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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing buddy
i read u all stories buddies and i feel a very helpless khushi and she is always on arnav mercy but arnav destroy her completly with any mercy. i feel like crying at the end of this update how it is possible to beat u own child but garima did this brutal act and after that arnav only want to take revenge from garima and he use khushi for this purpose but little did he know that khushi is also a victim and face brutally her whole life but now she will face horror and far more brutal torure that any beating when arnav destroy her again and again and broke her soul completely and get him revenge but at the end he will get nothing but death of another little soul and person who did not see any happiness in her whole life.
i request u buddy plz don,t eand this like dark torment it take me 2 days to recover i am bit sensitive in this matter plz write some hope and love in her life and give us happy ending plzzz this time i request don,t let arnav rape her plzzz
love u
musa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hello there!! Sorry i have not commented in a while. I read the last chapter on my phone and hence was unable to post a comment - I have fat fingers!!😛
Anyways - the story seems really interesting!! So Arnav has now "bought" Khushi from her mother. He intends to 'break' her by making her fall in love with him, using her and then leaving/hurting her. That is just cruel - but very much in line with Laad Governor's style of revenge. I hope now he is going to spare her instead of raping her.
I am a little surprised that you are writing about 2 very young characters - 15 & 18 seems awfully young for some of this sexual stuff - or am just getting too old?? Its probably me!!
Can't wait to find out how the story unfolds. Although the redemption at 18 seems a little hard to digest. Most kids that age can't even relate to the word!! I have an 18 yr old son and trust me I know!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a nice update ... like it ... do update soon ... i so wanna know whats gonna happen next ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Where r u mari?
why r u not updating?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow looks like I am the very first to read it, that doest normally happens with me. Well there is always a first time for everything.

What can I say about the chapter..I had my heart in my mouth as I can take it better a Arnav who is outright nasty and in his ASR mode then I know what to expect and as I am expecting the worst anyways then whatever he does it all feels like..well what he has just done was expected so bring more on but in this one he has taken a step further by pretending and playing a game with Khushi in turning himself a fake 'prince charming' and obviously Khushi is soon going to be imagine herself to be a 'princess' as she is a innocent and naive person who wants to believe in every thing good and more so in the illusion of 'love' which I am sure she will start to feel for Arnav if she hast already started it.

Arnav just want to ruin her ad his sister was ruined and this playing a gallant hero is not easy for him because of the restriction that role puts him under, he has to pussy foot around Khushi where as in his mind he is doing something completely different and unmentionable. Even his friends know him do well to see that he is just putting it on and they are urging him on for some real action.

I know in the end he will break Khushi's heart good and proper...may be that will make her into a stronger person a to take the world on..not just be a victim all her life and come out of that phase.

But what really worrying me is apart from eventually break her heart after off course using her what else he is planning for her to break her further, will she be able to take that? I wonder. Well time will tell.

Awesome chapter. This could have been a confusing chapter had you not written the way you have Maria, Arnav's intention I can clearly see because of the way you integrated his thoughts through out the whole update, that was brilliant done.

Will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly and a bit apprehensively as I will be more relax and comfortable when he will come out with his intentions openly, lets see how long he keeps this fake courtship going.

Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing and i am scared for khushi now he will break her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like ur stories
plz add me in ur list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb updates mari...
khushi is in her dream world with her prince charming... his love... his care... his gift... *sighs*
what will happen when she'll realise its all fake..??
Arnav is having hard time playing a good lover when all he want to do is ruin her...
he gave her Anjali's pendent to keep his revenge alive, more to assure himself to not move from his resolve to break her... she does effect him... and he hate that...
loved the updates thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now what will happnwith khushi in future yr... what her mistake in all this...

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