Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Superb update!! 👏👏 Very emotional one.. Virat was so mean and rude to Manvi.. He was completely blinded by his anger and hatred.. His words were so harsh.. He didn't even let her speak anything.. I just hated him in this update 😡.. He called his own child 'bas***d' and asked Manvi to leave his house.. It was so heart breaking 🥺.. Feeling so bad for Manvi 😭😭.. I'm glad she left him.. She made the right decision.. Nice song selection 😊.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Take care 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: alicemath
Awsum prologue...Really interesting...seems to b quite an intense one...m in...plz do pm me wen ya update!!!

Thanks a lot huh... 😊 😊...Am so happy that you are in yaiii...😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Huma0301
Wow amazing
loved the prologue
im really excited to read this
virmans relationship at stake omg cnt wait
plzzz update quickly

Hey thanks dear... 😃...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
woww serious wala ff from you sounds really exciting
and the prologue makibg it sound super duper exciting ...its gonna be virmsn separation...
or wait if virat gets to know tht manvi is pregnant now he mite even think tht the kid is nt his ...
update chap 1 sooon cant wait for long

Yes rei... serious wala laga dala...Lets see if this becomes jingalala... 😃 😉...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Syed695
Interesting..!!!! Waiting fr the upcoming updates..!

Thanks yaar... 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: abbay
prologue itself tells that this will gonna be a very emo ss! continue soon

Thanks dear... thanks a lot for your comment... 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: anu0555
nice yr !
n intrstng too !!
i Lvd it !!!
update s00n !!! n thnxx al0t
4 pm !!

Oye thanks !!!... 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: .Yamin.
Superb start !! awesome concept !!! :D virman separation !! manvi pregnant !!! omg soo intense !!! can't wait for part 1 !!! update soon :D will be eagerly waiting !! thanx for the pm :)

Ohhh!!!... Thanks a ton yaar... 😊...