11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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Homeslice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Naina! We meet after a while!

Thansk for this update! Was waitign for thr PaYash part to unfold!

Locely work :)

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

what?!%**$

she is married? killed him??

can't wait to find out what payal's story is

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Omg omg . Now waiing for the flashback

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rubikjules

@rubikjules

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

I've 3 words for this update- W*F??!!!!!

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

bloody hell she wanted control because it was snatch from her what the hell did her dead husband do to her that has her so scared and what a kiss dam that was hot loved their chemistry and they are so toxic awesome update thanks for the pm

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

loved the update...payal is married??????how?when?why???? and she killed her husband too?????? now thats a twist...i like this aakash her...who is truly a raizada not some spineless creature...he is another ASR for sure..

missed arnav and khushi in this chapter...well that's obvious isn't it????hehe

cant wait to read more

continue soon

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ayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

omg!!!

payal is married!!!

my god

awsm turn..

loved d update..

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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Wow Naina,

What do I say to this chapter! Like Akash I too feel dumbfounded and speechless, sweet Miss Gupta killed her husband? But this is your story, twists and turns greet me at every interval so I won't make too many predictions yet, as more is to come, this is the only certainty I know in the chaos of emotions you evoke in me with every update!

Every character has a justified journey in this story which is why it is one of my favourite FFs you've presented a gripping literary drama here Naina which many wish to create but fail to do so. Hats off lady, what a drama!!

Manreet :) x

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mugdha1029

@mugdha1029

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#609

WOHHH...I ...I mean I...I really didn't think about this twist at all...I mean...not at all...my god...this story is becoming more and more interesting with each passing update...what the naina...you do have superb brain with superb story creating ability...wow...loved it...very much waiting for the next one...

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Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Wow, that was a dramatic update.

We've been through one relationship which has reached its sublime heights, though at breakneck speed, mostly because it was a fairly smooth path to get to the top. And that is where they will hopefully stay there despite occssionally scaring themselves that they might topple over or push one or the other teetering over the edge, but they won't; they'll pull each other back,

We're now at the start of another one. This time the climb is a bit steep and is further complicated by the fact this has to be done with one arm tied behind given the revelations that Payal has thrown at Akash. But hey, a challenge makes it more exciting.

This is a more interesting couple than the other- they're like two majestic stags, matched in their strength and power, unlike Khushi and Arnav who complement each other beautifully in a yin-yang kind of way. So let's see what they are going to do with their awareness of each other and the reality of Payal's life.
Bring it on Warrior Princess, you shine best in a battle!😃

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago