Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Heya congratulation for the second thread 🥳
u made us wait very loonnggg . As u said two more parts are coming! So i wll wait for that also! Koi ni!😆
its like i am addicted to ths piece ⭐️ Aww, thanks a lot, Vampu! It means a lot to me😛

fist tell me how are you? 😳 and i am nt angry at all! Health comes fisrt 😛 . So you take care🤗I am fine, sabb aapki duaon ka assar hai.😊

as always again a fantastic writing and lovely portraytion❤️

i have never thought this single lie will affect them this much!
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It completely indicates that they how personally they were attached with her and now this feeling of being bitrayed by her is hurting them immensely😔.

She the always cool funloving specky will behave like this! The only thing i am feard of is their confrontation!Yes, Vampu...all of them are feeling betrayed, and hurt😭 And their confrontation is not going to be pretty😉
And this update also expressing the feeling, the way the each memberes of the team felt for eachother! Loved the way arjun understood shree, that he too was going through the same turmoil as his ! But the difference was he felt this pain is much more! Very true. Arjun is a very intense guy, and the nature of his relationship with Riya is very very different. So yes, he is definitely more attached.
For shree she was his best friends and for him she was.. Yet he is confused . He couldn't name their relation!
Now just waiting, when he will realize this little damn thing that he loves her!😳
i don't think it will happen very soon! First he was thinking of the bitraying his dead wife and now he is thinking of her bitrayal! This love is never so easy ! Eh!
It could even divert his mind from the case ! Well said, Vampu...you correctly pointed out one of the central concerns of this story. The inner fight between Arjun between his loyalty to his dead wife and his newfound feelings for Riya.😛 Par kya yeh pyaar dimaag ki kabhi sunta hai???
And with riya! Yeah , their connection is very strong! And the difference is , she herself have accepted that she loves him! And when she found that clue! ( i don't knw what was that, you reveal tht soon! ) and her shocked expression truely showing that! I will reveal it soon;)Her teammates too assuered her! So they did know her feeling for shree, rathod, chotu and arjun???Yes, they kinda do. They're very close to her, and they respect her. More on that in the future chapters.

Loved the working style of NIB. And would love to read more about the force ! And also the progress in the case!
I knew that it was just not a serial killing case!
But this case is just the key for the whole grund of such illegal activity! And siddharth gupta is just a puppet! But the murder of his fiance might have some realtion with his peronal or this illegal work! Eh? Wait and watch😉

Loved the way you described the whole life of arjun and how he have gone through so much! And also his realtion with his dad! The episode when Arjun thought about his dad was just awesome, so I explored it a little in my own story😊

Now comes to shree and liza and ayesha! It was awesome reading liza's pov! In other stories she is being ignored but i wanted to knw more of her!
He equation with shree , what is the thing that is keeping him away from her or bot them wanted to keep themselves apart from eachother! May be any past pages of their life! And even if in the short time she understands well her colleagues and she did know abot ayesha's crush on rathod!
And both of them shared a very good relationship!
Then sheree comes ti ayesha and the friendly relief he got was portrayed nicely! *claps*
ha ha, liza was annoyed when shree ignored him!
These two na! Thanks for liking the two awesome pairs other than Ariya in this story. But there's soon going to be a third. Guess, guess?

Also the ladies of the team do understand that sth is terribly wrong in the life of their male members! And they are curious to!
Is that girl riya, whom ayesha met four months ago?? I guess! Uhh...😆

Loved this chapter and also the point of view of both the ladies about the men of their life!


And abot the challenge!
Congratulation pri🤗
sorry , i couldn't guess! I knw nth abt hamlet! And just when priya explained abt them, i started googling 🤣. Nice to see that you're updating your knowledge constantly. It's a good thing to do😛

Thanks for the PM! Welcome jii;)
Keep writing! And update the next part soonish!
Nai toh vampire bite *shrinks in fright*
😉🤣

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Tohar reswa khatam hui gawa kya?? Resawa hamar taraf se!

Originally posted by: jia03

i loved it😃