The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

And my heart is jumping in anticipation, terapidation, excitement and fear at the teaser. *insert suitable emoticon*

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Deepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

I was inactive on IF for few weeks, So read the last two update just now. And I've truly fallen in love with it..❤️ The way have written it, has actually mesmerized me, as the words woven together are truly beautiful... It couldn't have been much better. I feel that I'm in a different world altogether...:)

I don't know what I feel about Arnab's visit to the courtesan. It's a mixture of anger at him, relief that he stopped and realised his mistake in time, and then again anger as he was about to follow his father's step whom he never liked for doing the same. But I liked the patient Arnab when he apologized to Khushi. Even I think Khushi is still a child and it would be much better that she transforms into a woman naturally. They will fall in love, eventually. No doubt in that...:)

I had an inkling that Pranab would start falling for Khushi but it still surprised me, nevertheless. I'm really looking forward to how their future life would turnout... Can't wait to read the next part...

Update soon..😊😊

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Loved it
He is caring
Somethings r best left with time
He didn't want her innocence to be lost as once it is it can never return

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mthara

@mthara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Wow Jenny it is going so good. I was bit skeptical in the beginning about a child marriage. Having read so far the story is beautifully developing between the two leads, I love the Arnab -he has a lot of depth in his character & hope u would be able to bring this out to the readers. For the time being character of is yet to grow.Hope she is worthy of her man- I'm waiting to see how u go about this.

Thank u for the PM

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Waiting ...tick tock tick tock...

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Hey Jen, sorry a quick comment dear for both the chapter & the teaser... Been swamped lately 😔

I adored the way Arnab tenderly extricated himself from such a delicate situation... How do you tell a child she is too young to have a child & not break her heart, especially if the person saying so happens to be her husband himself??? Sigh!

Arnab is such a thorough gentleman, he did not want to break his child-bride's heart yet managed to turn the conversation around by taking Khushi to listen to the gramophone record of the song she was reading instead... :) Her childlike enthusiasm at hearing the song playing was so infectious & sweet...

Their conversation on the couch was so endearing... Arnav clearly being able to read his wife's emotions reflected on her adorable face like a book... Her whole being seems to pivot around the acceptance from her husband... His rejection pierces her juvenile heart more than anything in the world & Arnab is absolutely a darling in making sure he does not break her heart again...

It was also amazing to see him be drawn to her blossoming beauty & curb his own desires at the sight of his alluring wife & waiting patiently for her to grow up...

These lines were clearly depicting that...

"He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time. "

And like Arnab, I too can't wait to see the grown-up Khushi, so looking forward to see their young love bloom like a Spring flower...

About the teaser...

From what I can make out it seems to me that Khushi is upset over the news that Arnab will be moving out of his father's house & living alone, & that is obviously not acceptable to his dear bride... She is angry with him for leaving her behind & going away... Poor girl, what a rotten place to be in... She surely is beginning to develop some strong emotions for her husband but being a child & being treated as one must be really frustrating for her now... Can fully understand her pain... My heartfelt sympathies for Khushi undoubtedly, what a tough place to be in...

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Ha finally Wednesday waiting very impatiently.

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fanfollower

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Half the day is over. Please update soon. I have refreshed the screen umpteen times. The green light is on too ! Waiting!

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: fanfollower
Half the day is over. Please update soon. I have refreshed the screen umpteen times. The green light is on too ! Waiting!

Wednesday just started here, where I live 😊

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