Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50

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Posted: 12 years ago

ARIYA FF-

Deception, Intrigue...and Passion?

By Amri174

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Rating: T (Suitable for AGES 13 and older)

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THREAD TWO

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Disclaimer: This work of fan fiction is based on the characters and events portrayed in the TV series "Arjun" airing on Star Plus and produced by Four Lions. No copyright infringement intended.

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*INDEX*

Link to Thread # 1: THREAD ONE

Thread # 2

Chapter 5A & B- Page 1

Chapter 5C & D- Page 4

Chapter 6A -Page 22

Chapter 6B -Page 28

Chapter 6C -Page 36

Link to Thread # 3: THREAD THREE (Chapter 7 and onward)

Edited by -Amri- - 11 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

First of all, thanks a lot for supporting me and constantly commenting on the first thread to enable me to make a second thread. For the first time, a thread of mine has crossed fifty pages and I'm deliriously happy😃. I really am very grateful for all the encouragement you've thrown my way.

Secondly, I sincerely apologize for the unexpected delay of 5 days in updating Chapter 5. *ducks to avoid chappals*. I had a messy week- fell sick, recovered, went out of town...all in all, lots of turmoil.

I hope that this chapter will appease some of your anger towards me, and pacify you somewhat.😛 It's a MEGA update- divided into 4 parts- A, B, C and D.

5A & B will be posted now, and C & D AT 9:00 P.M. I.S.T today, which means five hours later. So don't forget to read the later parts;) And yeah, my update will also depend on the comments you leave for the first two parts, so don't forget to make me happy, LOL! I need the encouragement.

Chapter 5 is dedicated to riyasarkar, mastmegha and Aabish_02 for cutely reminding me about the update. Here you go, guys.

Finally, thanks to all the faithful readers who liked and commented on Chapter 4. I really appreciate it. Without you, this tale wouldn't be here.

SCROLL DOWN TO CHAPTER 5A.

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update👏👏👏

the undercover agent that aisha met is it ria???

will b eagerly waiting for part C & D😊

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Originally posted by: jia03
amazing update👏👏👏
the undercover agent that aisha met is it ria???
will b eagerly waiting for part C & D😊

Thanks for replying, ji😊

As to the answer to this question- wait and watch😉😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Heya congratulation for the second thread 🥳
u made us wait very loonnggg . As u said two more parts are coming! So i wll wait for that also! Koi ni!😆
its like i am addicted to ths piece ⭐️

fist tell me how are you? 😳 and i am nt angry at all! Health comes fisrt 😛 . So you take care🤗

as always again a fantastic writing and lovely portraytion❤️

i have never thought this single lie will affect them this much!
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It completely indicates that they how personally they were attached with her and now this feeling of being bitrayed by her is hurting them immensely😔.

She the always cool funloving specky will behave like this! The only thing i am feard of is their confrontation!
And this update also expressing the feeling, the way the each memberes of the team felt for eachother! Loved the way arjun understood shree, that he too was going through the same turmoil as his ! But the difference was he felt this pain is much more!
For shree she was his best friends and for him she was.. Yet he is confused . He couldn't name their relation!
Now just waiting, when he will realize this little damn thing that he loves her!😳
i don't think it will happen very soon! First he was thinking of the bitraying his dead wife and now he is thinking of her bitrayal! This love is never so easy ! Eh!
It could even divert his mind from the case !
And with riya! Yeah , their connection is very strong! And the difference is , she herself have accepted that she loves him! And when she found that clue! ( i don't knw what was that, you reveal tht soon! ) and her shocked expression truely showing that! Her teammates too assuered her! So they did know her feeling for shree, rathod, chotu and arjun???

Loved the working style of NIB. And would love to read more about the force ! And also the progress in the case!
I knew that it was just not a serial killing case!
But this case is just the key for the whole grund of such illegal activity! And siddharth gupta is just a puppet! But the murder of his fiance might have some realtion with his peronal or this illegal work! Eh?

Loved the way you described the whole life of arjun and how he have gone through so much! And also his realtion with his dad!

Now comes to shree and liza and ayesha! It was awesome reading liza's pov! In other stories she is being ignored but i wanted to knw more of her!
He equation with shree , what is the thing that is keeping him away from her or bot them wanted to keep themselves apart from eachother! May be any past pages of their life! And even if in the short time she understands well her colleagues and she did know abot ayesha's crush on rathod!
And both of them shared a very good relationship!
Then sheree comes ti ayesha and the friendly relief he got was portrayed nicely! *claps*
ha ha, liza was annoyed when shree ignored him!
These two na!

Also the ladies of the team do understand that sth is terribly wrong in the life of their male members! And they are curious to!
Is that girl riya, whom ayesha met four months ago?? I guess!

Loved this chapter and also the point of view of both the ladies about the men of their life!

And abot the challenge!
Congratulation pri🤗
sorry , i couldn't guess! I knw nth abt hamlet! And just when priya explained abt them, i started googling 🤣.

Thanks for the PM!
Keep writing! And update the next part soonish!
Nai toh vampire bite
😉🤣

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

Finally u updated! Hmm!
Thank u!

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow

amazing

arjun's life in danger

poor him he's so broken

bechare ayesha and liza kya hoga inka

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Priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Heyya girl!!

as for the comments its a reserve for now..

and for your challenge, I guess its the fact that Arjun was the lead at his school play Hamet..and in that play too the lead strives to take revenge from Claudius for murdering his father.
I am not too sure if i am right though!! But still wanted to be the first one to get the correct the answer and also to post something on this thread so that I dont loose it later :P

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