Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Wow girl!!!

You nailed it👏

The way you penned down each and every emotion was just marvellous

I'm so so so impressed because with each update and write-up you turning into a great writer

Way to go Kashmi👍🏼

You should write more often ya😃

Thanx tannu so much..😃.
I'm really really happy with the kind of appreciation I'm getting from you all.. I'm glad you liked my write up so much.. I'm really elated that I could atleast maybe put a smile on the faces of swaron fans for atleast a minute o so..😊

it was good

Originally posted by: 8085548022

it was good

nice written

I loved Sharon's pov

thanks for writing it

it was fab

thanks for the pm

do continue soon

Hey meenal thank you so much for the comment..😊.
I'm glad you liked sharon's POV..😃.

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

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sorry i guess i have not read dis SS before...will read all 3 parts and den comment together...😊

finally i finished reading all three parts...😃

kashmi all d aprts were simply amazing...i loved it...😊

Sharon all tactics to get swayam back...bechari pipe pe bhi chad gayi...sachme pyaar mai kya kaya karna padta hai...😆

den her gifts..chocolates and red roses...and swaym was not willing to share it with anyone dat was cute...😳

sharon all efforts to decorate d house...trying her best to make him feel special...was defined perfectly...😃

and den swaym reaction on dis...becharene expect nahi kiya sharon uske liye ye sabh kargi...😳

den finally der patch up...😃swayam kafi naughty hai..😳

all together it was sweet...cute and romantic..😳

Ahhh divu thanks so much for your comment gal I loved it.. I'm happy you liked this OS..😊
And yeaa pyaar main insaan ko bahut se papad belne padte hai aur humaari diva ne bhi bele to get the love of her life back..😛

I am grinning after reading this, especially the proposal. I so loved it.

The emotions and feelings so beautifully described.

They were pure bliss to read. So simply penned.

I loved the way you executed the kiss.

Originally posted by: -shenz-

I am grinning after reading this, especially the proposal. I so loved it.




The emotions and feelings so beautifully described.




They were pure bliss to read. So simply penned.




I loved the way you executed the kiss.

Thank you so much shenz..🤗.

How did I miss this?? :O RESERVE! Will unres on this very soon :) :)

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

How did I miss this?? :O RESERVE! Will unres on this very soon :) :)

Sure unres soon I'll be waiting for your comment mihi..😊

Read but too lazy to comment 😆 Will get back to it soon.