Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Sorry for the late reply! Was inactive from past two days!
This update was awesome as the first one was!
And a little funny also!
She called him bhoot🤣
and then he spilled the bins! Loved the 40-60 percentage ! Ha ha! The lame excuse , sharon caught him so easily!
So thats why this is named, i can't keep a secret!😉
now where he will take her!
Thts gona interesting! Thanks for the PM
it was a very lovely and cute update😳
thnx...its okay...
yaa thats the reason...
but thank u very much...
lame...thats how it had to be...
it wud be a lil ...
Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
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woha first of all thank you very much for this loonng update😃
overall this part is very seewt, cute and a lot of romance☺️
his planning was awesome, as he know her every choice and he knew that defo she will like this all! And yeah she liked it 😳the way he understood her each unspoken word ! *thumbs up*
loved their nok-zoks, and leg pullings of eachother! The way described the place was awesome and it did impress an romantic angle to the story!
Awesome writing and portraytion 👏
uff , why drag the suicide point thing! 😆
this a awesome writing of a perfect couple!❤️
and offcourse the secret! Hmm she herself couldn't keep her secret😉
and one more thing!
LOved the dialouge,
ladkiyan sirf do chizon se roti hai. Daily soaps seriously🤣
thanks for the PM ! 😃
haha..it was not looong...it was lng..
thnx...uski planning thodi naa thi..meri tthi yaar... :P :D
that was the basic they understand each other so pretty well...
full on romantic thoda bore ho jaata haai...so i thought of it
not at all...people at IF describe it way too good...yeh toh mera dekha hua tha..log toh imagination ko bhi bohot acche se put up karte hain...so i wud the credit in dat..
thnx a lot...toh i wud keep up the never ending spirit of sharon...
dialogue main achhe hi marta hun... :) and moreover it was true...
Rohan :)