ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2 - Page 4

I came across first chapter and lived it and left a comment there as well and tried to work the link but I could't then I googled this amazing FF with a very sensitive subject and found this link and was very happy as I was dying of curiosity to know what happens next.

This is a very difficult subject but you have presented it very sensitively.. you are a brilliant writer.

No I don't think Khushi was at fault but she only make s mistake in reading the intentions of ASR she thought him to be against her friendship with NK but he wanted her for himself and as a very rich man he wanted her as yesterday..did't really want to seduce her in a right way in a loving way...he wanted to dominate her and wanted to have power over her... now he thinks he has got her where he wanted her at his mercy to do what and when he wants.
Khushi will have a hard time fighting him off.. unless she comes with a strategy he will carry on using her as he is utterly ruthless and heartless.
I feel so sorry for Khushi as she is only 17 and from a middle class family... Poor thing what is she going to do? Will she be able to rise above this and will she able to get ASR out of her life?
This story has really got me going and I will carry in thinking what will happen next. Still trying to get over your Fabulous style of writing.. you have created this devious persona of ASR which is reminding me of very early ASR of the show but this one is much much worse than that one.
He actually spiked Khushi's drink and said that she wanted what he did. Oh my God.
Please do continue soon. Thank you for writing this story.
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Originally posted by: MONAKARAN

I just came across this story and I am speechless. Couple of things - When I think of Arnav and Khushi I think of love and I realize that your story is not about love - you have already warned us not to expect a happy ending. This storyis more about lust and touches more upon a social issue. your Arnav is really really dark - almost to the point of being a pedophile (she is 17 and he is 28) The way he came across, it seemed it was not the first time he has preyed on a young girl - seems like a seasoned person - not sure if I like that about him. I would have probably felt better if this was a one-off case where Khushi is a bit older and that "Khushi made him do it" kind of thing. Usually such stories are followed by a redemption track - not expecting one with yours - do hope however that Khushi stands up to him and is able to walk away or better - marry NK!!!

Overall - the story is brilliantly written and a very different take from the usual love story - I am definitely in for the long haul!!! Keep them chapters coming!!!

Originally posted by: gifttag

I came across first chapter and lived it and left a comment there as well and tried to work the link but I could't then I googled this amazing FF with a very sensitive subject and found this link and was very happy as I was dying of curiosity to know what happens next.

This is a very difficult subject but you have presented it very sensitively.. you are a brilliant writer.

No I don't think Khushi was at fault but she only make s mistake in reading the intentions of ASR she thought him to be against her friendship with NK but he wanted her for himself and as a very rich man he wanted her as yesterday..did't really want to seduce her in a right way in a loving way...he wanted to dominate her and wanted to have power over her... now he thinks he has got her where he wanted her at his mercy to do what and when he wants.
Khushi will have a hard time fighting him off.. unless she comes with a strategy he will carry on using her as he is utterly ruthless and heartless.
I feel so sorry for Khushi as she is only 17 and from a middle class family... Poor thing what is she going to do? Will she be able to rise above this and will she able to get ASR out of her life?
This story has really got me going and I will carry in thinking what will happen next. Still trying to get over your Fabulous style of writing.. you have created this devious persona of ASR which is reminding me of very early ASR of the show but this one is much much worse than that one.
He actually spiked Khushi's drink and said that she wanted what he did. Oh my God.
Please do continue soon. Thank you for writing this story.
I have sent you a buddy request Please do consider to add me to your PM list.

Ho my really he is something evil real evil. How he is so heartless. Poor kid is to suffer so much. How sad he is making her like his prey. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: JCJS

Ho my really he is something evil real evil. How he is so heartless. Poor kid is to suffer so much. How sad he is making her like his prey. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

omg i really love ur ff dear

niice dear😊

how can anything worse happen to any girl ...

All this time, I thought NK can be Khushi's savior. Turns out, he was a downright cheater. So Arnav got his revenge with NK using Khushi. But Khushi was an innocent bystander. I wonder if all that Arnav told Khushi about her parents selling her to Arnav was true.