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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update..
anjali commited suicide..poor soul..
arnav is all set to take revenge..
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi's mother has given all rights over her to Arnav for a price.. she has sold her off without any care of what happens to her. She is his newly acquired possession whose fate he has't decided yet or I should say what route he would take to ruin her..but I think he ultimately wants a complete break down not just physically but mentally too and that might not be possible if he just take her physically so at the last minute he has come up more devious plan as to make her fall in love with him and then break her heart and mess with her brain too at the same time.. oh dear what a complete b*****d so he is proving to be his father's son where he is expecting Khushi to be her mother's daughter. He saw an obvious sign of abuse but he has chosen to ignore the question his brain is pointing towards that what is happening in Gupta house to Khushi, at the moment he is driven by taking revenge but who is he taking a revenge from if its from Khushi's mother she does't give two hoots about her and he must know that as she has sold her to him for a price so by hurting Khushi he is not really hurting her mother in any way, what happened to him sister is no fault of Khushi.. she does't even know his sister or his family.
So he knows that Khushi feels something for him and he is going to exploit that because as she is at his mercy so what fun in just taking her against her will he wants more for his money.. full pond of flesh figuratively and literally.
He is not sure if she had been around or an innocent but I don't think that will make any difference to him because of where he is at the moment.. completely driven by revenge and grief of loosing his sister.. We will just have to wait and see what kind of villein he is going to be..what and how much he is going to manipulate Khushi.
Khushi thought herself to be in love with Arnav who obviously do not return her feelings in any way and she can see that through his behaviour and that is of a person who has absolutely no respect or concern for her.. he just wants her and has decided of have her with or without her consent or cooperation.
This is going to be quite painful to start with as Arnav comes across a person with no feelings or sensibilities and Khushi a innocent and vulnerable with no one to protect her and also a girl who has seen no love in her young life only the abuse and pain.
As I said you have started with a bang and we have to be patient for the events to unfold and for story to move forward. Written wonderfully as always but I was feeling Khushi's pain so much. Where will Shyam fit into all this is remains to be seen as you mentioned that he also wanted Khushi and the question now is will Arnav protect her from him or will hatch more if a sinister plan??
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
OMG!!! That was something...Can't describe how I am feeling... What Arnav is planning to do with Khushi???
You said you were ill and you managed to write...
Take complete rest, dear... We'll wait... and I already told you that I love to read...
Thanks for the PM.
Take good care!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊 nice update scrap me when you update next ...
i loved this chappy with cliffhanger
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice dear😊
feeling bad fr khushi
she is paying fr her mother deeds😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Khushi is sold off to Arnav. He wanted to take her rough and break her physically.
But with the marks and scars, he found another loop. That she gets abused.
Instead of worrying on that line, he uses it for his revenge.
But i don't get it, Khushi's mom is totally unfazed about this.
So what's the point of the revenge when he can't bring pain to either of the two who were the reason behind Anjali's death?

Khushi has a happy fairy tale in her mind to continue believing in the goodness. Curious if he is going to succeed in completely breaking her.

Thanks for the author note. So there will be a redemption for Arnav. Shall see how it pans out.



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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Garima sold khushi to arnav..he had seen the scars on her body..still he want to destroy her..why?
he should understand khushi is not a culprit..she herself is a victim of her mother's cruelty..
cant wait for the next part..please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
POOR POOR Khushi...
she is suffering mentally N physically...frm Arnav, frm her mother; without any fault of her.she is paying d prize 4 someone else sin. I m scare of this Arnav, who is planning 2 torture Khushi in anyway, in which she gets more pain.
PLS scrap me when u update. u r not well so take ur time 4 update..NO HURRY. GET WELL SOON...
THANKS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hope you are fine now mari take care.
Updates were superb as always...
Garima sold her to Arnav..!!
its fine i feel, if not for Arnav she would sell her to someone else probably shyam... atleast here khushi has her illusion of being with her prince charming...
poor girl feels slightest of his change in demeanor in this distraught state also...
oh Arnav, why can't he see... its useless taking revenge from khushi... her mother gives damn for her daughter the way she readily sold her and abuse her physically says it all.
will wait for updates... take your time.
thanks for pm :D

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