ArShi SS: LOST MEMORIES- *Part 13 Upd* Thd 2 link pg1

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LOST MEMORIES

-CHILDHOOD & MARRIAGE

hello friends... I am presenting my second story. please like this too.. Leave behind your thoughts abt this story.. suggestions, chappals, tomatoes, eggs,bombs all are welcome. but please do comment.

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PROLOGUE:

She was completely surrounded by water. She was struggling to breath and was drowning.

"Khushi hold on to him. He will save you, your husband will save you, don't leave him... save my gudiya ARN.."

Came a fading voice from behind. There was a boat which was drowning and no one had a life jacket. The person was not clearly visible.

She was drowning completely. She tried to move her hands to swim but all in vain.

She started to loose her consciousness.

"Amma save me. I am going to die. Amma.. Amma.. Amma.."

She started to struggle in her bed twisting and twirling herself.

"Khushi.. Khushi"

Someone started patting her cheeks.

The 25 year old young girl opened her tightly shut eyes suddenly and tears started flowing. Then only she noticed the big room decorated with stars and her big bed.

"Khushi, kya hua? Again you had the NIGHTMARE?" a mid aged woman asked her.

Khushi nodded her in positive.

"For past 17 years you are having this nightmare. Because of this neither you sleep nor you let me sleep. Forget that and sleep. Before that drink some water." The woman said in frustration.

Khushi did as instructed and went to sleep.

On the other side, in a room painted in gray and white, someone was muttering in sleep

"Khushi, where are you. Answer me dammit. I wont let you to die leaving me alone. KHUSSSHHIII"

The muttering ended in a scream.

A 26 year old young man opened his eyes and sat on his king size bed with a jerk.

He was sweating even in that air conditioned room and tears appeared in his eyes.

"Khushi, once I lost you. This time I wont miss a chance to get you back even if it is 17 years late. You will be mine by hook or crook. You are only Arnav's."

He swore under his breath and went back to sleep after having some water.

so friends how u like the prologue. the title can also be changed on your opinions. pls comment

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drashtimeetu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting and different concept
loved it
continue soon
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wow awesome
pls cont soon and pm me
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Very interesting prologue...two people dreaming of same incident...does arnav know where is khushi now ...after 15yrs how does he recognise her...?
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Awesome concept. please continue nd update it asap
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amazing start yaar,,,continue ..wow excited
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love the start
cant wait for you to start the story:)
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WOW dat was great prologue, loved it. So they got seperated for long 17yrs can't wait to know how they got seperated and egarley waiting Arnav's entry again in Khushi's life.
Update soon, thanks 4d pm.
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thanks for the pm meenu


wow interesting concept


so arnav will sure get hold of kushi


eager to his possessive avatar

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