Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update😊

beautifully penned

Loved the way they cleared their misunderstanding

Description was very nice

Thank you sooo much for ur comment kri I'm happy you liked it..😃.

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Woah woah woah!!!
Kashmi that was OUTSTANDING 👏
I loved every bit of it!!!
You actually penned down the emotion so beautifully that I was just grinning throughout
Great going
Would love to read more from you 😛

P.S thanks for the PM

Hehe I'm glad mere os ne tujhe smile karwaya itna..😊.
Thank you so much tannu for your comment I love reading it..😊.

Originally posted by: 8085548022

it was so good

I LOVED it

especially I loved it because it was from swayam's pro

Sharon going on her knees and proposing swayam

something unexpected

thanks for the pm

Hey thank you soo much for the comment..
Yesss I wanted to bring that unexpected element in here aur sharon ke paas kuch hatke karwaana tha to woo swayam back I'm glad you liked it..😃.

@ shilpa swaron tension mat le yaara abhi naraaz hai swayam sharon se but sharon will win him over and will woo him back tabhi toh definitely lega saare gifts sharon ke uske paas se..😊.
I have scrapped you my other os link..😊.

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

@ shilpa swaron tension mat le yaara abhi naraaz hai swayam sharon se but sharon will win him over and will woo him back tabhi toh definitely lega saare gifts sharon ke uske paas se..😊.
I have scrapped you my other os link..😊.

Super duper amazing..

Originally posted by: -spongy-

Super duper amazing..

your such an amazing writer👏

it was fabulous...

it was simply gorgeous and the way you wrote it was splendid

thanks for the PM

please do write more

Thank you for the appreciation isha..🤗. I'm glad tujhe pasand aaya..😊.
Ul surely be reading one more of my work very soon I'll send you the pm when its completely ready..😃.

This OS was really a beautiful one!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: Tanhaforever4

It was beautifully penned down! 👏
Awsome os! ⭐️

Thank you so much dear..😊.

Originally posted by: HSFA

This OS was really a beautiful one!! 👏👏

Loved it to the core<3

The way Sharon arranged everything and the urge in her to get Swayam back was beautifully described. I loved both of their Pov'S and would love to read Sharon's on the second part as well.

Keep writing dear as you are immensely talented :)

Fatima.

Thank you soo much fatima..🤗
I'm thinking of posting sharon's part..😊.
Thank you for your appreciation..😃.