FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out)

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Whoa dude you are a writer. I could actually see it happening in front of my eyes. One moment I would see a grumpy shlok and the next minute a guilty one.

Astha was her self. No actually clever than the actual one. 😆 She has felt something strange about shlok. Though Shlok in your story can't mask his Emotions. He is too easy to read.

That was a lovely update. Is NA a negative character?

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chandarani1

@chandarani1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

lovely update. enjoyed the whole engagement scene and also the inner turmoil that shlok was having. Hes feeling bad which is good becos he doesnt want to hurt her but is confused about his feeling as well. waiting to see when he will reveal his true feelings to astha? will wedding take place? pls keep updating soon!

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Hi Mary,

Pls change it to "he".

She looked like she had struck her again.

wow...I have no words; engagement & mehndi updates were superb. Ashtha freaking out at Shagai but seeing his palm with Mehndi - she's back to herself.

Shlok on the other hand, his feelings are overwhelming him...I hope he erupts after wedding...

-Sona

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Shlok is turning soft...wonder what will happen when Aastha comes to know...

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: janestone6
Whoa dude you are a writer. I could actually see it happening in front of my eyes. One moment I would see a grumpy shlok and the next minute a guilty one.
Astha was her self. No actually clever than the actual one. 😆 She has felt something strange about shlok. Though Shlok in your story can't mask his Emotions. He is too easy to read.
That was a lovely update. Is NA a negative character?

Hey, thank you so much for the complement. Great observation. I made Shlok's feelings known here because he's so secretive in the show. I want him to go through the whole gamut of feelings. On the other hand, I am sure my Astha will end up being stronger than the Astha they will portray in the soap. Enjoy!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

i loved u r arshi FF of arnav redemption

this one too is going great ...wht will be your scedule so that i can check from bookmarks

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
i loved u r arshi FF of arnav redemption
this one too is going great ...wht will be your scedule so that i can check from bookmarks

I don't have a set schedule but you can see the subject will change when it pops up on your My Post page.

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Enjoyed the battle of wills 😆...They know each other so well...Shlok ..hmm...he wants to save and destroy Aastha.

NA...what part is he playing.

About update..it has set the foundation for the future...with Shlok warring betwn mind and heart..All the best Shlok!😆

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

that was beautifully written. loved the scene between shlok and suresh, I can just imagine Suresh's expression then, must have been hilarious.

loved how he shows astha his mehendi, so sweet.

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Payal

@-iPayal-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Itna jaldi update?? me likey. 😆

I like how you use the pictures, really gives a mental picture of whats going on and that Astha actually sounds like an adult.😆

Wow, you almost made me feel bad for Shlok here, and he's not even the victim. I'm glad he's actually feeling bad and that you included some track of redemption for the slap. 😳

The mehendi scene was really cute, and awww suresh!😆

If I were in her place, I wouldn't have been able to see through this act either (Minus the slap ofcourse), his feelings seem so genuine. Can't wait to see what happens.

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