Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jannat89

YIPEE YIPEE YIPEE
I'm 1st to comment. . . Oppsi 2nd one
awesome update
but u r such a devil girl, how could u stopped it here
i'm with Manvi poor girl, hate virat here agrrr
waiting 4 next part
thanx in advance 4 pm
update soon
take care

Originally posted by: keertu

u made me cry

poor manvi

y virat dint beleive her plz continue soon

i want to knw wat will happen next plzzz

Originally posted by: tanishalnk

It's amazing. ..poor manvi...
Plz update soon nd pm me

Originally posted by: shaimah

Omg!! The update was aweaome
Loved it
Poor manvi felt so bad for her and her baby...it was so sad
Virat is so going to regret this. ..
Who sent those pics? And where is manvi going...so many qns.. excitwd for the next part
Continue soon and please do pm me!!!

Originally posted by: alicemath

Awsum update...yet another beautiful story by u...m already luving it!!!!

Virat was a bit too harsh but m sure he wud hav to regret his decision later...poor Manvi...

Eagerly waiting for the next...Plz cont asap n do pm me wen u update!!

Originally posted by: prathe

super story dear interested to read more after reading first part ...
how the story progresses frm this part...
do update soon...

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

i guessed it right virat thinks its karan's kid ...jealousy and hatred has overtaken his heart full of love and trust hope he realises that he has committed a grave mistake ...
feeling really bad for manvi she has to be all alone wen she needs virat the most and also virat's harsh words she gt to live with tgem
and the song perfect for the situation ...
awesome update just tooo emotionall ...
plz pls plz next part sooon