Kissmat-Rajeev Aamna FF - Page 10

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane!!...

I just loved the update that you wrote today..it is all well-written!!..Thank u so much for loving it

Absolutely loved the scene with Rajeev and Aamna .Yes the story don't needed it but I wanted to write a part like that .its great to read Aamna happy after so long..and she really deserves to get happiness..It's because of Rajeev...Rajeev indirectly make her happy aww..she sent Roti for Rajeev..and the whole family wants to eat it..but loved the way he said...Aamna ne mere liye roti bheja hai...😆😆.Yes he really wanted to eat alone but evil family😈😆.he is kind of child-like..😳😳..by the way..lol..hope this Archie jee goes out from Rajeev-Aamna's life..she is a very insecure lady.Yes I'm thinking of a punishement for her.coincidentally..Sanjana is my another name which my family calls me at home😳.😃..That's great.anyway..keep it up the great work.Kisi Parisian ka work hai to sure good hi hoga lol..please continue soon dear.I will try.and pm me😊Yes sure thank for the big comment

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

thank you for the PM Your welcome dear..nice..Thanks .continue soon. I'll try my best..😊

Originally posted by: mehaksabreen27

waao zara just amaing part sweeto.thanks for liking the part..well writeen thank u plz do continue soon:)yes 👏👏👏👏👏👏😉

Recap: Rajeev try to hurt Aamna but in vain as she trap him that he is doing natak

Kissmat part 29 :
Aamna n Kanan were slepping peacefully
But Aamna was moving here n here n moining
Wich was disturbing Kanan
Aamna: umm...mmhh...Rajeev...sweetoo
Kanan: Dii ?
Aamna put her hand on her face n get closer to her
Kanan shakes her to wakes up her
Kanan: Diii
Aamna: kya hai Rajeev...(she change side) uummmh let me sleep
Kanan: what I'm not letting u sleep...wow...aaj kal to zameen upar aur aasman neeche
Aamna put her hand on her mouth
Aamna: shut upMove her hand

Kanan: you shut up!!!

Aamna: you are so disturbing today Raj
Kanan: kaun Raj?
Aamna: you Raj...umm...my Raj
Kanan shakes her n she open her eyes
Aamna: Kanan?...where is Rajeev
Kanan: jiju?...I don't know...in his house...
Aamna: oh yaa(she laugh) he escape last night...warna main to uska rape kar deti
Kanan: Dii...eem...today we'll go to the doctor mujhe lagta hai aap pagal ho gaye hai
Charu comes in the room
Charu: no need...I think dii is just normal
Charu hug Aamna
Aamna: how are you sis
Charu: I'm fine dii...but sorry I can't stay I must go naa...I have lot of work today
Aamna: ok bye
Kanan: bye Charu
Charu: bye!!!!!
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Back to Garewal mansion
all were sitting in the hall:
Chetan: I think now we should arrange your wedding Archie...what's say Rajeev
Rajeev was drinkin juice n he start to caught
Rajeev: papa...(he look at Veena) eemm...(then he remember when he sees Aamna with Akshat n all)...I'm ready papa
Lallit: good so the engagement is tomorrow night
Sanjana: tomorrow??!!!!
Aman: but uncle let's give them some time...I mean...
Vassu: Oh please humein patta hai kya sahi hai aur kya ghalat
Rajeev: please exuse me I'm getting late
Rajeev goes from there
Veena goes upstairs with Sanjana
Sanjana: mumma yeh saab kya hua...hum bhabhi se kya kaheinghe
Veena: please Sanjana...Aamna ko maat batana wo bilkul thut jaye ghi
Sanjana: ok mom
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Rajeev was in office he was lost in his toughts
Then he picks up his phone and calls Aamna
Aamna was home she pick up the cell and smile appears on her face after seeing "Rajeev <3 "
She picks up
Aamna(happily): hellooo
Rajeev: hi...
Aamna: kya baat hai meri yaad a rahi thi?
Rajeev: No...I wanted to invite you
Aamna(exited): Oh...on a date?
Rajeev: No...on my engagement with Archie
Aamna was shocked for a time she forgot all what was happening
a tear drop from her eye
Rajeev: Tomorrow at 6pm...I hope that you will come with your sisters...(as she didn't awnser for a while) hello?!! (he hear some sobings) Aamna...
Aamna(angrily): Shut up...I hate you!!!!
She trow the phone in anger and start to cry
Rajeev was feeling guilty he cant support to seeing her like that but...she also cheated him...and now he just wanted to hurt her
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Later in hospital
Charu was checking some file
when Aamna comes in her cabin
Charu look up
Charu: Dii...kya hua...kuch problem hai?
Aamna sits near her on the ground...put her head on charu's lap and start to cry
Charu: Dii...kya hua dii bataiye to
Charu make her sits on a chair and wipes her tears
Charu: Dii...what happen...mujse nahi kaheinghi
Aamna: he...he is getting married
Charu: who is getting married
Aamna: Rajeev...
Charu: Oh...emm...Dii aap to janti hai ke yeh saab hona hi tha
agar aap chati hai to hum country chor dete hai...bohot dur chalein jaye ghein hum
Aamna: nahi I want to stay here until my babies'birth
Charu: to phir you must be brave Dii hmm...(she hold her hand )...aaj hum Akshat aur Kanan ke saat dinner bahar karne chalein?
Aamna: No...mera mood nahi hai
Charu: Dii it was not a proposition hum jayghein...I must keep you happy
Charu call someone
Charu: hello...yes Dr Charu sinah here...Sonia please is there any other doctor on duty this evening...oh...koi baat nahi I'll change with her...yes please call her and tells her if she can remplace me this evening...okay bye
Aamna: Charu tumhari duty thi...You cant escape from your responsabilities like that
Charu: Dii aaj sham bohot si nurse duty par hain aur I have called Doctor Khandelwal and I'm sure she will come this evening
Aamna: lekin phir bhi
Charu: what phir bhi...Dii aapse bhar kar koi kaam nahi hai
Aamna: thanks Charu
A nurse enter
Nurse: Doctor ek 8 months pregnant lady ka case aya hai
Charu: who?
Nurse: Mrs Afzal
Charu: oh
Charu shearch for a file take it
Charu: Dii aap ghar jayie aur rest karna ok
Aamna: yaa good luck
Then she rush from there
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Archie was waiting for Rajeev as she wanted to go on a date with him
Then Rajeev come and she didn't even give him time to fresh up
In a restaurant Aamna, Akshat, Charu and Kanan were sitting
Akshat: aur wo Kanan ke piche hi pargaya...once time he dance with her once her try to kiss her it was really funny
All kaugh
Charu: to why not you marry him Kanan
Kanan: are you crazy...he is older than Amitabh Bachan
Akshat: haan lekin Amitabh hota to tum shaadi kar leti I'm sure
Kanan: noo
they all laugh
Aamna: waisse Charu wo tumhare uss...eem haan Mrs Afzal ke case me kya hua?
Charu: baby n mother both are fine...janti hai baby ke papa ne kaha ke jitni mujhe shaadi karne me jaldi thi itni hi jaldi mere baby ko duniya me ane ki thi
They laugh
Aamna: yes like in the developed cities hurry...hurry
Kanan: waisse kya aapko jaldi hai aapke babies ko dekhne khi
Aamna: yes wo to har kisi ko hoti hai but not so soon...I want ke my babies are perfectly growen up
Charu: haan because usually prematured babies ko badme problem hoti hai
Akshat sees Rajeev and Archie sitting on the tabvle next to them
Aamna aur baaki ki nazar bhi wahan par jaati hai
Aamna look down
Kanan: do you want we go on another restaurant
Aamna: nahi it's ok
Charu: sure Dii
she nods in yes
Other side
Archie: so what do you want to eat
Rajeev: nothing I'm not hungry you order
Archie: oh please Rajeev
Rajeev see Aamna n the other
Rajeev(loudly): to what do you want to eat sweetie
Aamna hears and feels bad
Archie: what but you were saying ke...
Rajeev(loudly): yes I was saying that I love you so much but pehle kuch order karte hain naa
Now Aamna get angry
Aamna(loudly): Charu take a pic of us
Aamna sits on Akshat's lap hold his hand and place it on her belly
Akshat: Aamna what you are doing
Charu: Dii??
Aamna(loudly): take a pic naa I want to put in my bedroom
Charu take a photo with her phone
Rajeev start to burning with anger
Rajeev(loudly): how was last night Archie?
Archie don't knowed what he is doing but she start to also play the game
Archie: last night...eem...lovely very hot
Kanan: I think we should leave what say Charu
Charu: yes it will be better if we go
Aamna(loudly): okay waisse bhi I'm going to spend the night in Akshat's house
Akshat: what but I have only one bed and I don't have sofa
Aamna: wohi to
Before leaving Aamna return and look at Rajeev who was also returned looking at her
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Next evening
Archie was wearing

Aamna was wearing

Rajeev was wearing

All were in the party
Aamna also be brave and come
Chetan: Ladies and gentlamans I'm here to anouces the engagement of my son Rajeev and my nephew Archie!!!!!
Aamna's heart start beating fast
Archie take the ring
But Rajeev was hesitated
Vassu: betta haat aage karo
Rajeev do it and Archie put the ring on his fingers
An evil smile come on Swayam's face He look at Aamna
Aamna was looking down to hide her tears

She was remembering her engagement with Rajeev

now it was time that Rajeev put the ring in Archie'finger
Rajeev was about o do it but the ring falls from his hand...rolls towards Aamna and stop on her feet
All were shocked
Aamna look around her and she see Rajeev who has pain in his eyes
Swayam who was looking at her to scared her
She didn't knew what to do

Tears were falling from her eyes
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ok here is the part do coments

and sorry for the grammar mistakes as it's has been a long time i didnt write a part I forgot english a bit