The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

part 5
excellent...
very beautiful dear...
loved it...
oh ho Pranab is falling for Khushi...
cont soon dear...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

teaser
now what did she and he do?
cont soon dear...

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Loved it
The update and the teaser
Waiting for the next part
The updates just get better and better
Continue soon
Thanx for the pm

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Brilliant! just brilliant. What I retained was this from Arnav:

He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time.

He was willing to wait for the woman in her to slowly awaken. It was just a matter of time.

Heck - even I am willing to wait from the woman in khushi to awaken. I hope we will not be having some evil sub-plots involving Pranab now - will we???

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

huh!?

why is Arnav chasing Khushi now?

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Milii

@Milii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

I just came across this FF today...

Hats off to you Jenny...

How do you manage to weave such wonderful tales?👍🏼

The subject and the way of handling it...it's not everybody's cup of tea...

And you have been fabulous in writing this tale...I was getting transported into a different world altogether!!!

You are simply AWESOME🤗

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

OMG...!!! Pranab s falling 4 her...!!
Dnt kno wats happening...
Arnav-Khushi scene was awesm...
Arnav liked her..
Nd nw waitng 4 her 2 grow up...:)
Awesm update..Cntinue soon

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Arnab n Khushi relation is taking Shape.
At least they r talking n spending some time.
Arnab beginning to like her. He is getting
Attracted to her innocence, childishness.

Pranab also developing a thing for Khushi.
Wat d...

Khushi scared n hiding from Arnab.
Wat she did now