Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 10

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

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unres

i m sorry tat i took so long to comment in tis ss

but i luved it

wat a come back update

i must say tis is one of ur brilliant write up's

i luved luved luved sharon's pov

sharon ke antics were impressive

majnu ke pyaar meih pagal laila pipe bhi charh gayi 😆

issey kehetey 21st century ki girl

the porton tat stole the show was definitely

the emotional outburst of sharon

her confession to swayam

n her kneeling down n proposing him

i luv it when you add a lil bit of teasing in romance

it just spices up the whole story

n tat passionate kiss☺️

was a perfect ending to this beautiful chapter

all in all a very bewhitching read🤗

do write more

looking forward to ur write up's

Thanks soo much for your lovely comment rose it really made me happy am glad you like my work..😊.
I like the teasing too so I love writing a naughty Swayam and a shy Sharon a good combo for me..😉.
Thank you for reading and commenting on this one..😊

Originally posted by: -spongy-

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Thank you..😊

Originally posted by: nancynnv

Dear
kashmi di,🤗

Read
all the three parts together...n it was a treat!

To
do so!!...it was so KHUBHSURAT😳

Now
starting frm the start...where Sharon n swayam r sitting side by side...sharon's
head on swayam's chest !hayee...❤️

This
made me smile at the start only n trust me the smile just widened further on
reading!😃

Actually
i m happy in a way that i read the ss late...

This
s because i could get the joy n fun of reading everything in one go na !😛

Omg
!then Sharon's plan i tharally enjoyed it!⭐️

Sharon's
laila roop was too cool!

Be
it chocolates flowers or cleaning swayam's
room...but the best was to climb the pipe to reach swayam's room!

Poor
girl sachi pyaar hai kya kya karna padhta hai😆

U knw
di aapne jo swayam ke room ka ambience banvaya na Sharon se yoh kuch zada hei
romantic tha ! hayee i myself blushed reading it !😳😳

N then
the second part !

Loved
it even more the confession was so beautifully penned!

Best
part was that it was swaronish n i could easily relate to it!

Passoniate
swaron ! i cant say anything on this di ! actually i m still in that swaron world!
The hugs the kisses all made he feel so happy to read it because aaj kal swaron
ke halat toh u knw na :/

The
last part sharon's pov was just a cherry on the top!

Actually
thank u shilpa di to force kashmi di chalo iss bahane hume bhi itna amazing
work padhne ko mila !

I just
loved it!

All
the things were so prefect di be it ur writing skill or ur imagination or the
pace of the story all were awesomely right !!!

Thank
u di for such a marvellous peice of writing👏

Love,

Namu
!

😊

Namu my lil sissy I absolutely love you for such a beautiful and lovely comment and such an in depth analysis of my work..🤗. Thank you very very very much for reading my work and commenting on it..
Love,
Ur di..🤗

Originally posted by: nature2

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Thank so much neeraj..😊