Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31

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NushIsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Faria12345
Diii Wat do u describe as long??? It wasn't LONG at all >.< lol

But it was awesome. Can sense fighting btwn chaudharies n vadhera?
Ok good that virat was a gentle man .. That Karan already planning to do bully with the freshers huh.. Lol! Hope virat comes to rescue OR make him a bad boy !! My favorite part.. Lol

Finally settling down to Delhi.. Dil walo ki nagriii.. N OMG again Harry potter... I Think u were having paro fever.. Did u?
Cu that section I was so imagining paro .. Lol crazy heads.. Hehehe

Excited for next update!!! Make me happy n give a super long one plzzz!
N wats the curfew for? Any rule to go to bed or so? Was confuse on that part..

As long as you promise not to start yawning I'll make the next one longer.

And yeah I was having Paro fever but I'm a Potter head too. :p

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

So one more brilliant and sweet update at the same time. I m in love with the flow of this story. Nothing is being exaggerated till now and that's the charm of this story. I feel now the story is opening up more as I could find some discomfort in Mr Chaudhary's voice over the mention of Vadheras so there is something that is behind curtains all these years and hidden from the Kids. The way how Maanvi welcomed her new life and her independent feeling everything described so nicely and realistically. Her thoughts about herself , her fear to meet new people and apprehensions are everything that we felt during our college days. Viraat Maanvi's meeting was nothing but Pure and Sweet yet again. Maanvi's head talks LOL ,...she speaks like an Insanely in love girl and I love it. Viraat is the cool and simple guy. I simply love this story .

Want next update ASAP ...

Love
Sumana

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Anaida

@iamanaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Cant wait for the next update. Its lovely...thanks so much...

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Anagha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Loved the update 😊 VirMan in same university eeekkks gonna be exciting😳😳I could so relate to this reserved & quiet Mannu in the story especially in this update where she is anxious abt making new friends & reluctant to go to parties.. Cud sense sum problems b/w the families...Loved VirMan's meeting😳Luking frwd to further updates😊 Pls do add me to ur PM list !!!

P.S - Can I address u as Nush Di as everyone does in FF group ??

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js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

This is just very sweet story. Love it manvi is so adorable can't wait to read more as others have said there is lot of realism here

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

nice update now both are same college
there is some thing happen btw there parent
update soon

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ParthKiBabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Unrezserved!
Just read It all in go!
First of all1 i have read this somewhere!😉
U changed the characters to Manvi and Virat! Good choice! suits them!!!😆

BTW! amazing yaaar!
the way you described how they first met!
And how her heart goes bonkers when she sees him! I am getting hyper dear! 😳
well.. I wish one ay they dont get in hostel in time and as ria said they really have to be outside all night. well just M and V1
Update jaldi! you know i dont like waiting! 😃

Edited by IAmAaru - 12 years ago

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Nush di the update was mindblowinggg... 👏😃

could sense some fight between chaudhury's and vadhera's 😃

manvi's childishness during that waking up in the morning was cute.. ❤️

virat uses a pickup line and manvi is staring at him shamelessly 😛😆

"Oh Virat, if only you knew how much I stalked your profile."Manvi thought to herself.

this line was good 😆

karan is not a good guy seems like that only 😛

update asap 😃

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archiekini

@archiekini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I just came across this story... And it has already got me hooked..

Hmmm I am sensing there is some kind of uncomfortableness between the choudaries and the vadheras.. Looks like tis is going to make the story not so hunky dory after all.. Loving it...

So maanvi and virat in the same college. naiceee... Loving the realistic feel of the story..

Do continue with Longer updates pls...:):)

Cheers..:)

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

sorry for being late nush di but caught up with all the three parts and i cherish the time when i was reading it...the main thing which we can connect is obviously mentioned by all readers before os that it seem to be quite real...the facebook profile stalking and all is what everyone has done atleast once in a while and the sweet thing is that they havnt for gotten eachother since the holidays they spent together...feel like it has a long way to go...wish you luck with your writing...❤️