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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Discovered you today just by chance. Unbelievable writing! Its a mystery how I did not come across your story before. I have read dark stories before but they seem juvenile in comparison. More than the sexual exploitation, the intent is dark, driven by this dark character of Arnav intent on wreaking revenge on innocents.

The deceit will now be revealed followed by the pain. Khushi is so young & innocent, will she have the strength to take all this without getting shattered completely?

I hope you are going to continue this story...its been 9 months since the last update, have I logged in too late?

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Zunara

@zunara_ali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Wow. Great writing skills and quite a dark story. There's so much of the story to still unfold. I would love to read it further. Been a long time since you updated. Will you be continuing the story? If you are plz do reply. I would love to read the story further.

I feel so sorry for Khushi, she loves Arnav and he's just doing everything right now with the motive of revenge and Khushi's mother what a horrible woman, abusing her daughter physically and emotionally for something that's not even her fault. Again hope you continue soon :)

Edited by zunara_ali - 11 years ago