Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 6

Kashmi, You have beautifully penend the entire patch up scene with each and every emotion being given adequate importance and portrayed in the manner we all had wanted it to be. All I can do is thank you for sharing this womderful OS with us. Becuase you wouldnt have done this we wouldnt have come across such a deeply expressed perception of Swaron.
Thanks!!

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Kashmi, You have beautifully penend the entire patch up scene with each and every emotion being given adequate importance and portrayed in the manner we all had wanted it to be. All I can do is thank you for sharing this womderful OS with us. Becuase you wouldnt have done this we wouldnt have come across such a deeply expressed perception of Swaron.


Thanks!!

Anytime shenz..🤗. Everyone in the forum was pretty depressed what with thursday and friday's episodes so thought of writing a romantic and light OS..😊.
I'm glad you liked my work..😊.

Beautifully written dear...loved loved loved the way u portrayed..Sharon in laila mode..those roses and chocolates as gift to Swayam..her urge to make everything perfect for him...breaking into his house through window...cleaning his messed up room...decorating the room according to his taste and getting ready to get back her Swayam...i loved the way u took care of the minute details...how she made him feel special...swayam's POV was adorable...how he was being possessive about the gifts...

The final conversation was amazing ...loved the honesty in her confession..amazingly written...you are surely a natural writer 😊..plz do write more dear😳

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Beautifully written dear...loved loved loved the way u portrayed..Sharon in laila mode..those roses and chocolates as gift to Swayam..her urge to make everything perfect for him...breaking into his house through window...cleaning his messed up room...decorating the room according to his taste and getting ready to get back her Swayam...i loved the way u took care of the minute details...how she made him feel special...swayam's POV was adorable...how he was being possessive about the gifts...

The final conversation was amazing ...loved the honesty in her confession..amazingly written...you are surely a natural writer 😊..plz do write more dear😳

Thank you for your wonderful comment deepika..🤗. I'm glad you liked my work.. Thank you soo much for the appreciation..😊. You'll surely be getting to read a work of mine very soon I'll send you the link when its ready..😊.

Originally posted by: nkss

just beautiful..your writing style is superb..

loved swayams POV..u are an awesome writer..

do write more😃

P.S. thanks for the PM and sorry for the late reply

Thank you nishi..🤗.
I'll surely be writing more..😃.

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Awesome..Its just OOsum one shot..Full of sweetness,romance,emotions with such a unique concept as well as write up..Honestly, i really liked ur concept to make sharon realise about her love for swayam...Whole story plot was damm interesting..(Reader ko bandh ke rakhta hai..)loved the way u came with a new idea of confession..Its really feels great to read confession from sharon herself..And the way u wrote dialouges is just commendable..SwaRon individual POV was just amazing..I really loved swayam POV...And last confession part was too too adorable to read..Each and every emotions are beautifully potrayed and it was pour blissfull work..Seriously if it is ur first chance in writing,Then i advise do write more n more..Becoz u have different n such a unique talent of writing..Keep it up Buddy..

Thanx for PM and sorry for being late here..As i am not active reader now a days..But i really enjoyed ur work..


Prateek

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

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story plot was damm interesting..(Reader ko bandh ke rakhta hai..)loved the way u came with a new idea
of confession..Its really feels great to read confession from sharon
herself..</font></font>And the way u wrote dialouges is just commendable..SwaRon individual POV was just amazing..I really loved swayam POV...And last confession part was too too adorable to read..Each and every emotions are beautifully potrayed and it was pour blissfull work..</font></font><font color="#990000"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#990000"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Seriously
if it is ur first chance in writing,Then i advise do write more n
more..Becoz u have different n such a unique talent of writing..</font></font>Keep it up Buddy..

Thanx for PM and sorry for being late here..As i am not active reader now a days..But i really enjoyed ur work..


Prateek
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Hey prateek thank you so so so much dear for such an in depth analysis of my work. I'm glad you liked my work & appreciating my writing style..😃 This is my second attempt @ writing..😊.
You'll surely get to read many more of my works coz the writing bug has bitten me and its quite bad..😆. Soo yess I'm gonna continue writing..

Hey as said i m here at my night reading and commenting on ur Work
Part 1
I like the dream 😳
They in each other embrace awww
Then sharon wanting him back n thinking of advice was cute
I like the gifts she got
N swayam lol he was funny he got on the table 🤣
Sharon said to taani that she can call her bhabhu thats so sweet 😃
Loved it
N swayam knew it was from sharon
Majnu knows everything about his siren 😳
She cleaned her room like future wife 😉
Now going to read next part
Liked this one as usual 😊

Part 2 comment is also unres
Please hv a look
N sowwy for being late
Do write more 😊