Originally posted by: Faria12345
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First n foremost, I learn this again that never take things for granted n don't assume the expected cuz world doesn't revolve according to ur terms! Y am I saying this? Cuz I thought u will never give us an intidemating scene .. But today my jaw was literary open! ROFL warning dena chahiye tHa na :p but short scene yet very sexy :p so this leaves me no choice apart from giving us the full picture! I still don't believe I'm writing this cuz I respect u as diii n it's kinda odd to ask u besharam stuff like that HOWEVER, since I'm giving u my feedback as a reader POV anything goes darling. N yes very much besharam reader I am. So u got no option baby just give it! *hides*
Ok now evil mind is satisfied but grumpy too.. Y do u make my boy sooo goood man.. It's like a precious diamond! Really hard to find! I love his way of thinking.. He didn't wanted to go above n beyond cuz that moment only will come once .. Umm well first feeling will be the best one so he didn't wanted to ruin it with fear! Hai maar dalaaa let kiss him rofl...
U know best part abt him? He knows how to control temper.. How he handled the situation was worth reading.. N I can go on n on with that..
Ok going biased with my boy? Too bad I don't pay attention to others hehehe but yah liked manvi in this chapter.. Like the inside story n how she explained it...
Dont remember who said the dialog of "if I loved u I sud har known that sumthing was wrong" mayb virat's rite? Trust, believe n honesty that's the main pillars of a relation! U break it u lose it but then broken things can be built again!! Which he is bound to do!!
LOVE Karan n VIRAT convo! U know best part abt ur story? It gives a natural touch n lures me more to read more!!! I loved Karan's answer "in 24 hrs Ive been in air thn in ground" poor boy hahah n virat's reply was natural too just love their bonding ^______^ want some more dialogs for them at the end ok?
Oh yes this dialog I love the most "losing u doesn't mean there won't be opening heart" or something u said.. I kinda got the meaning but still unsure abt it.. Enlighten me plz :p
I hate ending don't end it tch tch
U cheated! U said u r writing 4000 words so this is not even half psh tricking us... Grrr lol NEXT PART BETTER BE EXTRA LONG n fulfill the demands! Oh yah if u can thn make my boy a little bit naughty :p u won't make him evil but u can make him naughty :p
Oh forgot to mention Rahul harami bandar!!!! Want a fighting scene .. Cheesy? Eeh but love action! VIRAT better break his nose!!!
Lol editing again! EXTRA hug n thank u for the Precap ;) saves me from pulling my hair to figure out which one it is :p haha idk y but u r the only one whom I'm mixing every time :p ur fault actually.. Stop making the boys so good.. How will I differenciate ?? Lol JK! Keep writing n giving us wonderful stories like this!
"Losing me didn't stop you from opening your heart" should have been that. Sorry typo.
Wanted to say that just because he lost her didn't stop him from moving on. Since the next ones going trove the last one alot has to happen. I have to end it coz I'm getting so busy I won't have time to write and I'd rather end it than stop halfway. And besides I think this has run it's course. I'll try and meet your demands but about giving you the full picture might be a bit hard because I was feeling so strange writing that scene. And I'll try to fulfil your wish for Karan.
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