I cant keep a secret (swaron os) *replies*

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved it!!!
could imagine them!
soo cute!!!

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Beautifully penned 😊

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

perfect and fabulous end... loved it...

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Hey Rohan😊

Awww...that was cute and adorable...and SwaRonish...the eternal lover boy is still the same even as a husband he is so loving and caring ...stealing few moments of love from their busy lives...and celebrating love in Swayam and Sharon way..

loved the whole set up..the surprise..the planning...swayam's cute antics..sharon as the loving wife...beautifully written...how u took care of minute details...blind floding sharon...making the surprise cute and romantic

The final surprise was dreamy...loved this OS...there a certain innocence in ur writing...do write more dear😊👏👏

Deepika

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

finally main sabko thnx kar sakta hun...lets start...

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
utter cute , shona n romeo ☺️ loved this one , waiting for the next one , plzz jaldi update kario , i dont like to wait , but i noe u were waiting for my comment rite !! 🤣

aur nahi toh kya...eagerly waiting...and i m glad u r the first... :P :)

hehe...i first thought to keep romeo Juliet...but den i changed my mind...i know yeh zyada cute hai...

thnx a lot... :)

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
Awww dat was again a supa cute update so 1os aur itni taareef not bad Han . Hope u update next story soon . Coming to dis one again a very well written os .

thnk u...

fir..u know i m kinda popular... !!!! *jokes apart*

thnx a lot... :)

Rohan.. :)

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac
Wow super amazing loved it y is too short i.mean was enjoying it so.much.and it stopd...eagrly waiting for.the next update...plz make it quick

sorry yaar...main kya karun...i m not a gud writer naa...isliye it was so so small...

i tried to make it as fast as i cud...

thnx...that u liked it...

enjoying haan...!!!

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac
Awww so sweet endjng...loved it alot...u r an amazing writer carry on eriting and never forget to pm.m

yes maam!!!! never i wud forget..!!!

thnx for the compliment...trust me i m not a gud writer...its u people who r so sweet to me... :)

i wud try..!!

Rohan :)

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
Nice update rohan...poor majnu can't keep anything secret from his laila...loved sweet lovely doubly mrng talks...

even laila cant...but anways...

swaron hai toh lovely hona tha...

thnx a lot...!!!

Rohan :)

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: kamlesh32
Really nice update! It was fun to read! Please update soon...

thnx...

i wud do dat!!!

Rohan :)

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: freya123
nice

thnx...

Originally posted by: freya123
lovely

thnx again...

Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
they are having a conversation in their sweet nick name...
the chapter was nice... do continue soon and pm me...

hmmm...kafi logon ko nicknames acche lage...i m happy!!!

thank you...i would surely...