Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: keertu
nice concept continue soon

Thanks keertu... 😊 ...

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

nice update he MU her
and he was not ready to accepted unborn child
and tell her to live house and his life update soon

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: nrithyao
nice concept
loved it
please continue soon

Hey thanks... 😊 😊 ...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shaimah
Awesome prologue
Continue soon and please do pm me!!

Thanks a lot shaimah... 😃...And yeah will surely pm you...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rida12ka4
loving it plzz jaldi start karooo

Thanks dear and maine updt bhi kardi...😃...Pm will be coming soon...

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Lovely concept...

Feel really sad for Virat and Manvi...

Pleasee continue soon..

And pleasee PM me alsoo...

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

This is juz fabulous !!!👏👏👏 it was soo emotional n intense !!!! ;'( feel bad for manvi !!! n virat harsh words to the baby !!!soo heart wrenching !!! 😔 the song was perfect !!! loved the update !!! ❤️ this is really interesting n superb !! waiting for next !!! continue soon if possible !!! thanks for the upcoming pm :D

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

hey again new ff haan aur kitni baki hai 😆 anyways prologue was nice nd i want to say one thing hope u dnt mind that it is very similar to mine ff hum bewfa hargis na the bt hope story will be different which am sure will definately. Thanx for the pm waiting for 1st part eagerly

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

awesome start

so emotional

virat told her leave the house

poor maanvi

virat hate her

plz cont soon

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

what a curtain raiser yaar...!!!virat n his love for manvi was evident but the fact highlighted was his insecurity n jealous... he just failed to trust his wife, the girl he loved n now the to be mother of his unborn child. virat was soo much blinded by anger that he even doubted on manvi of being pregnant with karan's child n then... then came the unexpected... him adressed his own child... his own blood as a piece of shitt...

continue soon... waiting for the next updt...

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