Be-intehaan virman ff #1

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
New FF!! Wohoo!! Superb prologue Lara!! Manvi is pregnant! And here Virat found some photographs of Manvi & Karan and he thought she cheated on him! Starting mein hi jhatka de diya .. So Virman separation is on the way.. Please continue soon.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care

Thanks... 😊...Haa haa haa... never felt so happy giving such jhatka... haa haa...You tooo three take care...

Quote

Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: hangok
looks really interesting , continue and please write only in english that i can understand everything

thanks for pm

Thanks 😊 ...And I will try to translate the dialogues from now on in english but I cant do it with the songs or shayaris yaar... 😕...Thanks for sharing your problem...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Niaksharma
Thanks for pm..
Looking great story concept...
Waiting for next

Ohh... thats my pleasure... 😊...Thanks fr th comment khushi...

Quote

Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN
interesting concept

Thanks dear... 😃

Quote

manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

sad update...

feeling sad for manvi...

plzzz update it quick...

Quote

unknown

@anu0555

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

emti0nal yr !! bt awsm t00000 !!!!

superbly wrttn n nyc cncpt !!!

n thnx 4 PM !!

plz.. update s00n Lara !!

w8n desPerateLy 4 nxt part !!

n i mst say u r vry gud writtr !!!

<3 u aL0t !!!

Quote

richa002

@richa002

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Awsome update...
Virat didnt trust her...
Nd asked manvi to get out of his life..virat is going to regret for this...
Update soon..

Quote

rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Wowww superb updt...trully mindblowing...watever decision manvi took was perfectly allright...wating fr the next...pls updt soon m pm me

Quote

roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

nice emotional update..feeling really bad for manvi.. virat was too harsh wiz her..." Take this bas***d thing in your womb away from me... but he will surely regret this later.. he is so blinded by his jealousy and anger.. hope karan has nothing to do with those pictures..continue soon..

Quote

Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Amazing update
poor soul manvi
im just thinking wen virats finds out the truth hw disgusted he will feel on himself
love ur choice of song in the end
im really loving this so plzzz continue reallyy quickly 😉

Quote

1 ... 5 6 7 8 9 ... 108

Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 7

Related Topics

Explore Topics