FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

nice mehndi scene.. loved the update..

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

very nice and interesting.liked it .continue and pm me when u update.

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sarah-adil84

@sarah-adil84

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Im loving the story can't wait for more :)

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mariyam rifna

@Asherkibiwi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Not at all a boring ,but an entertaining update ,i lovd it :-) i lovd shlok-suresh scene, so hillarious 🤣 and my fav scene whene he showd his hand to aastha, soo cute? Pls update d next part soon. Cant wait :-)

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aliahayse

@aliahayse

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

hi,

congratulations for your wonderful work. I do not know if you are a writer, but your story is that some of the best novels I've read so far. Especially do not stop and you continue your great work. much of IPKKND two of France. Good luck.

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Nice work..astha not knowng the ring finger ws creatively funny😃nd the the title realy hs me hookd up..cont soon😊

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Amazing!!!u have written it beautifully every scene loved it thoroughly!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!Eagerly waiting for nxt part!!!

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome update!!! Nicely written!!! Update soon!!!👏👏

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

heart never listens to logic and revenge and betrayals...Shlokie boy finally knew that...he is human afterall and I could see that finally...why do i think he will plan to stay away from her and all the more come closer and closer to her...it will be interesting to watch...

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Love your update thank you

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