Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Leki
i'm gonna kill you for ending this part at such a crucial point... im not gonna comment

Arrey Leki...please don't be angry yaar. Abb Arjun aur Riya ko milane ka waqt aa gaya hai, aur aap mujhse gussa kar rahin hain?😳

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

stop buttering me... tell me when you are updating nxt part then i will decide whether to comment or not

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Leki
stop buttering me... tell me when you are updating nxt part then i will decide whether to comment or not

Aap pehle comment toh kijiye...phir bataati hoon;-)

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

It was amazing
arjun going to meet commishner
rathore and chottu finally got the clue
rathore was very angry when gupta was not confessing his crimes
shree saw riya in the footage
riya in same hotel where arjun was going to meet commishner
arjun was targetted by the shoter
but thank god riya saved him
and finally the much awaited moment came arjun saw riya
he got the biggest shock
but u end the update 😭
eagerly waiting for next part
plzzz update soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome update
omg arjun's life is in danger
feel bad for ariya both are immensely hurt
arjun's past feel bad for him
poor ladies i agree with them
i think that undercover agent ayesha met 4 months b4 is riya
cont soon

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awesome... mind blowing... u made me speechless... lovd it to bits...

it was worth waiting...

4 parts in a go...

arjun and shree's understanding...

liza and ayeha's thoughts...

rathore and chottu... rathore on the verge of exploding...

at last it was a zor ka jhatka... riya came in front of him to save him ...

shree spotting riya on the footage and informing arjun and at the same time she came in front of him...

ab zyaada late mat karna...

update soon...

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Fantastic update Rathore again went to club z for investication Poor manager and bertender Rathore ne apna gussa unpe nikala. Gupta is disgusting person. Rathore anger is well defined. Love the way how chotu and shree controled Rathore's anger Rathore and chotu are also upset about Riya's lie. Arjun's nightmare of Roshni's death is blending with Riya's death . Arjun wants answer so he want to meet comissioner. Riya can do anything to save Arjun. She even break the rules to save arjun. Shree spotted riya in the vedio and call arjun to told this. OMG somebody aimed arjun thank god Riya saved him in right time. Looks like next chapter is going to interesting Pls continue soon. ( HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY )

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

again you impressed me with your work.

i like whole the update yaar.

so riya ne arjun ke piche apne aadmi laga diye hain.

love glaring session between riya and her boss.

so arjun is going to meet commissioner sir for clearing his doubt about riya.

love the way rathore interrogating hotel guyes.

riya sees arjun.

shree was seeing the cctv and he sees riya.

he was shocked.

and he called arjun to tell him that riya is alive.

but someone attacked arjun but riya saved him.

love there moments.

shree was scared about arjun.

finally arjun sees riya.

now i am scared what will happen.

continue soon.

eagerly waiting for next part.

and get well son.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Omg finally they know about riya being alive

no precap not fair

plz update soon

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

ohk..now u have to give me time to edit it back again heheh...this one is from cell so short one just a gist of my main comment k...

i have read A nd B yesterday nd sry to tell u i have poor memory so how much i remb will comment on it now...

so all of them hurt Haan...well do they have right to dnt they...

the 4 guys bcoz of such a shattering truth..

aisha hmm b bcoz of Sameer...

Arjun nd shree feelings bang on...

so liza is observant one...hmmm

she caught on every detail very well let it be guys ya aisha turmoil...

hehehhe her heart did skip a beat when she saw shree approaching her..

chweet...

loved aisha and shree convo...how apologies are done in frndship...lovely

now coming to c nd d part

ok now this was fab one gal sply the the d part ahem ahem u guessed it right it was bcoz of know what...

wow riya literally fought and stood on her on ground...loved it...

she went against all the protocols to keep him safe...

nd even though she couldn't be the one shadowing him she kept in her best supports...

so shree did discover the truth lastly...lastly He knows riya is alive...

yes she is alive nd they know...dancing...heheh

wow the first person shree thinks to call is Arjun...luv u shree babu..,but u were little late...

god played a different game to bring out the truth nd had diff plan for their again first meeting...

so Arjun did feel comfort nd what now in a stranger embrace...oopps not stranger...riya...his riya...

very well described...

who was this hitman now...

but should seriously thank dis Gupta nd hitman...in way dey did help a lot in bringing riya back to etf guys...

more will be edited from my lappy heheh...

well gal have to tell u u do deserve a hatsoff nd three cheers...

great style of writing nd can keep people hooked to your stry...

u are damn amazing writer...

so remb my request if anytime u write anything do remb us n keep us updated with ur work...will love to read them...

a good freshening thing to read after tiring day...

bravo...!👏

Edited by rocking_gal - 12 years ago

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