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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: anushka1129

read both parts ..n it was so cute n amazing os.
sharon missing her manju n swayam feeling bad :(..
but but suprise is there waiting for sharon😃..
aww swayam can't keep the secret nor can lie properly hehe😳..
update soon..
really wanna know more :)


yaa...he cant... kya kare bichara... :D
i wud make it quick...
big surprise is waiting...

Thnx...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ..Suhana..

loving it plzz do continue soon :)


thnx and i wud...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

thnx... i wud...
ASAP...


Originally posted by: pooja123456

loved it!!!
could imagine them!
soo cute!!!


thnx a lot...!!!!
haan...if u imagine and u hav been there...its amazing feel!!!

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

Awesome... Can't wait to read more...👏Plzz accept my buddy request n pm me when you update the next part...😊


i hav done that!!
i wud do that!!
patience...wait karon...
ntnhg like that...
i wud make it quick...
and thnx...

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

Awesome... Loved it to the core...👏 Loved the way you wrote this OS... The ending was terrific...😳Keep writing such amazing stuff...😊


thnx...thnx...and thnx...
hmm...i m happy like the end...
i wud try to...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

amazing update Rohan...

cute and adorable SwaRon...😳😳😳...dreamyyy...loved the way he played prank and also caught from falling down...Swayam the eternal lover boy...loved the sweet kiss ...his adorable lie and the way she could read him...ahaa...

Continue soon..😊


thnx deepika...
the were they r they will always be the same...
prank...toh pakad ta nahi toh kya karta...i mean... :D :P :D
i wud ASAP...

*THAT MOMENT WHEN UR FAV WRITER LIKES YOUR WRITING*

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Rohan😊

Awww...that was cute and adorable...and SwaRonish...the eternal lover boy is still the same even as a husband he is so loving and caring ...stealing few moments of love from their busy lives...and celebrating love in Swayam and Sharon way..

loved the whole set up..the surprise..the planning...swayam's cute antics..sharon as the loving wife...beautifully written...how u took care of minute details...blind floding sharon...making the surprise cute and romantic

The final surprise was dreamy...loved this OS...there a certain innocence in ur writing...do write more dear😊👏👏
--
Deepika

hmm...
the full credit goes to u and someone else too...
but really...i came to IF to get updated of your works...so that i cud read them...really...
its coz of u that i cud write dis one...
thnx a lot for that...
i m glad u liked it...
its ur os...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Lovely ending 😊
Surprise was beautifully penned
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Sorry for the late reply! Was inactive from past two days!

This update was awesome as the first one was!
And a little funny also!
She called him bhoot🤣
and then he spilled the bins! Loved the 40-60 percentage ! Ha ha! The lame excuse , sharon caught him so easily!
So thats why this is named, i can't keep a secret!😉
now where he will take her!
Thts gona interesting! Thanks for the PM
it was a very lovely and cute update😳


thnx...its okay...
yaa thats the reason...
but thank u very much...
lame...thats how it had to be...
it wud be a lil ...

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

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woha first of all thank you very much for this loonng update😃
overall this part is very seewt, cute and a lot of romance☺️
his planning was awesome, as he know her every choice and he knew that defo she will like this all! And yeah she liked it 😳the way he understood her each unspoken word ! *thumbs up*

loved their nok-zoks, and leg pullings of eachother! The way described the place was awesome and it did impress an romantic angle to the story!

Awesome writing and portraytion 👏
uff , why drag the suicide point thing! 😆
this a awesome writing of a perfect couple!❤️

and offcourse the secret! Hmm she herself couldn't keep her secret😉
and one more thing!
LOved the dialouge,
ladkiyan sirf do chizon se roti hai. Daily soaps seriously🤣

thanks for the PM ! 😃


haha..it was not looong...it was lng..
thnx...uski planning thodi naa thi..meri tthi yaar... :P :D
that was the basic they understand each other so pretty well...
full on romantic thoda bore ho jaata haai...so i thought of it
not at all...people at IF describe it way too good...yeh toh mera dekha hua tha..log toh imagination ko bhi bohot acche se put up karte hain...so i wud the credit in dat..
thnx a lot...toh i wud keep up the never ending spirit of sharon...
dialogue main achhe hi marta hun... :) and moreover it was true...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

RES


UNRES

Ufff... Haayee...
I was in a trance as the story proceeded...
It was THE Perfect End to a new start 😉
Loved all the Swaron moments... Their small nok-jhok... ☺️
Amazing 👏
Now I'm eagerly waiting for a new story from you 😃
Great Going Sirjee 👍🏼


thnx...as i said the credit of this os goes to...Deepika and the other one was U...
i wrote it...coz of i liked ur writing vry much...and toh i thought i might try one...!!
yaa...its not a end but a start...of a new life...
haan...i wud try... :)
sirjee????? :/ :P :D :)
thnx u..its ur too...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sanstina

Beautifully penned 😊


thnx...


Originally posted by: sanstina

Lovely ending 😊

Surprise was beautifully penned


thank u...

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

thnx...but the bomb for wat..???

Rohan

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