Swaron Os- Back to us again updated part 3 on page 9 - Page 4

i finally finish read both ur parts together...
this os was wonderful and fantastic well written... loved it

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

i finally finish read both ur parts together...
this os was wonderful and fantastic well written... loved it

Thank you soo much for your valuable comment dear I'm glad you liked my work..😃.

Lovely os Kashmi

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Wow wow wow wow. .
Brilliant os. .
One master piece yaar. .
Ur an awesome writer..
Maza aa gaya yeh os padke. .
It was so fresh sweet n romantic. .
Finally dey were back n am so glad. .
I was just smiling throughout while reading both parts. .
U wrote it so brilliantly. .
Beautifully penned yaar. .
I just loved how u described their pov.s..
Loved sharon here she was just brilliant n aisa roop sharon ka i so wish i get to see her doing somethin really grand for swayam in d show. .
N swayam itna possessive dint even allow boys to touch d chocolates..
Super brilliant i simply loved it. .
Pls post Wat u wrote from sharon.s pov also i would love to read it..
Pls do post..

Hey hie shilpa thank you so so soo much for such a lovely comment dear I'm glad you liked me work and my writing style..😊.I'll see if I'll post sharon's POV..
Me too I hope mujhse bhi double grand kare kuch sharon swayam ke liye in the show..😃.
Ofcourse possessive toh hona hi hai yaha toh sirf chocolates thi show main wrapping paper or upar ka bow bhi liya tha swayam ne..😆.

Originally posted by: nidhi1998

Lovely os Kashmi

It was a lovey dovey update

I loved the proposal

Specifically

I love you truly, madly, deeply

(One directions song)

Loved the whole os

Keep writing😊

Hey thank you so much for the comment dear.. I wanted sharon to do something different and mend her relation in a hatke manner so this style of proposal..
It was just came naturally to me while I wrote the update down it described the state of sharon's heart perfectly..😊. I'm glad you liked my work.. Sure ul be seeing me come with another work very soon..😊.

Awesome update 😊

Woah woah woah!!!
Kashmi that was OUTSTANDING 👏
I loved every bit of it!!!
You actually penned down the emotion so beautifully that I was just grinning throughout
Great going
Would love to read more from you 😛

P.S thanks for the PM

it was so good

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Hey hie shilpa thank you so so soo much for such a lovely comment dear I'm glad you liked me work and my writing style..😊.I'll see if I'll post sharon's POV..
Me too I hope mujhse bhi double grand kare kuch sharon swayam ke liye in the show..😃.
Ofcourse possessive toh hona hi hai yaha toh sirf chocolates thi show main wrapping paper or upar ka bow bhi liya tha swayam ne..😆.

Ha ha ya wrapping paper n ribbon bhi Nahi choda. .
But gifts liye Nahi abhi tak n ab pata Nahi lega bhi ya Nahi..
Well dis was first of ur work which i read i guess not too sure..
Pm me links ur other works too pls..