Kissmat-Rajeev Aamna FF

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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hi gyus I will start my first fanfic on RA, It is named "Kissmat"
My crations:

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<font color="#ff66cc">Aamna Shariff as</font>

<font color="#ff66cc">Aamna Sihna/Garewal(23)</font>


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<font color="#0099ff">Rajeev Khandelwal as </font>

<font color="#0099ff">Rajeev Garewal(25)</font>


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<font color="#cc0066">Veena Garewal(46): Rajeev's mum</font>



<font color="#996666">Chetan Garewal(52): Rajeev's dad</font>



<font color="#ffcc00">Sanjana Garewal(17): Rajeev's sister</font>



<font color="#6699ff">Aman Garewal(17): Rajeev's brother</font>



<font color="#009999">Rishi Garewal(21): Rajeev's brother</font>



<font color="#ff6600">Lallit Garewal(54): Chetan's brother </font>



<font color="#660099">Vassu Garewal(51): Lallit s'wife</font>



<font color="#666666">Swayam Garewal(32): Vassu's son</font>



<font color="#996633">Archie Garewal(24): Swayam's sister</font>



<font color="#99cc00">Varun Garewal(23): Archie's brother</font>



<font color="#cc33cc">Mehek Garewal(21): Varun 's wife and Aamna's sister</font>



<font color="#ff9999">Charu Sihna(17): Aamna's sister</font>



<font color="#cc66ff">Kanan Sihna(19): Aamna's sister</font>



<font color="#33cc99">Akshat Shergill(20): Aamna's best friend</font>


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Aamna's mum is died 15 years ago, and Aamna's dad is died 2 years ago




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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Raj and Aamna...
awesome...
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thanx i will start my fanfic today if you don't mind can you prevent others people who is interest in RA? THANX
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Kissmat Part 1:
Aaj do loog ki zindagi badalne wali thi, unki shaadi hone wali thi wahain koi spcial guess nahin tha bus do char friends aur molvie/pandit aaj unko apni pehli mulakat ki yaad a rahi thi:

Flashback:

Ek larki ice-cream khate hue mall road pe chal rahi thi, Ek business man larka phone pe baat karte hue ussi road pe chal raha tha wo dono hit ho jate hai aur us larki ki ice-cream us larke ki shirt par Ghir jati hai

The girl: i'm really verry sorry
The boy: andi ho kya? dekhke nahin chal sakti
The girl:sorry
Jab wo larka palkein utha ke us larki ko dekhta hai to wo kahin kho jata hai
The girl: euh...sir
The boy:pls don't call me sir, call me Rajeev
The girl:ok sir...i mean Rajeev
Rajeev: and you what's your name
The girl: Aamna
Rajeev: nice name
Aamna: thanx
Rajeev: to maine aap ki ice-cream ghera di i'm sorry
Aamna: no it's ok
Rajeev: no it's not, to kya mein apni ghalati ko sudharne ke liye aap ko coffe shop le ja sakta houn
Aamna: sure
Flashback
Wo shaadi karke apne ghar ponchte hain
In the room:
Aamna: Rajeev
Rajeev: hhhmmm

Aamna: tum mujhe chor ke to kabi nahin jao ghe
Rajeev: nahin jaan, kabi nahin agar kismat me hamara saat lika hai to koi bhi hame juda nahin kar sakta
Aamna: i love you Raj
Rajeev: i love you too

They both hugs and they have a beautifull night😉
Morning:
Rajeev: Aamu jaan utho
Aamna: kya hai Raj sonne do
Rajeev: ok to me tumhare begher office chalta houn
Aamna: ok i'm gettting up
Rajeev Aamna ko chai deta hai
Aamna: thanx
Rajeev: tum uthne ke baad raat se bi zayda rhubsurat lag thi ho
Aamna: Rajeev!! tum phir shuru ho gaye☺️
Rajeev: acha jaldi karo miss Sihna ke saat meeting hai
Aamna: mere saat
Rajeev: nahin tum to Mrs Rajeev Garewal ho, wo Kanan(Aamna's sister) ek secretary ki job chahiye to maine kaha kyun na hamare office me join kar le
Aamna: aur tum mujhe nikal do ghe
Rajeev: arre maine kaab kaha ke wo meri secretary banne ghi
Aamna: hhhmmm that's better
Evening:
Raj Aamna TV dekh rahe the:
Aamna takhan ke mare apna sar Rajeev ke kande upar rakhleti hai
Rajeev: takh gaye ho
Aamna: nahin wo mein baas...
Rajeev: tumhe to jhut bolna bhi nahin ata to mere samne to...😆
you know what sach mein tumhari ankhon se partha houn
Aamna: itna pyaar karte ho
Rajeev: tumhe kya lagha, waise Aamna jab mein mar jaoungha tab tum kya karo ghi
Aamna:(uske moun par haath rakti hai)aisa tum kabhi sochna bhi maat, aur agar tumhe kuch ho gaya (with tears in her eyes)😭 to...mein...I...
Rajeev: arre Aamu pls don't cry mein to mazak kar raha tha
Aamna: aisa mazak kabi na karna
Rajeev: ok, waise kal hum honeymoon par ja rahe hain to maine sari packing karli hai
Aamna: thanx Rajeev
Rajeev: kisliye packing ke liye ya honeymoon ke liye
Aamna laugh and hug him
Morning:
Rajeev: Ghari mein 6 hours langhe ghein
Aamna: koi baat nahin tum jo mere saat ho
Rajeev radio on karta hai
Thora sa pyaar hua hai thora hai baaki
Hum to dil de hi chuke hooo
Hum to dil de hi nchuke baas teri haan hai baaki
Thora sa pyaar hua tha thora hai baaki
...
Lunch:
Aamna: Rajeev mein itna saara khana kaise khaoun ghi
Rajeev: tum ne hi to kaha tha ke bohot bhouk laghi
Aamna: iska matlab yeh nahin ke tum retaurant ka khanna mere saamne rakh do
Rajeev: kya mein apni biwi ko tikh se khanna bji nahin kela sakta
Aamna: Rajeev dekho maine tum se kaab kaha ke tum mujhe khanna nahin dete
Rajeev: kitni zidi ho tum
Aamna: tum ne kuch nahin order kya
Rajeev: nahin jo tum bacha do ghi wo mein kha loun gha
Aamna: nahin Raj chalo dono ek saat milke khathein hai
Afternoon:
Aamna(in her mind): yeh Rajeev kahain chala gaya aur yahain itna handera kyun hai
Rajeev(light on karta hai):SUPRISE!!!!!!! Happy valentines day Aamna
Aamna: ho Raj i'm so happy, tumhe yaad tha
Rajeev: of course
Aamna: the cake is beautifull
Rajeev: ya but tum se thora because tum se zayada kuch beautifull hai hi nahin
Aamna: thanx
Dinnner:
Rajeev: you are so pretty my beautifull wife
Aamna: thanx
Rajeev: kya logi
Aamna: jo tum chaho
Rajeev: nahin mein tuimhari passand ka khanna chahta houn
Aamna: ok so order karo
Wo khanna khatein hai
Aamna: oh no!!!
Rajeev: kya hua
Aamna: wo maine tumhare liye ek gift kharida tha lekin usse mein ghar par bhoulgai...oups
Rajeev: Gift? interesting
Aamna: aur aab maine suprise bhi fail kar diya
Rajeev: hey Aamu!!! you are the most beautifull gift for me
Aamna: really?
Rajeev: of course jaan
Tomorrow:
Aamna(in her mind): aab Raj perse kahain rheb ho gaya
Wo Rajeev ki diary dekhti hai aur usse parne lagti hai
Jab Raj wapas ata hai
Rajeev: Aamna tum meri diary par rahi thi
Aamna: Rajeev you are so sweet tum ne apni diary me har taraf meri pics laghi hui hain
Rajeev: it's ok, waise bhi mein tum se kya chupaoun gha
Aamna: hhmm tum ne itni dair kahain lagadi
Rajeev: market gaya tha lekin ek bacha wahain ghum ho gaya tha ro raha tha bechara
Aamna: you like kids
Rajeev: i love kids
Aamna: me too kids are so sweet, like little angel
Rajeev: to phir hamare phoure 10 bache honghe
Aamna: 10 BACHE??? are you crazy
Rajeev: kyun it's easy
Aamna: easy? for you sara dard to mujhe hi sehna parega
Rajeev: don't worry i'm with you ok
Aamna:hhhmm
Afternoon:
Rajeev: Aamna you are so beautifull
Aamna: Rajeev ya to tum jaan kar khe mere saat flirt karte ho aur ya tum paggal ho gaye ho
Rajeev: haan mein paggal ho gaya houn tumse paggal
Aamna: mein tumhe kabi bhi chor ke nahin jaoun ghi i promise you
Rajeev: mein bhi, tum janti ho mera jo papa hai na us ne kabhi mujhe pyaar nahin diya, par main main apne bachon ko khub sara pyaar dhoungha, mera papa kabhi bhi meri mumma ke saat nahin rahe par mein i promise you tumhari har pregnancy meh hamesha tumhare saat rahoun gha
Aamna: Rajeev i think ke tumare papa ki koi majbouri ho ghi
Rajeev: majbouri? Aamna tum unhe nahin janti i hate him wo meri mumma ke saat hamesha bura soluk kartein hai
Aamna: aur tumhari mumma
Rajeev: mumma to bechari kabi kuch nahin kehti sara ghar ka kaam akeli kartin hai, Vassu auntie bhi uski madat nahin kartin
Aamna:Vassu auntie kaun hai
Rajeev: a big witch
Aamna: what?
Rajeev:i'm joking yaar chalo
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ok gyus so here the first part i will try to post the next part soon and plsss do comments
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Rajeev: Aamna ankhein band hi rakhna hum pounchne wale hain
Aamna: ok, par hum ja kahain rahe hain?
Rajeev: sshhh, bohot bolti ho tum pure raste mera sar kha diya
Aamna: hhhmm, tum bhi kuch kam nahin
Rajeev: ab tum pls naraz maat ho
Aamna: ok but i hate you
Rajeev: i love you too jaan, achaa stop yahin ruk jao
Aamna: kyun?
Rajeev: ankhein kholo
Aamna ankhein kholti hai to she sees a dinner table with candles
Aamna: Rajeev!!!! thanx it's so beautifull
Rajeev: pls tum mujse thanx maat kaha karo
Aamna: mein duniya ki saab se rushnassib auraat houn ke mujhe tum jehsa jiwansaati mila hai
Rajeev: nahin Aamu khushnassib to mein houn
Aamna: achaa ankhein band karo
Rajeev: kyun?
Aamna: Raj ankhein band karo na
Rajeev: ok
Aamna aapne pirse me se ek har(necklace) nikal thi hai jiske pendant ke andar unki ek pic hoti hai:
Aamna: ankhein kholo
Rajeev ankhein kolke us har ko dekhta hai
Rajeev: oh my godd! Aamna yeh kitna kimti har hai
Aamna: mere liye tumse koi bhi chize kimti nahin hai
Rajeev: yeh bohot khubsurat hai thanx
Aamna: no thanx to me
Rajeev: sorry
Aamna: no sorry to me
Rajeev: err...ok, waise yeh dusra wala box khali kyun hai
Aamna: jab hamare bache honghe tab hum unki pic idhar dalhein ghe
Rajeev: tumhe nahin lagta ke dus bachoun ke liye ek box chota hai
Aamna: shut up Rajeev
Rajeev: ok dear biwi
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Rajeev: Aamna aaj tum bohot achii lag rahi ho
Aamna: haan haan
Rajeev: tum meri baat ka yakiin nahin karti
Aamna: nahin mein tum jaise stupid larke ki baat ka yakiin nahin karti
Rajeev: acha abhi dekhata houn ke mujhaise stupid larke kya karsakte hain
Rajeev Aamna ko gugudi karne laghta hai
Aamna(laugh): stop it Rajeev!!!!!...hahahaha
Aamna Rajeev se apne ap ko chura ke daur ne lagti hai
Rajeev uske piche daur tha hai, wo Aamna ko piche se pakar ke hug karleta hai, phir wo uske neck par kiss karta hai
Aamna: Rajeev kya kar rahe ho choro mujhe
Rajeev: apni biwi se pyaar kar raha houn
Aamna: loog kiya sochein ghe pls ab tum choro mujhe
Rajeev: yahi ke mein aapni biwi se kitna pyaar kar tha houn
Aamna: choro na Raj
Rajeev: ek shart pe
Aamna: kya
Rajeev: mujhe ek kiss do
Aamna: yahain sab ke saamne no way
Rajeev: ghar jake
Aamna: ok, lekin aab choro mujhe
Rajeev Aamna ko chor deta hai
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Night:
Rajeev: Aamna tum ruk kyun gaye
Aamna: wo Raj mujhe tumse baat karni hai
Rajeev: bolo
Aamna: wo jab tum washroom meh the tumhara phone aya tha aur ek Archie ki call thi...
Rajeev: i hate her, Aamu belive me kya mein tumhe thoka de sakta houn
Aamna: nahin
Rajeev: to phir, Archie meri cousin hai, jab bhi mein tum se milne ata tha jab bhi mein tumhari tarrif karta tha wo jalti thi ab wo hamare bich problems creates karna chahe ghi par Aamna hum aisa nahin hone denghe hamare pyaar ki jhiit ho ghi
Aamna: i love you
Rajeev: i love you too jaan
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Raj Aamna honeymoon se wapas atein hain
Morning:
Rajeev: Aamu princess
Aamna: Jii
Rajeev: wo kal mere ghar wale yahin rahe hain to hum unhe airport se lene jayenghe
Aamna: ok, per Rajeev in do mahinoun meh wo loog kahain the
Rajeev: wo ek project se bahar gaye the lekin aab shimla wapas a rahein hai
Aamna: Raj kya wo mujhe accept karein ghe
Rajeev: don't worry maine mumma ko shaadi ke baare mein bata diya hai, aur unhe koi prob nahin
Aamna: aur tumhare dad
Rajeev: unko mein samjaloun gha waise bhi unki marzi mere ke liye maine nahin rakh thi mumma rhush hain main rhush houn tum rhush ho muje aur kuch nahin chahye
Aamna: achaa yeh lo tumhara walet aur jaldi karo tum late ho rahe ho
Rajeev kisses her forehead and go
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i will try to post the next part soon and plsss do comments
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Kissmat Part 3:
Aamna aur Rajeev airport Rajeev ki family ko pik karne
Aamna: bohot pyaar karte ho tum apni mumma se
Rajeev: haan autna jitna tum se karta houn
Aamna: Rajeev i promise mein unke saat achaa behave Karoun ghi
Rajeev: Aamna tum pe to mera poura yakin hai per wo loog kaisa behave karein ghe i don't know
Aamna: don't worry
Rajeev: oh! dekho wo meri mumma hein chalo mujhe dound rahi hai
Rajeev Veena ko hugs karleta hai
Veena: i miss you a lot betta kaise ho tum
Rajeev: thik houn aur aap
Veena: hhhmm
Rajeev notice karta hai ke Veena Aamna ko dekh rahi hai
Rajeev: mumma yeh...
Veena: sshh yeh meri bahu hai na
Rajeev: haan
Aamna: hi antie
Veena: tum mujhe mumma bula sakti ho
Aamna(rhushi se): ok mumma
They hug
Rajeev: agar apki maan betti ka drama rhatam ho gaya to kya mein pouchsakta houn ke baki ki family kahain hai
Veena: chup!! aur rhabardar jo meri betti ko tang kya, atein hogein wo dusre
Aamna Rajeev ko dekhti hai 😛
Rajeev:(whisper) tumhe to mein raat ko dekh loungha
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They reach home:
Vassu: ghar wapas aane ka maza mein to abhi apne room me rest karti houn
Rishi: big mujhe apne room me kuch kaam hai
Aman: big saman laiye hum upar rak dete hain
Aman aur Varun luggage uppar lejatein hai
Mehek: Di!! kaisi hain aap
Aamna: perfectly fine aur tum
Mehek: thik houn
Sanjana: aap big b ki wife hain na
Aamna: haan aur aap
Sanjana: OMG big b aur aap akele itne din is bare se ghar me
Mehek: shut up Sanju!!
Sanjana: i'm just jocking, sorry bhabhi wo kya hai na mujhe thora nasha chara hua hai apne bhai ki shaadi ka, aur pls mujhe aap maat bulaye jab koi mujhe aap bula tha hai to mujhe lagta hai ki mein paraiye houn
Aamna: hi! Sanjana right
Sanjana: aap ko kaise pata
Aamna: Sanju Sanjana ka hi Nick Name hai
Chetan: yeh kya tamasha hai Rajeev kaun hai yeh
Rajeev: meri biwi
Chetan: WHAT???
Rajeev: aap chaliye mein aap se baad mein baat karta houn
Rajeev Veena ko dekhta hai
Veena: mein khanna banati houn
Aamna: wait mumma mein apki madat karti houn
Wo kitchen mein chali jati hain
Rajeev: to mein keh raha tha ke Aamna meri biwi hai aur aap sab ko uske saat acha behave karna chahiye warna bohot bura hoga
Chetan: shut up!!!! tum ne shaadi karli aur hume bataya tak nahin
Rajeev: jin logon par yakiin tha unhe bataya
Vassu: Chetan tum ne to apne bette ko Archie ke liye promise kiya tha, aur tum shame on you and your wife!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Varun: mom Aamna bhabhi it's not shame for us
Rishi: haan correct aur khabardar jo mere big b ko ghali di
Sanjana: baas!!!! tum loog sab bhabhi ki issat karo ghe, aur aab chalo khanna khatein hain
Aamna hear the conversation
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Dinner:
Lallit: khanna kis ne banaya
Veena: Aamna ne i'm so lucky ki mujhe Aamna jaisi bahu mili
Archie: mumma namak kum hai
Vassu jan bujh ke pasna ka natak karti hai
Vassu: mein restaurant se kha ati houn
Varun: stop it mom!! khanna bohot achha hai
Sanjana: ya good work babhi it's very testy
Aamna: thanx
Chetan: it's very bad!!!!MERI BAHU KO KHANNA BHI NAHIN BHANANA ATA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aamna uth jati hai
Aamna: excuse me
Archie: no!! you are not excuse!!!!
Aamna run to her room with teary eyes
Rajeev C.G ko narvas ho ke dekhta hai aur Aamna ke piche jata hai
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Rajeev: Aamu jaan maine tumse kaha tha na wo aisa hi hai tum uski bathon ki taraf dayan maat do pls don't cry
Aamna: nahin Raj maine sab sun liya wo tumari shaadi Archie se karna chahthe the isliye ab wo mujhe is ghar se nikalne ke liye sab kuch karenghe
Rajeev: aur tum unhe karne dogi, agar tum unki batein ignore karo to wo shaant ho jaye ghein, aab pls ro maat you know ke jab tum roti ho tumhare ansoon mere dil pe kya guzarthe hain, ek hag si...
Aamna:(apne ansoun pounch leti hain) nahin mein nahin rohoun ghi
Rajeev: good hamare pyaar ki jiit hogi
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ok guys ek kaam pargaya next part soon
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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part 2
so they got married without Raj's family's knowledge...
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part 3
his dad is so bad...
cont soon...
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Thanx Verry much for all your comment
Can you pls give me the link of RA fc
Ya C.G is so bad but the most bad in my ff it's swayam you can see after
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
so they got married without Raj's family's knowledge...


Hmmm only Veena and her kids know
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Originally posted by: Imanezara

Thanx Verry much for all your comment
Can you pls give me the link of RA fc
Ya C.G is so bad but the most bad in my ff it's swayam you can see after



there are so many links...u want the FFs' links or the Fan club links?

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