11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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tina_1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Wwooaahh
What was tht
Awesome part

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Jyothsna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

omg,payal killed her hubby!!!
Y? When? Hw?
Shocking updt.
Beautifully written.
Updt sn.

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shubhanjli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Woohah I got a shock... our sweet cute payal.. like this. Married and even killed her husband. I think it has another meaning. But I am impressed with Akash. Actually in this update he is not just akash he is Akash Singh Raizada. Tough daring handsome... I like him. But now this suspense is definitely gonna kill me. What's with Payal.

Yes it is true that just like others i love ArShi a lot. But i like PayAsh too. And i am very much interested in reading their love story as well

Thanks for pm

Edited by shubhanjli - 11 years ago

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saschades

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

ROFLMAO!!! I love it Naina! thanks for the pm

And ooowlooord the way you said it !! DAMMIT HE IS SEXY !!!

helllooo my darlings!!

Thank you all for the awesome comments on the honeymoon chapters. I have finally managed to read them all and wanted to thank you so much for sharing your thoughts - especially you guys who wrote long comments. Its YOU that keeps inspiring me to write.

As for you, yeah YOU looking around guiltily for not posting a comment...SHAME ON YOU. I trust you will rectify your behavior with this chapter.

I think I gave myself diabetes making Arnav so gorgeous inside and outside that I have people threatening to come and steal my brain so that they can print a 3D ASR for themselves! I get it girls - you love him damn it! well so do I!!!

(p.s. vaishiksg... totally get your feedback!!)

So...After all that sweet-lovely dovey mush, I needed a taste of dark... and this chapter is the result.

Did you like it?

Did you hate it?

Overwhelm me... I'm waiting.

Naina😳

Edited by warriorprincess - 14 October 2013 at 5:28am

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maina95131

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Wow...what an update. Quite a bomb u dropped there.

I am glad there is more to Payal and Akash in your story...

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

WHAT? She KILLED her husband? Oh was it an accident while she was driving the car or what? Maybe he was abusive and she hit back in self defense?

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hararnav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

wow.. nice update

didnt expect these sides of payal n akash...

am so loving this aakash...

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pmehra300

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Fantastic chapter

Loved it

It was so shocking for me that payal was married

Really unexpected

And she killed her husband god right now Im so curious to know why

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Gayuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

i just cant wait to read the whole thing!!!
Great update...
i just hope the next
one comes soon...

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: __blossom__
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Woah!😲 I was exactly like this when i finished reading this update! Ur like a writer allrounder you can write every form equally wonderfully!👏
I was scared shit scared! If i were there in place of payal i would have fainted..akash was so scary and i dont mean it in a bad way...he's got so many shades its amazing!
And she was married😲
And the last part i mean there must be more to it right cuz otherwise she would be in jail right??? Ok im freaking out but payal was so fun to read and i just cant wait to read the whole thing!!!
Great update...i just hope the next one comes soon :D

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

You are always bringing twists and turns
Payal is married? Killed her husband?
I wonder what she means by the last sentence...🤔