FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krushnaa3

Shlok still in love wid swati??🥺..N anjali👏🤗lookng fwd to hw astha counter attacks😈

Me too I want to see what she does
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all 3 chapters together and Wow brilliant.
Astha heartbreak was so emotional...I loved the fact that she broke her marriage bangles and Anjali's slap I really hoped it hurt.

Shlok is still unaware of what he wants, he wants a real marriage but yet still cannot let go of his pride.

Astha make him pay!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
you really are a talented writer. you give us an insight of what we try and predict will happen, feels like we r watching the show. I like the part when he asks her "do you love me".
Nice twist with Anjalis character. Although Aastha will hate Shlock i hope they still share some romantic moments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting to see how Astha would gather herself n give it back to Shlok...

Shlok will realise his folly but it maybe too late then


Very well written, please continue asap :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!!! ws d instant word tht escaped my mouth reading ths updt!!!
bang on mahhn!!!!👏👏👏
loved loved loved shlok's inner turmoil!!!!!!
oh ... badly luking 4ward to it!!1 hell interesting!!!
please updt soon!! pleaaaseee!!!
tfs btw!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssafdar

Astha heartbreak was so emotional...I loved the fact that she broke her marriage bangles and Anjali's slap I really hoped it hurt.

Astha make him pay!!!!

I agree with you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg this is heartbreaking!!!😭😭💔
Beautifully written, but soo sad😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice updet. ...
I like it...
Continue soon. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update! wonder aha astha will do now
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my so he did finally avenge his revenge...at the cost of his own future?????serves him right.Poor poor Astha...her breakdown on the most important day of her life😭Shlok boy u have an uphill task ifront of u..She has secluded herself into a shell...will be mighty task for u to break it down...Anjali u were awesome..u gave him the much needed yet too late of a punishment...wish u had done that earlier...Lovely update Mary...now the game starts and I can't wait for it to progress😊

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