FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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Marybarton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Sofna
Enjoyed the battle of wills 😆...They know each other so well...Shlok ..hmm...he wants to save and destroy Aastha.

NA...what part is he playing.

About update..it has set the foundation for the future...with Shlok warring betwn mind and heart..All the best Shlok!😆

The real war is yet to come. Hope you hang around to enjoy it hehehe

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Marybarton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ruby-red
that was beautifully written. loved the scene between shlok and suresh, I can just imagine Suresh's expression then, must have been hilarious.
loved how he shows astha his mehendi, so sweet.

Thanks Ruby, that is my favorite part too. It came up randomly and gave way to something more romantic 😳

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Namrutha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Basking in the ambience of a good read, felt like watching it. Eventhough I loved both chapters I reread chapter 2 especially that phone call where she hangs up on him, really wish CVS consider this as I loved it. Also loved reading his inner turmoil which is hardly shown on-air. Keep going you are really good at this.

Just curious, how many chapters are there?

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Marybarton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: namrutha
Basking in the ambience of a good read, felt like watching it. Eventhough I loved both chapters I reread chapter 2 especially that phone call where she hangs up on him, really wish CVS consider this as I loved it. Also loved reading his inner turmoil which is hardly shown on-air. Keep going you are really good at this.
Just curious, how many chapters are there?

Thank you Namrutha, you are really sweet! You know, I have this theory that CVs do fear FFs. My FFs from IPK had some lines, like "I love you dammit!" which was later seen in the show. There were a few others that made me reach the conclusion that they were read. I don't mind if CVs take from it. Other FF writers also feel the same.

I haven't decided on how many chapters there will be yet. But I am enjoying this process too much. Let's see how the readership holds. It depends on people's interest.

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dmgomg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

I just read your story. Don't really get how the title and story relate but I guess we'll find out soon :p

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Just read all the chapters now. lovd it, how it moved ahead.he is feeling much tense and worried.all the way for his feelings, for her feelings and...for revenge.lets see what next...

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

As always it is a rocking story Mary!!

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

loved the part when shlock showed the mehndi just to aastha, and was reading her every move, and its great that aastha knows him so well, yet was so unsure of his feelings for her...

loved the phone conversation when astha says its her wedding celebrations to and was confident he will wear mendhi...she kind of knows she has him wrapped around her fingers...

cant wait till next part

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neha2005

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

fab story! wonder what astha will do when she finds out!

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Exciting Title, Awesome Storyline, Flawless Writing!

But the best thing about your FF for me is the brilliantly-portrayed emotions of Shlok Agnihotri!

An indication that his ego is already being challenged by his own inner voice and he's slowly faltering in the game plan. Man, if it wasn't for NA, I think he would have blurted out the truth already! (Thank God for NA! 😆 Want to see the two of them married! 😉)

So how amazing it will be when its Astha who challenges his ego and gives him an eye for an eye?

I am so excited.