ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
so it is revenge game...poor khushi in all this...hope he will worth her and lover her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god! So poor khushi is a pawn to this game of lust between the brothers.
Anyways, is Khushi related to La?
I guess Arnav made NK fall for Khushi and want to extract a revenge.
Why do i feel that Nani and Anjali are also in this plan?
But Khushi's mom really sold her off? Poor soul..
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
ohhh god buddy u are a newbie but u write fab and this story is exceptional buddy i love it
i hate arnav, nk and la and khushi mother.
arnav use khushi ti get his revenge from nk but what is her sin that everyone use her for his or benefit han
khushi is a poor soul she is only 17 year old and she did not know completely what arnav is doing with her and why he is doing this all
khushi mother sale her to arnav for money oh god that was heart breaking who someone do this to a poor soul
arnav break her all dreams and shattered her dreams completely
he is monster
i love this story
well done
love u
musa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhakdhak22

niice dear😊

khushi mother sold her to arnav😲
nk cheated on arnav woth la😡
nk loves khushi
so arnav snatching his love


I know, twisted huh?! Thank you lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kannansangee

how can anything worse happen to any girl ...

but atleast he is not literally ripping her...
edited ...
so nk cheate with la ,so arnav is has amrked khushi as his and is showing his brother what is tit for tat .
but one thing is khushi is a mere pawn for him norhing more por girl how is she gona take every thing in ...


Exactly that my hun, thank you for reviewing and tune in for the next chap 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ashnitaa

Thats a total unexpected twist..
how can khushi's mother do this to her..
arnav is doing this for revenge..but he cant punish an inocent for his own brother's sin..
i hate nk & lavanya..
arnav's story is sad..but what he is doing is totally unfair..
feeling really bad for khushi..she has no one to help her out of this mess..
please update soon..


aww thank you so much lovely for reviewing 😳
will do very very soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: gifttag

You have left me speechless with this brilliantly written update.. as you know I have been waiting impatiently for this chapter and the wait was so worth it.. I need to catch my breath and collect my thoughts before I can think straight.

First thing Lavanya who was supposed to be Arnav's fianc cheated with his own brother NK on his own bed and he caught them red handed... by the looks of it NK knew what he was doing but what about La why did she do it? this is the incident which changed his whole out look on life, this ultimate betrayal had changed his take on relations , emotions and love.. seems like this whole incident in return turn him into this ruthless, heartless, manipulative and calculating person. But why Khushi? Is it because he believes that NK lives Khushi and want to take their friendship forward and turn into a more committed relation and Arnav wants to take ultimate revenge and give NK the taste of his own medicine as he has created or calculated and timed the scene with Khushi and now NK is standing at the same place as Arnav was in the similar situation.. in all this do I take it Khushi is just being used but it seem like he might not have any feelings for her at this point in time but he genuinely want her physically.

Khushi's mum and dad has practically sold her to him for six months in a contract for money... these things happen I know but still poor Khushi was so hurt to find this out that she could't take it and fainted but that did't stop him from putting his plans in action and this time around he is consciously seducing her or trying to get the right reaction from Khushi but even in that he has got ulterior motive... Khushi is in the situation where she is stuck at least for six months if her parents have already taken the money from him.. she can only start to fight back when all this money and contract business is out of the way unless NK offers to help which I doubt very much.

So many questions answered but some answers gave rise to more questions. This is an absolutely awesome story so very different to anything I have read before and the way you are writing it is treat.. love your wonderful style of writing and the way you are taking it forward.

Please continue soon. Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Thanks for letting me know about the update.



After some thought I just realised and have come back to edit my comment... it was said in in the update 'same tainted blood' so does that meanKhushi is some how related to Lavanya? Or did he mean the the middle class ? He also seems to have contempt for Gupta's why? Is it because of the class and the easy way he got them to surrender Khushi for financial gain?
I also felt that he still have that person alive somewhere in side him who was so excited to show the engagement ring to his sister and naani the person who got betrayed in worst possible way by his own loved ones and looking at this vulnerable and innocent Khushi that person keep threatening to come out who feel for Khushi's plight and he question's himself that what would be like if he still had the same beliefs today.
What happened to Lavanya? Where is she now? Did he ever took revenge from her as he is doing with NK?


omg!!!!! womannn!!! I absolutely love and adore your fervour for DT, my internet wasn't working so I couldn't reply back to people's awesome reviews 😉
I don't even know where to begin with you, honestly I am flabbergasted by the depth of perception always present in your reviews, and you mention the most salient of points! DAMMIT 👏 all will be revealed in chap 5 very soon though in response to your very probing questions 😃!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifsaal044

All this time, I thought NK can be Khushi's savior. Turns out, he was a downright cheater. So Arnav got his revenge with NK using Khushi. But Khushi was an innocent bystander. I wonder if all that Arnav told Khushi about her parents selling her to Arnav was true.

Also, it would seem Arnav got his revenge. What did he need the 6 months for? I guess he still had his own desires and wants.


aww thank you my lovely for reviewing DT 😳

Read on to find out more 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashw99

woah... that was royal mess mari... i didn't see it coming.
what was NK thinking taking his brothers girl in his brothers room... and lavanya is she not know whom she is messing with... well that totally justify the awaken of ruthless ASR, and when ASR strikes he strike where it hurts most, so he got NK where he wanted him exactly.
i felt really sorry for Arnav... he was so happy while talking to his di and nani and the next moment his entire world came crashing down.
only thing is why khushi??
are NK and khushi together or does he mistook them to be together.
and her parents they sold her??
will wait to know more do update soon.
brilliant update mari loved it.
thanks.


aww hello beautiful, thank you for the review I know a royal mess huh 🥱
chapter 5 will answer a lot of questions maybe... ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: archmink

Ah Arnav is giving his brother an eye for an eye and inbetween this poor Khushi had to pay
So Arnav was about to propose to Lavnya ? And NK and her cheated on him ... Lavnya must be a gold digger but how come NK do that to his own brother ?
I take as that massage NK had received from khushi's phone .. Arnav had used khushi's phone to send it to NK .. do he can come and watch them .. But she is innocent .. don't he realize ?? or will he not ?? How can he hold someone responsible who's not relate to what happen to him at all ... I know you have said that this is a dark story and you have it already planed out but ohhh plz plz tell me that he will realize what type of girl she is and will fall in love with her ... I totally love stout story
Plz plz pm me


Thank you so much for the review, honestly all you readers have totally caught me off guard with your brilliant sense of understanding but chap 5 will reveal some glaring truths and unanswered questions too 😉

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