ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2 - Page 7

Originally posted by: MONAKARAN

WOW!!! Fantastic update - you are an awesome writer!!! I have been checking religiously (several times a day) to see if you have updated. Your story has really gotten under my skin...

So I am a little confused. This is now starting to sound like a tale of revenge. So Arnav wants NK's girl because NK made out with Lavanya whom Arnav wanted to marry. But their sex was based on consent. He has no excuse forcing Khushi for that reason. If I understand correctly, Khushi is 17 and NK is 18. How old was NK when the Lavanya episode happened?? In any case Arnav should have been upset with Lavanya for betraying him and having sex with his brother - NK was probably too young anyways. Then there is the comment you made about 'Gupta blood' - so was Lavanya a Gupta too?? Is that why he is after Khushi more?? cause she is Lavanya's sister??? And the bomb about Amma offering Khushi as payment??? What is the contract about - him having access to her for 6 months??? Does he realize that she is an adopted child anyways?? Can't wait to see Khushi fight back and put an end to her misery!!!

Originally posted by: lovebarun...

wonderful update!! so arnav is for revenge from his own brother.. dear i will be very happy if you can make a khushi who is naive, who will learn from arnav how to be seductive and give it back to him as good as she gets. why should khushi be always the one to be treated badly. this n k is one big jerk.. but it is not khushi's fault that lavanya and n k cheated on arnav. so please make your khushi a stronger one even though she is weak and naive at this moment😊

Originally posted by: SilentShadow

Oh god! So poor khushi is a pawn to this game of lust between the brothers.

Anyways, is Khushi related to La?

I guess Arnav made NK fall for Khushi and want to extract a revenge.

Why do i feel that Nani and Anjali are also in this plan?

But Khushi's mom really sold her off? Poor soul..

Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: musax

ohhh god buddy u are a newbie but u write fab and this story is exceptional buddy i love it

i hate arnav, nk and la and khushi mother.

arnav use khushi ti get his revenge from nk but what is her sin that everyone use her for his or benefit han

khushi is a poor soul she is only 17 year old and she did not know completely what arnav is doing with her and why he is doing this all

khushi mother sale her to arnav for money oh god that was heart breaking who someone do this to a poor soul

arnav break her all dreams and shattered her dreams completely

he is monster

i love this story

well done

love u

musa

Originally posted by: mizzle_pizz

WOW! aren't you darn perceptive ey?!! Thank you for this awesome review, here what I am going to reveal hun, pedophilia doesn't necessarily need apply only to men, there are women out there too who prey on young boys and vice versa... Chap 5 will reveal a lot and still leave things open to interpretation... 😛