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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: spvd

part 26
awesome...

Thanks
poor Aamna...
idiot Raj saw only that scene...
😆Don't be angry
ankhon ka dhoka
poor him
cont soon...
ok will try

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

thank you for the pm..good update..

Welcum to my story, Thank u for reading and commenting😊

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Recap: Rajeev sees Aamna with Akshat and later he come home drunk

Kissmat part 27:
Garewal house:
Morning 8pm
After that Rajeev fall asleep last night...Veena has come in his room and seeing her son's state she falls asleep too holding his hand after crying silently
Back to now Rajeev was waking up slowly
He was still mumbling Aamna's name
As he was sleeping holding her dupatta...when he feels a hold on his hand Rajeev think that its Aamna
He holds Veena 's hand more tight thinking its Aamna's
Rajeev: Aamna...Aamu...love you jaanu...
Veena also gets up
Veena: Rajeev...
Rajeev: haan
Veena: Rajeev I'm...
Rajeev(cuts in between): i know you are pregnant and tired...to phir niche kyun so rahi ho jaan...come beside me naa
Veena sits on the bed near him and start rubbing her fingers in his hair
Rajeev has now woke up complitely and he feels that something is wrong...this touch is not Aamna's
He look up
Rajeev: mumma...
Veena: haan betta
Rajeev:Aamna kahan hai
Veena: wo to apne ghar pe hogi
Rajeev: nahi mumma dekhiye naa uska dupatta mere paas hai...kal raat...kal raat wo mere paas yahan pe soiye thi...she told me that she love me...aap dekhiye naa wo yahi kahin hogi...
Veena: betta maybe you have seen a dream
Rajeev: nahi...i remember she was worried seeing me drunk...she take care of me...u know mumma usne mujse kaha tha ke wo mujse bohot pyaar karti hai...phir wo yahan meri bahon me so gaye...she is kind of cute mumma
Veena: betta tumne sapna dekh hoga
Rajeev become to think that it was a dream
But what he does not know was that Aamna really told him that she loves him
Rajeev was getting angry on himself for always thinking about her
He gets up and goes to the washroom
Rajeev(to himself): Aamna...Aamna. ...always Aamna...KYUN. ...KYUN TUM USSE BHUL NAHI JATE...bhul jao usse Rajeev...bhul jao...stop thinking about her...stop caring about her...JUST STOP...she cheated me...dhoka diya usne mujhe...DHOKA(tears start falling from his eyes). ...mujhe tumse badla lenna hoga...jo dard tumne mujhe diya kisi aur ke saath apna ghar bhassa ke muhe bhi tumhe wohi dard denna hoga...takleef pochani hogi tumhe...yeh jante hue bhi ke tumhari takleef meri takleef hai...jab tumhe chot lagti hai to dard mujhe hota hai...lekin ab nahi...now I must hurt you...I must think about my new life with Archie...You are now my dushman Mrs Aamna...(he cant even said it) Shergill ***************************************************************************************
Agar bechare Rajeev ka yeh haal hai to aab dekhte hai ke wahan Aamna ka kya haal hai
So Aamna and Charu were sleeping
Aamna woke up and see she is holding Rajeev and her wedding pic
She smile seeing the pic
Then she remember that she was feeling something bad last night
She take her phone and call R&G house
Sanjana pick up
Sanjana: hello
Aamna: hello Sanju
Sanjana(happily): bhabhi...kaissi hai aap
Aamna: I'm fine...wo...Rajeev kaissa hai...is he allright
Sanjana: big b...donno bhabhi kal raat it was 11pm and he was not back...main to so gaye thi phir
Aamna: can u please check if he is fine
Sanjana: ya sure...wait
Sanjana walk in the corridor with the phone in her hand
She meet Aman
Aman: hi sis
Sanjana: hi Aman...do you know where is big b
Aman: main to ja raha houn...you come with me we are going out with some friends aur big b to late uthe ghein...pehli baat its sunday aur dusri baat ke kaal raat he comes home drunk...in a very bad state...
Aamna was hearing
Sanjana: ok wait 5mins I see how is big b then i'm coming
Aman: ok fine
Sanjana goes to Rajeev's room
Sanjana: Big B
Rajeev(from the washroom): hhmm who is it
Sanjana: its Sanju...big aap kaisse hain
Rajeev: oh please don't even ask me...i have an horrible headache...waisse tum kyun puch rahi ho
Sanjana: nahi wo bhabhi puch rahi thi
Rajeev: oh kahan hai
Sanjana: phone par
Rajeev: hhmm
Sanjana: kaal raat kya hua
Rajeev: donno i was drinking in a bar with a beautifull lady...she was sexy and hot
Sanjana:what how dare you aap ki shaadi honne wali hai
Rajeev: arre yaar shaadi ho chuki hai...divorce bhi ho chuka hai...i am free now
This words hurt Aamna as she was hearing everything
Sanjana: wo...i mean Archie
Rajeev: kya yaar...she is also a pass time like Aamna was
A tear drop from Aamna's eyes but she knew that Rajeev is just angry on
Her because of what she did...she knew he love her
Sanjana: by the way Aman and me are going out with a few friends i think lunch bhi bahar kare ghe
Rajeev: ok i am coming just 2mins
Sanjana: what
Rajeev: i am coming with you
Sanjana: but you are older than us
Rajeev: to kya hua...it does not mean that i cant enjoy myself
Sanjana: yaa ok hurry up
Rajeev come out with a jean and bare cheast...his hair and chest are wet...he is looking damn sexy like this
Rajeev: i am ready...chalein
Sanjana: are you serious...kaal raat ki abhi tak chari hui hai kya...goes and wear your clothes
Aamna was shocked hearing this😲
Rajeev: are nahi Sanju I am more hot like that is there any pretty gal in your few friends
Sanjana: BIG B!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If u want to come with us wear your shirt
Rajeev: ok dont be angry😛
Sanjana: ya hurry up we are waiting for you downstairs
Saying this she goes from there
Sanjana: hello bhabhi
Aamna(trying to being normal after what all she hear): ya hello
Sanjana: big bis fine nothing much just a headache as he has drinking last night
Aamna: ok thanks
Sanjana: bhabhi aapse milne ka itna dil karta hai lekin time hi nahi milta
Aamna: haan i miss you also
Aman: Sanjana
Sanjana: ya coming...ok bhabhi phir main chalti houn
Aamna: ok bye take care
Aamna Put the phone on the table and look at charu...she was sleeping like a baby
Aamna smile
She gets up and start making the breakfast
Few mins later Kanan come in the kichten
Kanan(sleepishly): good morning dii
Aamna: oh Kanan you are awake (they both hug each other) how are you
Kanan: fine...par aap kaissi hai...raat ko aapki tabiyat bohot kharab ho gaye thi...Charu doctor nahi hoti to main aapko hospital le jaati...bohot ro rahi thi aap...kcuh ghabraiye si lag rahi thi
Aamna: main thik houn don't worry...tum betto main tumhare liye breakfast le kar aati houn
Kanan: ok...
Kanan goes and sits and
Aamna sits near her too
Kanan: waisse dii where is Charu
Aamna: she is sleeping...bohot thak jati hogi
Kanan: bohot thak jaati hogi(sarcasltly) ...dii abhi..dekhna 10am Akshat ka phone aygha he will said lets go out...and then she will come back around 6pm in the evening with Akshat who will does dinner here and they will wath a horror movie aur Akshat darr ke Charu se lipat jaye gha...then Charu will drop him at his house and come back at 10pm...har sunday ko yehi hota hai...i am bore alone at home Aamna laugh
Aamna: to that's good naa they spend time togheter...and now you are not alone...i am here
Kanan: oh thank you dii
Aamna: you know even i am bore when you all are are your work in the week
Kanan: sorry dii
Aamna: its ok isme tumhara kya kusur
10 mins later...mean 10 am
Charu's mobile ring...she pick up and come out of her room( you know how is Sinnah house...Living and dinning room in the same piece and the dinning room is separate of the the corridor were are the rooms by a railing) so Charu come out of her room talking on phone with Akshat
Charu:...haan...ya ya...out...ok no probs...in 10mins...at the park...ok...ya...see you
She cut the phone and runn in her room
Aamna look at Kanan with a "isse kya hua" look
Kanan: see ...i told you
2mins later
Charu come back wearing what she find
Aamna: good morning Charu
Charu:haan haan good morning
She said it without even looking at Aamna
Charu takes her purse...a toast and goes from there
Aamna gets up and follow her
Aamna(running behind her): Charu...Charu...please rukko Charu
Charu stop running
Charu: what hurry up dii
Aamna: nashta to karlo aisse kahan ja rahi ho
Charu: Akshat ke saat
Aamna: ok par Akshat will understand if you come late
Charu: its not only Akshat dii...we are going with some friends...
Aamna: lekin phir bhi nashta to karlo
Charu: dii please aap ghar jaiye aisse kaisse nightie me a gaye
AaMna: its not good for you
Charu: dii i am not pregnant like you are...so please aap ghar jaiye aur nashta kar lijiye...
Charu start running again and
Aamna start running behind her
Aamna: please Charu
Charu: dii stopp running...if something happen to you because of me i will never forgot myself
Aamna: lekin Charu kuch to kha lo (breating fast)
Charu: dii u know i will not eat my breakfast and miss my bus
Aamna: Charu pls for me
Charu: ufffo dii you are so irritating
Aamna stop as she cant runn more
Charu(still runnig): bye dii take care
Aamna(saddly): bye
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When Charu and Akshat reach the park
There were Rajeev, Sanjana and Aman with some friends
Ok friend 1: a boy...Rahul...Aman's close friend...played by Sharukh khan
Friend 2: a gal...Anjali...Charu's close friend...played by Kajol...Gf of Rahhul
Friend 3: A gal...Preity...who Rajeev is using to flirt with today...close friend of Sanjana...played by Preity Zinta
Friend 4: a boy...Imraan...Akshat's close friend...played by Salman khan
Charu: hi gyus
Sanjana: hi Charu
They both hug
Rajeev get angry seeing Akshat there
Aman: hey Akshat
Akshat: hey how are you Aman
Charu: Hi jiju
Preity: jiju? Are you married
Rajeev: of course no I think you must have mistaken miss
Rahul: ok you care for going to the beach
Rajeev: beach...yes my pleasure(looking at Preity)
So the beach
Charu, Akshat, Sanjana, Aman and Imraan were playing volley ball and enjoying very much
Rahul Anjali were walking hand in hand on the beach
And Rajeev and Preity were swimming and enjoying the sea
Rajeev: hey
He splashes her with the water
Preity: Oh you will regret this my boy
She splashes him
They both keep laughing and enjoying
some time later they return to the sand and sit hugging each other
Preity: am I your first girl friend
Rajeev: no
Preity: pehli kaun thi
Rajeev: it was a gal...a behenji type of girl I really don't like her so I break up
Preity laugh
Rajeev: come let's eat some ice cream
Sanjana and Charu were watching and hearing all that and they feels bad
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Sinnah house:
After lunch Kanan were watching TV
Aamna comes and sit behind her
Aamna: Kanan kya kar rahi ho
Kanan: I am watching some interwiew dekhiye naa
How these all people are happy
Aamna: yaa...It was a time this place was a deserted beach...and now look
Kanan: this is great our city keep improving
Aamna: hhmm I like that
Kanan: Dii dekhiye It's Akshat and Charu!!!!!!!!!
Aamna: kahan
Kanan: here
Aamna: oh there are Sanjana and Aman also
Kanan: wwooww kash main bhi wahan hoti...(then she notices something and become sad)
Aamna: hey whet happen
Kanan: Dii I'm sorry but...dekhiye it's jiju with another girl they are kissing each other...
Aamna see that and tears start falling from her eyes
Kanan does not notices that
Kanan: Dii kam se kam jiju ko bahar to aissa nahi karna chaiye tha pehle bhi bohot behesati karli unhone aapki
Aamna(crying): stop it Charu pls...switch off the TV
Kanan(holds her hand): Dii...are u ok
Aamna hugs her tight
Aamna: why it's happen to me...why to me
Kanan: sshh Dii maat roiye chaliye hum kuch film dekhte hai
Aamna: no thank tum dekho
She gets up and run to her room crying loudly
She lock the door
Kanan goes to her
Kanan: Dii...please roiye maat...aap ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye ghi...Dii please...I know it's difficult but...please Dii open the door
Aamna: Kanan pls leave me alone
Kanan goes from there as she knew that Aamna would not listen to her
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Garewal House
C.G: To Lallit main tumse Rajeev aur Archie ki baat karna chahta tha
Lallit: haan C.G main bhi yeh hi soch raha tha ke kyun naa hum jald se jald unki, shaadi karwa dhe
Vassu: to phir kyun naa hum agle hafte unki engagement karein
C.G: Haan that's a good idea...Vassu you are impressive...wah..wah kash Veena bhi tumhari jaissi hoti
Veena hears all that
She had tears in her eyes not because Chetan insult hger yeh to uski purani aadat hai because Chetan will more compliced the life of her son by tying him in a false relashion cheap
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ok it's a short part but I am posting in my lunch time so must go now bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Hi Iman!!
Thank you so much for the Pm..as always I always enjoyed reading this update..cool..Shahrukh ,Kajol and Preity is in your fanfic..I really enjoyed it..Grr Rajeev..why is he always doing this to himself?!😭😭 God!!..Please rajeev yaar...bas karo aab...why does he always thinks that Aamna is cheating with him?...bechari Aamna..she is being upset with the kind of remark which rajeev has passed on her..Please Rajeev...aab bas karo yaar...its high time that you change.😭😭..otherwise he will deffinetly regret it in the big time!!..Continue soon dear!!😃😃
Edited by VishakaGal12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
part 27
awesome...
poor them...
OMG Raj what is he doing?
poor Aamna...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Thank You for reading and commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hi Iman!!

Thank you so much for the Pm
Welcome..as always I always enjoyed reading this update.I'm Glad that you like it .cool..Shahrukh ,Kajol and Preity is in your fanfic..I really enjoyed it..Grr Rajeev..why is he always doing this to himself?!He is somhow lost he donno what he want don't be angry on him😭😭 God!!..Please rajeev yaar...bas karo aab...why does he always thinks that Aamna is cheating with him?Because she said it by her own mouth otherwise he would never trust someone else...bechari Aamna..she is being upset with the kind of remark which rajeev has passed on her..Yaa that was funny Please Rajeev...aab bas karo yaar...its high time that you change.😭😭..otherwise he will deffinetly regret it in the big time!!..Continue soon dear!!😃😃Ok, thanks for commenting 😊

Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waaao jst amazing fan fiction jst love them...amazing yaar too good zara..love u🤗👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehaksabreen27

waaao jst amazing fan fiction jst love them First welcum to my FF...I'm glad that you enjoy as much reading my FF..amazing yaar too good zara..love u🤗👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank u very much for loving my FF...Keep commenting like that...it's really encouraging to read comments like this one 😊⭐️
PS: my name is Imane...you can also call me zara as it's my other name😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear readers
I'm very sorry that I could not post the part yet
And even I cant for the few next weeks
Tuesday was my "conseil de classe" the results are not so good
And the 19th December it will "la remise des bulletins"
And as all that was not enough a girl
complaint about me and my few friends that we followed her and insulted her wich is not true we were just in our way to go home!!!!!!!!
Just for that she complaint at the police station and we have very serious problems😭
Because of her we have a "conseil de discipline" at 16th december in which we can get exclude from our college
yesterday The mom of one of my friend come at the college and try to explain to my "PP" but she said she cant do anything
Today with the mother of my another friend my cousin(who was also in) goes to the police station to explain and then donno what happen
Really I'm angry with this gal this year we win that our class will organise the "salon du polar" and we couldn't because the police prevent the Mayor of MLC
But I'm a bit happy that instead of me my bro's class organise it they does a perfect work
by writing a book I'm proud of them
Hope all get well soon and I can post the next part soon
I hope you readers understand me
And I thank all of you for
-reading my FF
-Supporting me
-commenting
Sorry again I know they are sompe new readers who are waiting eagerly for the next part
And deepa also who always comment
Thank to
-Deepa
-Manju
-Surya
-Mehek
-Vishaka
Imane
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago

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