Be-intehaan virman ff #1

Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Ankita1997
new ss wohoo!
it is amazing and interesting
virman separation and kids and all
update asap
thnkx for the pm

Thanks a lot ankita... 😊...

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow what a beginning,
poor manvi,
virat im sure you will regret it soon...
hope he finds the truth soon but dont want manvi to forgive him so easily...

thanks for pm
now waiting for the next part😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: richa002
Interesting prologue..
Love to read more...
Update soon
Thanxxx for pm

Thanks richa... 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: roshreb
awesome prologue.. loving the concept.. so virat's love will be replaced by hatred for manvi nw...continue soon...

Thanks a lot dear... 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: nimi00
Loved the prologue. The title is awesome. Aww pregnant Mannu and mad Viru, this should be interesting. thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot yaar... 😊 Take care...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

jia123sagarawesome prologue

plz update soon

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Garimavirmanksg

Its awesm...do pm me whn u update

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prathe

wow yaar interesting do continue soon... ------------------------------------ Thanks guys... 😊 😊... thanks a lot for your comments and encouragements... Ireally appreciate all of my readers comments...So replying by hook or by crook...😆 😆...

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Tuba KHAn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

awW my manvi .. 😭
Q piche par gaen hn sb bechari k .. Every writer is just doing attiyachaar with her 😭.. not fair .. but what to do now 😕.. Concept is far acceptable 😊 then my demand to see virat suffer "" vo b wesa wala jese manvi suffer krti h cox of virat in almost every FF ""😭🤢 .. don't look at me like this , i was just saying .. 😃
Any ways .. the concept was really nice n interesting 👏.. PART 1 was awesome 👍🏼 .. never thought k VIRAT esa Bole ka apne hi Unborn kO .. 😭
Cont. soon , m interested !! 😉😊

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Supereb

liked it...
Too good...
Thanks for pm...
Awesome

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nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

awesome
so emotional
feeling bad for maanvi
waiting to read more
please continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm

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nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Very emotional 1st chapter. So Virat thinks the child is Karan's? Aww, beechara Manvi. I understand since he is doubting the photos, but still I felt bad for her. It was a really good start. Continue soon. 😊

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