Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 7

Was damn gud...plz continue soon dear

Originally posted by: Sumana123

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#ff00cc">Guess What ?? All through the update I had Butterflies flying in my stomach and the reason is this exciting Update. Like seriously each line I was waiting what comes next and what he says and what she says. This is straight out of College </font><font color="#0000ff">"In Real Terms"</font><font color="#ff00cc"> no extra falling and pulling things😉...Ria the damn sensible girl , I loved what she said to Viraat and Maanvi in canteen. Like a true friend she warned both to stay in limits. Maanvi's feeling are truly like madly in love with a Crush. And Viraat is a genuinely nice guy and </font><font color="#0000ff">"Cares"</font><font color="#ff00cc"> for Maanvi. Well I don't know why Boys Hover over this Care and Concern word whenever they truly fall for a girl. I think its in there genes. No really I have seen a few like this in my life so far.😆😆That's why we call Boys are little lacking in brain. </font><font color="#0000ff">The best part which I loved a lot as I was not expecting it in the FF was when Viraat tells Karan that he knows Maanvi like him and that's why he is stay away from her and also reduced texting series. It did hurt me but I clapped for Viraat that times but again guys always do that when they know that a Girl has fallen for them so the retract. </font><font color="#ff00cc">Initially I was also scared that Mannu might face a heart break due to this friendship but you handled it so well and I loved it.</font></font>

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<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">College Love Story in true sense. Ria and Karan are playing their Cupid roles too well. I can imagine how angelic Maanvi can look in that dress. Awkwardness is the first step in love ..I don't know who said but yes people say that. So the journey has started lets see when they let their feeling out to each other. Again Maanvi - Madan talk threw light on the matter of all is not well between Chaudhary and Vadheras ...I guess some cold war is going on but I literally laughed when Madan emphasized on the 2 years age gap as if 20 years gap and even Maanvi felt it. But she is too innocent to understand the intricacies of people and relationship. She is still in a cocoon.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#ff0000">I m totally and madly in love with the story</font><font color="#ff00cc"> ..and this can be judged from my long comment. A long update this time and I loved it. Want faster update *runs off*</font></font>

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<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sumana</font>

Agreee with u I forgot to mention that clever boy knows she likes HIM haiii now no tension u know Diii ur story is really unique it's stating the actual life situation n main thing I adore is it's not like those typical story where boy girl takes forever to know each of them like each other!!!! So now it will be his decision to move forward or take a step back!
Putting petrol on fire instead of dropping manvi to Ria's house Y NOT take her to virat's house ... Aha that will be cool! Mayb we will get to know some hidden story behind the gurges

Awesome..! read both updates together...Virat is sweet n doesn't want to end in anything messy...which is obvious..guys are quite scared of the word ' relationship' its a new language of some of them n Waiting for next..!

AWESOME UPDATE.
PLZ .. MAKE VIRAT REALIZE HIS LOVE FOR MANVI.

i read all four parts altogether,, and just loved it.. amazing ff.. plz do send pm ti me as well.. and plz continue soon...😊

I was flying yesterday coz of Nia nd den ur nd Pari's FF made me more happy.. Awh.. update was awesome..So Virat knws Manvi likes him.. even he do.. love Karan nd Ria.. nd Protective Virat.. my fav.. I m loving the way story is moving.. Nush fab hun.. 👍🏼 Continue soon..!!!

Originally posted by: virmanhus

well couldnt give a good comment last time so planned to give something okay dis time as um THE FIRST to read & comment dis time,, yipppeee!!!!!! 😃😃

now the first thing dat striked me wen i read ur first chapter was 'reality'.. well its obvious & usually occur,, 'stalking of oher's fb profile' i adored this idea of urs... its common but poeple dont think of it,, u used it in an adorable manner, hats off to u!!

dis manvi is so original, realistic & awesome in character..

i saw a typical girl in her, a girl who wud probably think 100 times before accepting a request from a boy dat too if he's known, 1000s of questions wud crop into her,, here her excitement, questions, doubts were adorable... again such point was the way she gave alot of thoughts to answer back his message in fb,, & again she thought alot before replying his sms in chap 4... lovely!!

again i found a manvi of reality wen she thought,, "Just a little peak before I start with physics" well i cudnt stop smiling at this quote, as i saw me there,, not only me everyone does dat ryt, just a little peak but in no time it'll turn out to hours..

its true she gives an innocent picture to whoever sees her, but i bet it'll be no longer the same IF anyone reads her mind,,, dis is how i feel about her, i'll grab her thoughts & deliver dem to u, to prove my point dat she is someone who cud be compared to a girl of real world & is not daaat innocent..

"Oh Virat, if only you knew how much I stalked your profile."Manvi thought to herself.

" His name is Virat not Viraaat,"Manvi thought to herself feeling annoyed at Tina

"Aww Karan, you're not the guy I thought you were at all." Manvi thought to herself smiling alone but thought maybe she should say something thinking it might be odd that she is silently agreeing to everything which she was but they didn't need to know that.

i was laughing at many of her thoughts,, she's ofcoz innocent but there are desires in her vch she doesnt like to let out... very beautiful!!!

i feared dat karan & Ria can be negative in roles,, but u provd me wrong & made me to adore the two.. loved itt

and virat,,, he likes her but a good gentleman..

he doesnt want to hurt her, how awesome!! i loved this virat for treating manvi so well..

again her dad's speech tells dat dere's something wrong betwen manvi's dad & inder.. so vl it become a hurdle IF virat & manvi fall for each other..

such an interesting plot,, very beautiful & full of life & reality.. get going dii!!!! looking forward for another such rocking update..

hats off!!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: Faria12345

NO COMPLIAN TODAY!!!!!! Perfect length awesome updateee!!! Fell in loveee with Virat!!! He is a cool guy loves to hang out n all but know his limit... I loved the friends also Karan n Ria <3 finally working as Cupid...

I'm adoring virat he is sooo sweeet! Although don't like commitments but love ke ageee pani kam chai hai :p

N manvi dear going ga ga over him... Hope she can control herself from falling toward him untill he figures out he loved her!!!!

Vadhera Chaudhary mystery is ur high point? Planning to make them seperate???
Hmmm bad girl u r!

BUT as u know I LOVWEEE bad boys!!! Some fun is okey na make manvi Drunk ;)

Or virat!

Being cosy with other girls ahem bad boy hahaha I love the having fun dialog...

Manvi looking dex bomb huh... Control virat :p

Now update spoon n makeee Thi type of length cuz wn I read I don't wanna stop Wana ho with te flow ;) love u!!! N tahnknu for making it LONGGG