ArShi FF: Vengeance & Sacrifice-Undefined*pt17*pg121{TH2 LINK pg1}

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends😊. I'm new here. I love ARSHI. I had a concept in my mind. So i'm penning it down here😳. Hope u ppl like it. All suggestions are welcome. i have not read many stories here. So if u find my concept somewhere similar to anyother pls bring it to my notice so that i will either modify or stop the story.
Here u go.

VENGEANCE AND SACRIFICE
-UNDEFINED

PROLOGUE

Arnav standing dressed as Groom in his room which was decorated with flowers and fairy lights. But he was not happy like the surrounds. Instead he was gritting his teeth and his eyes were spitting fire.

He was crushing a paper in his hand and angrily said

"How can u do this to me Khushi. I Trusted you, only you completely Dammit. But you proved yourself to be so cheap.You'

I will not let u go so easily KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA. You have betrayed me, ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA. You will have to pay for it. Wherever you are, tumhe chodunga nahi. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA se panga lene ka sabakh toh tumhe sikhakar hi rahunga." Gritting his teeth. He left the room while crushing the paper more harder and adjusting his pakdi and coat.

On the hand, In Delhi Railway Station, a Girl wearing a puple and black color salwar suit with long silky hair reaching her hip was sitting on a bench with closed eyes silently letting her tears to flow.

"Khushi" she wiped her tears and faked a smile to see the person calling her. A man in mid forty's was standing there with water bottle and ticket.

He came near her and gave the bottle and ticket to her while saying

"Bitiya hum abi abi tumhare buaji ko pone karke aa re. Who kahat hai ki who sara intezaam kar degi. Tum kal subah tak LUCKNOW pahuch jaoge. Jese hi pahuchi hamein pone karna. Teek hai bitiya. Lagta hai tran aa re." and he went cross her to check, while she was trying hard to control her tears.

She boarded her train while her chachaji once again checked her luggage and got down. She waved hands to him as the train started moving. As the train left the platform she leaned on the door closing her eyes shedding tears while muttering ARNAV, the only person whom she loved in her life and sacrificed everything for him.

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character sketch will be given soon... pls wait for it...

so this is it... frnds pls do response... and being my first time pls correct me if i am wrong and give suggestions 😊 and if there any silent readers please come out of your hiding and click likes n pls comment.. that gives me encouragement..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow brilliant concept...so arnav says she has cheated him but she only did it as a sacrifice...wonder what happened...cant wait to read more...do continue soon...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It seems like a really good idea for a story
Arnav thinks Khushi is betraying him
While khushi is running away sacrificing
Please carry on your concept seems very unique
can't wait please update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting but plzzz don't make Arnav marry another female.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

Interesting but plzzz don't make Arnav marry another female.


so sorry soundarya... i think my concept will disappoint you...
but every actions reasons will be revealed as the story unfolds.. like suggestions even tomatoes eggs n chappals are also welcome😆
Edited by Ashni_dgr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATULATION MEENU FOR YOUR NEW WORK



I PRAY GOD FOR YOUR SUCCESS DEAR

WOW BEAUTIFUL START INTERESTING . PLZ CONTINUE IT . I LIKE IT DEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seems interesting. Make it a little big next time..😊 looking forward to read!
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Originally posted by: Destinyhope0305

Seems interesting. Make it a little big next time..😊 looking forward to read!


hi.. this is just a prolog... moreover i just wanted to see the response... next part i ll make it big.. but my prob is my concept n i get confused wen i write it big... u ll see it wen i write the 1st part😉 by the way thank u.. n tell me ur name
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow meenu... really an interesting outlook n approach to the story.. was indeed a good prologue... cant get from this write up from which level u have taken the story a new turn... so definitely looking forward for more from u...

Good job girl... keep penning!

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