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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Naa deepu di.. yeh lamba nahi tha... 😳

par haye haye kitna emotional tha.. just full of emotions.. right from their emotions being expressed so aptly.. everything being given detailed yet beautiful that one gets carried away with the plot.. without getting to know when did the update ended...

aap aise emotional contents laate kahan se ho.. the way you made them vent out their pain.. their guilt.. their emotions to each other.. is just so commendable.. I just cant stop adoring the fact that theres such a writer amongst us who focuses on all emotions.. that too such beaitifully... perfection.. Di aap toh chaah gaye bas...

and the last part.. compensation.. punishment.. jo bhi ho at the end of the day its a kiss.. naah.. two kisses.. uss compensation.. and punishment wale discussion se pehle hi they had one...

Just amazing.. Thats how Swaron are.. and so are you.. Out of the world.. 😊

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Superb OS
Words less to show how much i loved it
u do read like those OS

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

This os was absolutely fantastic. It was extremely well written. It was excellent! No one describes emotions and feelings better than you. How do you manage to explain and express human emotions so beautifully? There is so much depth in every sentence you write. You somehow make the characters alive through your writing. You know the way you write is a proof of how well you understand a character's feelings and emotions. its almost unbelievable. You know you may say that you write in a flow and all that,but, every word, every sentence, that you write seems totally well though out and in sync with each other. Reading your work is like looking at a picture. I can actually imagine the plot in front of my eyes when I am reading your work. You always manage to leave me awestruck.

Loads of love,

xoxo

Amrita!

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

First of all sorry for posting late
Wooowww!! I m speechless after reading this OS. Your writings are always a treat for all of us. Great job deep di👏👏👏👏
The way you show the understanding of emotions and feelings is just out of this world. Fantastic!!👏👏
I loved the way sharon turned vulnerable in love that she herself broke the nutshell which she had created around her of her insecurities and then confessed her love for Swayam and let out her feelings for him

It was just beautiful and i m speechless as there is no word in this world which defines the beauty of your writing style
I love the last line of Swayam which is:

I am not perfect Sharon...You are not perfect.. life won't be perfect every day ...we have to make it perfect with our imperfections...You and I in a moment will make it perfect ...

I can imagine Swayam saying this line to Sharon

This is the Swayam which we want CVs to show us. Palki should learn something from you Deep di
You are simply the best thumbs up for this👍🏼👍🏼

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Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

It was a very emotional and beautiful update ! 😊
loved how they cleared their MU's 😊

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

suoerb di
marvellous and sorrry for late reply

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

two updates together... :D
simply amazing di...loved it totally...
as i always u simply manage to describe emotions perfectly every time...
awesome os di... :D

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Amazing os di
so loved it
itz just perfect with each n every minor emotion
beautifully written

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

1 thing for this os.. superb splendid fantastic marvelous n brilliantly penned. u d best wen it comes to writing emotional stuff.. u showed how both swayam n sharon r feeling bad for wat they spoke n d way u showed how she felt wen she saw swayam at her window n swayam's emotions n will to get her back.. sharon going back to same place where she pushed swayam coz she felt she s not worth him n swayam breaking d glass to get in n solve everything... d comparison u gave with window glass was my god superb n i was speechless... ur every word to depict sharon's state n her out burst in telling to swayam abt her state n d way swayam said sorry for hurting her n every word every sentence showed swaron magic n their intense n passionate love.. loved it.. kiss just sealed d pain n longing for each other their unsaid words love n their destiny to b 1 soul... awesome.. finally they r together cleared their pain n MU n became 1.. finally our naughty swayam s back to always make his princess loved n taken cared of... awesome beautiful os.. as usual u brought happy n sad tears with ur writings.. hope cvs c this os n bring back our swaron soon... n give justice to scenes which need justifications n not end it blank r stretch it..

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Swathi

@swathi_swaron

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

another master piece of work from you deepu...

what should i say about this...

its really superb, awesome, fanstastic...

The sharons's pain, her guilt, her ego were very well depicted...

Loved the way how u compare the glass with their emotions..

And then the sharons and and Swayam's POV are beautifully written

awesome OS deepu

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