Kissmat-Rajeev Aamna FF - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just awesome part zaraaa i just loved it...:))))))))super update👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Imane..
First of all thanks a lot for the pm..and extremely sorry for the late reply as I was very inactive on I-F ..so let's start with the analysis..I really loved the part..very well written..could really feel the emotions of Raj and Aamna..so..Raj and Aamna were spotted in the same restaurant, but they were trying to show that they moved on.I could really feel the emotion of Aamna and her loved ones wanted her to go to another restaurant as they do not want to see her hurt any further..So finally Raj is engaged with that Archie..and they still remember their engagement moments..but Archie sweety...you don't need to stay happy for so long..they will sort out their misunderstanding..fingers crossed!😳 ..please continue soon dear!😳
Edited by VishakaGal12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mehaksabreen27

just awesome part zaraaa i just loved it...:))))))))super update👏👏👏Thank u very much mehek

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane..Hi sweetie

First of all thanks a lot for the pm Ur welcome dear..and extremely sorry for the late reply as I was very inactive on I-F .It's ok. even I was busy wth the festivitiesso let's start with the analysis..I really loved the part..very well written..could really feel the emotions of Raj and Aamna.Thank u very much dear.so..Raj and Aamna were spotted in the same restaurant, but they were trying to show that they moved on.I could really feel the emotion of Aamna and her loved ones wanted her to go to another restaurant as they do not want to see her hurt any further..So finally Raj is engaged with that Archie..and they still remember their engagement moments..but Archie sweety...you don't need to stay happy for so long..they will sort out their misunderstanding..fingers crossed! Yes dear, true love never lost😳 ..please continue soon dear!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
So this time for more fun I decided to do an comments awards function:

So, dear readers
-The most regular commentor goes to Deepa!!!!!!👏⭐️
-The most quick commentor goes to Surya!!!!!👏⭐️
-The commentor who gives most long comments is Vishaka!!!!!
👏⭐️
-The most encouraging commentor goes to Mehek!!!!!!👏⭐️
Thank u all gals

have a wonderfull week

And keep commenting

Im@ne,

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Posted: 11 years ago
Recap: Rajeev invite Aamna to his engagement...They both meet in a restaurant n make each other jealous...then on his engagement Rajeev ke haat se ring ghir jaati hai aur Aaamna ke paoun ke paas stop hoti hai
Kissmat part 30:

Aamna bend down and pick the ring
Rajeev was thinking that he loves her and it's because of that ke the ring goes automaticly to her
Behind some ladies was talking
Lady 1: yeh wohi hai naa jisne Rajee ko dhoka diya tha
Lady 2: haan wohi...aur juraat to dekho yahan bhi a gaye
Aamna hears and feels bad
she look at the ring, and then kissi bhi tara she goes to the stage and give it to Rajeev
Rajeev was just staring at her but she was looking down she cant win over peaples
woh stage se utar kar upstairs chali jaati hai
Rajeev bhi Archie ko ring pehnna deta hai and all celebrate
Upstairs:
Aamna goes in her ex room...it was all dark
Aamna sits slowly on the bed...when she hears some noize
Aamna: kaun hai?
Veena was also in room...woh Aamna ki aawaz pehenchan leti hai
Veena: Betta tum yahan kya kar rahi ho
Aamna on the light
Aamna: mumma?...aap...aapko to niche hona chaiye tha
Veena hugs Aaamna...and make her sits
Veena: betta woh...mera maan nahi kar raha tha..
Aamna sees an album on floor its was her and Rajeev's engagement's album
Aamna: mumma yeh aap...
Veena: betta mera dil nahi manta ke Rajeev Archie se Shaadi kare
Aamna: aapko manna to paregha mumma...(she was contoling herself to not cry)...Rajeev aur main apni apni zindaghi me ,agge bbar chuke hain...main Akshat ke saat aur Rajeev Archie ke saat
Veena look at Aamna
Veena: pata nahi kyun aissa lagta hai ke tum yeh saab baatein dil se nahi keh rahi
Aamna: mumma aapko aissa kyun lagta hai?
Veena: betti ho tum meri...tumhari dil ki baat mujhe nnahi pata hogi to aur kisko hogi...
Aamna: aap choriye naa yeh saab batein yeh bataye kaissi hain aap?
Veena takes her face in her hand and she sees some tears in her eyes
Veena: betta kya hua...tum itni uddas kyun ho...batao naa mujhe koi baat tumhe bohot pareshan kar rahi hain?...Aamna mujhe nahi batao ki to aur kisse bataoghi?
Aamna(in her mind): yeh baat main aapne hubby se nahi batta sakti to apko kya bataoughi...mujhe maaf kardena mumma..
Veena: kya hua...kya soch rahi ho
Aamna kuch nahi
This moment Archie aur Vassu come in the room
Vassu take some jewellry from the amary
Veena: tum kya kar rahi ho Vassu yeh Aamna ka hai...Rajeev ne usse gift kyia ntha shaadi ke liye
Vassu: hain nahi tha...woh shaadi aab tut gaye hai...yeh aab Archie ka ho gaya hai because aaj woh uski mangetar hai
Veena: lekin..
Rajeev comes in the room
Rajeev kya ho raha hai yahan par?
Veena: dekho naa betta wo Aaamna ka zewar le rahi hain
Rajeev look at Aamna
Rajeev: haan I know maine hi kaha tha anty ko...
Veena was shocked
She was holding his arm but hearing that she leave him
Aamna was burning with anger it was enuf for her
Aamna: I dont care...yeh jo is armary me saara zewar paara hai u can take it!!Akshat will buy me more precious!!!...and this(showing him her earings) yeh bhi tumne diya tha naa(she remove her earings and throw it on him) yeh lo!!aur mera yeh mangalsutar yeh bhi lelo(she remove and throw it on floor) yeh aapni uss Archie ko pehnana...(she look at her hand...and remove a ring) aur yeh jo tumne mujhe do taake ki ring di thi angagement par...take it also(showing him the ring...then she also throw on floor)
She goes towards Archie and said
Aamna: engagement mubaarak ho miss Archie...or should I say to be mrs Garewal
She leave the party in anger
Rajeev ke ankhon se ansso beh rahe the
he sits on floor and pick up the things
He was detroyed but he manage to calm himself
He give to Archie
Rajeev: for you
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Morning Sinnah house it was sunday
four sisters were sitting in the living room
Mehek: Dii kaal aap kahan gaye thi
Aamna: main woh...tabiyaat kharab ho gaye thi
Charu: what??? kya hua tha aapko
Aamna: Charu sweetie dont worry baas thori weak ho gaye thi
Charu: Dii take care of yourself plaese
Aamna: haan baba care hi to karti houn
Kanan: wrong aap khanna thik se nahi khati hain
Charu: is it true Dii?
Aamna: nahi Charu...Kanan to aisse hi
Mehek: haan haan aap to kabhi joot bol hi nahi sakti
Aamna: mehek plaese naa tum teeno bhi naa I'm just preggie I dont have cancer or something else
Kanan: waisse dii kya aap babies ko feel kar sakti hain
Aamna: abhi tak to never kicked chotte hain par Yaa I can feel
Kanan: Aur kya main kar sakti houn
Aamna: haan come here
Kanan goes near her
Aamna: aapna kaan rakko on my belly
Kanan: oh Dii it's so magical I can hears babies'hearts
Charu: yaa abhi kuch months me kick bhi feel kar sako ghi
Kanan: how?baby kick kaisse kar sake ghein
Charu: they can dont worry they are not idiots like you
Kanan: Dii...dekhiye naa agar main idiot hoti to kya itna saara businees sambal sakti
Charu: mujhe nahi samaj me aata businees vusinees
Kanan: to mujhe bhi tumhara profession nahi aata
Aamna: oh please!! tum dono larna maat
Akshat comes
Akshat: hey gals
Charu: lo aur laraiye ki baat kariye

Akshat: tumhe kya hua subbe subbe kaun sa machar larr gaya
Charu: shut up!!

Akshat: bhaara hi koi zalila hoga
Charu: you silly boy!!
Aamna: Charu please!!!! jab bhi Akshat aata hain tum ghussa ho jaati ho

Charu: to iss ko dekha hai circus me kaam karna chaiye tha isko
Akshat: hay pehle khud ko dekho phir mere baare me baat karna
Charu: no thanx tumhare baare me baat kar kar kaun apna mood kharab kare gha
Aamna: tum jo bhi karo I'm going
Charu: are nahi nahi aap betiye dii
Aamna: tum dono hamesha kyun larte ho...acha nahi lagta mujhe

Akshat: dont worry Aamna hum to baas mazak karte hain
Aamna: hhmm
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Rajeev office me hota hain adn he calls Aamna


Rajeev: hello
Aamna: tum...
Rajeev: woh...
Aamna: is se pehle ke tum kuch kaho I want to apologies for my yesterday's behaviour pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe...Really main bohot sharminda houn...mumma ke samne...
Rajeev: it's ok maine tumhe phone isliye kiya ke you have forgoten to buy your latest month's rent
Aamna: what...but I'm not in the house now
Rajeev: the latest month you were till 28th...I count that you stayed all the month
Aamna: Rajeev...tum...tum mujse tumhare ghar me rehne ke paisse loge

Rajeev: I dont care...tum aab apne bholi si chakal ke saat mujhe nahi phassa sakti...I want my money
Aamna: Rajeev...plaese abhi mere paas nahi hai...when I'll have meain tumhe de dounghi
Rajeev: what you mean nahi hai?
Aamna: woh...maine pichle hafte shopping me lagga diye apne aur babies ke liye
Rajeev: oh yaa I forgot tumhe to shauk hain naa fusul kharche karne ki

Aamna: nahi woh...actually I become more fat naa to...
Rajeev: acha...to tum apne uss haan Akshat se paisse kyun nahi liye shopping ke liye
Aamna: Rajeev main...

Rajeev: He make you pregnant to now where is he? utaye naa kharcha...mujhe baas mere paisse chaiye you have two days
he ring off
Akshat was passing by
Akshat: Aman kya hua pareshan ho
Aamna: nahi kuch nahi baas thak gaye thi
Akshat: Aamna tum bhi naa your always tired
Aamna: it's happen
Akshat: always with you apparently
Aamna: Akshaaatt stop pulling my leg
Akshat: okay
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sorry it's a really short part and after so much time really sorry but I'm busythese days

Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Imane!
First of all thank you so much for the PM and also for giving me the award ...it is my absolute pleasure to write comments in your lovely fanfic..😃..so now let's come to the update..I really loved the recent part..and as always it was very well written..I could really sympathize with Aamna..and god..these women are so annoying..why do they even have a problem if Aamna attends Raj's engagement..it's her wish..so they should mind their own business..😡..but I'm glad that Aamna remained strong and gave the ring to Rajeev even during their tough times..I also loved the way you wrote the scene between Veena ji and Aamna..poor Veena ji..she was also feeling sad about the engagement ..and it is very natural because she loves her as her own daughter and nobody could ever take place..but Aamna consoled her that Raj has moved with Archie and she moved on with Akshat..but Veena Ji knows her very well..😊..her emotions and all..God!!..Archie and Vassu should get a life!!..Please Archie dear..go away from their lives...😡..I just hope that they reconcile their difference before it gets too late..please continue soon dear..keep it up the great work..and pm me for the next update!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane!

First of all thank you so much for the PM and also for giving me the award your welcome dear You deserve it with your lovely comments...it is my absolute pleasure to write comments in your lovely fanfic..😃.Thank u so much sweetie.so now let's come to the update..I really loved the recent part..and as always it was very well written.Thanks dear.I could really sympathize with Aamna..and god..these women are so annoying..why do they even have a problem if Aamna attends Raj's engagement..it's her wish..so they should mind their own business.Yes I really hate these woman here there are so much pakistanis...and these womans always blahblahblah They have nothing to do all the day at home so they interfair in peaple's lives.😡..but I'm glad that Aamna remained strong and gave the ring to Rajeev even during their tough times.yes she is becoming strong and she is trying to live happilly and ignore th other events wich happen.I also loved the way you wrote the scene between Veena ji and Aamna..poor Veena ji..she was also feeling sad about the engagement ..and it is very natural because she loves her as her own daughter and nobody could ever take place..but Aamna consoled her that Raj has moved with Archie and she moved on with Akshat..but Veena Ji knows her very well..😊Yes Veena can easily feel that something is wrong with her..her emotions and all..God!!..Archie and Vassu should get a life!!..Please Archie dear..go away from their lives...😡..I just hope that they reconcile their difference before it gets too late.Only time will tell you dear but I said to You true love never die😉.please continue soon dear.I'll try my best .keep it up the great work..and pm me for the next update!😃Sure it will be a pleasure

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