- 'Now you are actually my father, hai naa?'
oh i love this dialogue too much...

Arnav's mussings.
seriously why had Buaji not thought about the same thing as Arnav?? for an entire year almost he and Khushi have stayed in a separate wing alone but she never checked and suddenly she don't have faith on them... this is a hilarious situation. no doubt Arnav is having a funny moment thinking about that.

then the morning after wedding😃😆
Anon i keep wondering is this a funny wedding. i mean all are appearing such cartoon characters... each and every reaction of Arnav is so funny... i never thought i would laugh so much while reading Arnav's mussing. he is supposed to be a serious one but the way u have presented it is like 🤣

the way the halwa is described here, i actually feel pity for Arnav... And Khushi's culliniary skills are so disastrous--- hahaha🤣 how can he eat it, bechara Arnav...

the last line--- Sitting idly on the dining table sipping his coffee, he mused what his tombstone would say. He tried, but finally had to eat the halwa cooked by his bride?

he is Hindu na?? or really a firangi??? he has some serious issues regarding his identity..?

all in all, i enjoyed it to the hilt. i just wish, Arnav doesn't face any critical health issues -- to be specific doesn't face stomach disease, after eating the halwa prepared by his sunshine -- his wife..😆

waiting for the next update Anon... to know Arnav's condition!!!😃 and also how he will live with his wife-- khushi

Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago

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mandeep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

fantastic update dear :)

superb :)

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

That was so freaking hilarious...I was dying of laughing. The firangi Raizada is finally married. And of course the wedded bliss begins by abstinence and first rasoi by Laddoo...lol. Loved the big fat Indian wedding that Buaji put on.

Seriously though, Sumer's reflection was very thought provoking that Khushi is the stronger one. she had the staying power, the never give up attitude and above all, the gift for building relationships and being happy. She is like a ray of sunlight, because she has not been damaged psychologically despite being physically handicapped. However, that is her achilles heel, her one weakness that gets this girl down and makes her think she is lacking.

Arnav on the other hand will take care of her, be responsible and above all, protect her from the outside world and interestingly enough, her handicap is not even noticed by him...which already makes him the perfect partner for her. How will he let her come into his personal space...a heaven he has preserved where he can be solitary...specially due to the nightmares...or will his attraction overcome any such inhibitions.

Will she think any attempt on his part to preserve his space as a rebuff or a reflection on her attraction..

It was also heartbreaking to know that in all his years, he has not been to any indian wedding or was it any wedding..he has had such a singularly joyless existence. I am so glad he has found his family now.

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago