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Hi Jenny... First thank you for the pm
Read last three chapters in one go... Your narration takes me back to the era where women had no identity per se... They were married off very young...the age difference also used to be great and men going out for pleasure was a done deal in those times... Love how you give a background to each character... Thammi is a typical representation of women in that era...
This Arnav is larger than life... Living in those times he wanted to adher to his principles and ideals... Feel happy that he took care of Khusi when she came though he has to fight battles with himself 😊
Now that he has started feeling something for thing and has decided to take things slowly...love all their interaction and the first Dhak Dhak of Khusi's heart 😛
Khusi is slowly emerging into a beautiful women ...who is unaware of her attractions and her single minded affection towards Arnav is so sweet...
Do we see trouble happening in future cos of Pranab's feelings for Khusi... Hope not
Looking forward to continuing on this journey of Khusi slowly entering womanhood with little guidance from Arnav or May be much more guidance 😃
Udne Ki Aasha
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