ARSHI - Dark Torment - Chapter 2 Part 2

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Intresting concept..
you should continue..
can u please pm me?

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

INTERESTING...BUT DARK...POOR Khushi...

i m very curious 2 know how ur story take shape frm here.

i like dark Arnav..so PLS continue...& PM me when u update...THANKS...

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songcouple

@songcouple

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i like your writing style.

its gripping...

i would like to read further ...

just inform when you are updating .

i like your work

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey i just came across this and i've read the chapters ... its very interesting ... and i like to read a Dark Arnav ... so if possible , do continue and PLZ do PM me your work ...

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sweetvanie
Hey i just came across this and i've read the chapters ... its very interesting ... and i like to read a Dark Arnav ... so if possible , do continue and PLZ do PM me your work ...

Hey hun, thank you for reviewing DT, i like writing a VERY dark Arnav 😉 and will probably either keep DT as it is, or further continue it depending on people's reaction... 😕

continue reviewing/liking and giving me your honest opinions on my work! 😃

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

oh... he is so dangerous!!!
i am really feeling sorry for her.
just read both the parts beautifully written.
will wait to know more... do you pm, then please pm me when you update.
thanks : )

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Brilliant updates...
wow i earned this chapter thanks.
hmm now about updates...
poor khushi... only if she would have listen to her mums before the storm striked her badly.
feeling really sorry for her true its not for her to fight ASR.
The scene at breakfast brilliant penned, the way he is all pride of his deed, ogling her and there offering her lift.
and she was all tormented by him she dreaded giving hug to her school mate Nk also.
Loved that at last she made some effort to refuse him.
this was superb waiting to know more update soon.
thanks

Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago